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SoraNaegino1339
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Proluge to Secret Destiny
It's a starter for a story....you know...a proluge I think it's called.


It was a cold dark night. There was no sound...except for one building

holding an Anime Convention. In the building a dance was going on and everyone

was danceing to techno and anime music. And that is where we see her! The one

who has a near immpossible dream...or should I say...dreams. She is very

important to the world but doesn't know it yet. So for now we shall give her this last

night for her to live a normal life before the journey begins. Her name is Kumai

Hinameke. She is 16 with blood type A -. And this is her life, her love, and her

DESTINY.



Please tell me what you think and if I should make it in to an actually story.





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HeromanXZeroProtoman
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comment Commented on: Tue Jul 03, 2007 @ 06:15am
It's a very good - if even a bit cliche - thesis if you can expand even what you wrote into glorious detail. I tend to like extravagant writing so I can paint pictures in my head...the sign of a truly great writer. smile I can see you're trying, so keep going for it! ^_^ If you need any help with anything, I offer my experience and knowledge to your disposal.


comment Commented on: Wed Aug 22, 2007 @ 01:48am
MAKE IT MAKE IT! Buuuuut, you spelled prologue wrong.



cheriko-chan
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SoraNaegino1339
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comment Commented on: Thu Aug 23, 2007 @ 03:58am
MRAAHH!!!! I'm bad at spelling! But okay...


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