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When I am Alone
Darling
Darling friend,



Is what I have been hearing true?



You cry by yourself and no one is there to comfort you?



Darling, I kiss you.



I hug you,



I will never leave,



Never again.



Darling, from your whispers and cry,



Is what your saying true?



Has he left you alone,



Cursing his love for you?



I will be your shield,



For eternity darling, eternity.



Shed your tears with me here Lovely,



Its only me and you.



I will keep him far away,



And then you can begin to heal.



And Darling,



From the bottom of my heart,



The things I speak and the love I have for you,



Have always and forever will be true.

-Rebecca

I would love to hear(read) what you think of this one, or any other poem I have posted. You may use constuctive critisism or be negative if you wish. (But complements are always welcome smile )






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Dusty Stranger
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 11:26pm
I don't understand much about poetry, just because it isn't my thing exactly, but your poetry is really impressive. This is probably my favorite.


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