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Crest Holders
The story ZanderSilverFox and I are writing.
Crest Holders
By: Nightmare Zero and Zander

Book I
Fire and Ice

Chapter 1
The Beginning

It was a sunny day in New York City. Well as sunny as you could get in New York City, anyway this story is not for the faint of heart. It is filled with thrills and chills, amazing perils, and more villains than you can strike a saber with. Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you who I was. My name is Jack Snip, also known as Zero, Ace Maverick Hunter. I have black hair, brown eyes, and average height for an 8th grader. This is my story.

The year is 2050 and crime is out of control. People say that the city is being controlled by a group of international assasians called the dark fist; other people say that monsters that are in dark alleyways are terrorizing the city. These are only rumors. The real cause is that robots are attacking the city. I know it sounds crazy but hey, you’re reading a story about a guy who can transform into one of the most powerful things on the planet! Anyway, I know where the robots came from. But first I will tell you how I got my amazing powers.

I live in the suburbs of N.Y.C. with my Mom, Dad, and my little brother Chad. Chad (who’s only in 6th grade) has blond hair, blue eyes, (kind of like the vision of Hitler's perfect child) and averagely tall for a 6th grade kid. One day Chad and I were outside playing when we heard an explosion from the old, abandoned factory just outside of town. So naturally we went to see what happened. When we got there we heard a voice from inside so we went in. It was Dr. Albert Wily, the town professor or nutcase, as some people in the town like to call him.

“I’ve done it! I’ve done it!” screamed the professor excitedly. “I’ve done it! With this I can rule the world! Hah Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!” “He is crazy!” I said to my brother. “Gee, go figure.” Chad said sarcastically.

So we decided to leave him alone so he wouldn’t catch us but we came back later that evening. “I wonder what he created?” I said to Chad, “Who knows?” Said Chad, “Maybe it’s just a fluke.” “Yeah, right.” I said to myself. So we went to the front door but it was locked. “So now what do we do?” My brother said to me unenthusiastically, so I looked around until…“The window!” I exclaimed, my brother looked up and saw the open window. “Oh, alright let’s go!” So we climbed onto the windowsill and peered into the building.

I t was dark, large, and dusty in that factory; so old that nobody would think that something was going on here. So we jumped down from the windowsill into the factory. “Let’s split up.” I whispered, “We can cover more ground that way.” “Great thinking o fearless leader.” My brother said sarcastically. “Shut up.” I said back to my brother. So we did eventually split up. He took the left, I took the right. So we searched, and searched, and searched but they found nothing of importance. But then I saw a bright glow coming from a box the size of a small medal case so I called my brother over there to check it out. “I wonder what’s inside” My brother said curiously. Well I wondered too so I opened the box. It was beautiful! Three crests, each with a different insignia, one red with a Z on it on the right, one blue with an X on it on the left, and one black with a pentagram on it in the center. We marveled at the three shining crests for quite a while until my brother said, “Should we each touch one?” I was thinking the exact same thing at this point so I said, “Why not.” So I touched the one on the right and Chad touched the one on the left. And suddenly two bright flashes illuminated the building.



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  • User Comments: [11]
    x_sas_x6
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    Sun Aug 19, 2007 @ 02:43pm


    cool surprised


    crow_gc
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    Sun Aug 19, 2007 @ 02:48pm


    good story so far for a beginner,


    zombie-girl-san
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    Sun Aug 19, 2007 @ 10:21pm


    awesome xD


    Malignant Narcissism
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    Wed Aug 22, 2007 @ 03:14am


    a very interesting sounding story. I enjoy the voice you use as well. good luck.


    Lollibot223
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    Thu Aug 23, 2007 @ 03:13am


    sweet story^^ ur pretty gud.


    Silver-Card
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    Mon Sep 10, 2007 @ 04:15am


    Very nice it is shweet!


    Cein Suki
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    Mon Sep 10, 2007 @ 08:48pm


    interesting ^^


    MLion
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    Mon Sep 10, 2007 @ 09:54pm


    can't wait to read more....was getting REALLY interesting...good use of words too!...


    *~nikki & bruno~*
    Zackenelixir
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    Mon Sep 17, 2007 @ 09:39am


    I'm Zackenelixir, the crest' friend.
    I'm working on the comics of this story..
    If you want me to make you new comic stip drawings just PM me guys..
    To mr. Crest Holder!! don't be bothered man!
    I am now working on this project..
    I hope you're truthful to our deal..
    I am spending money for this project..
    I bought the latest Paint Shop Pro software
    for the graphic that I will make..
    Hope this deal is good.. biggrin


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    Jeo-Chan
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    Sat Sep 22, 2007 @ 03:16pm


    That was pretty cool. I really liked it. So now you gotta get the next chapter up!


    _purplefishh
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    Mon Apr 07, 2008 @ 01:49pm


    Hey, nice story. Are you gonna post your 2nd chapter? Lol.


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