heart twisted CHAPTER TWO: THE MYSTERY MAN
DEAR DIARY! "I decided to go to the movies!"I yelled to my mother. As I was walking alone I thought about what I would do.When I opened the door to the mall I looked around it was dull every thing was pink, and blue it gave me the creeps when I was looking around when all of a sudden a long wiry man jumped out at me, and he said in a low raspy hoarse voice get out daughter
of isabella godess of sight and knowlage, you are in danger as long as you are here."
"who are you! why am I in danger!answer me!"
"I am your guardian sent from heaven to protect you and reanite you and the commanding seven." he replied right as the floor began to shake someone screamed as the baby stroller rolled away directly at me. when out of the blue noticed everything was coming at me without knowing what I was doing I yelled "EVERYTHINGFREEZE!", and scary thing is it did so I ran my heart pounding in my chest I had to get away but everything was in pause except me diary I dont know why but I cant explain this can you?
hey it's been five days since that dreadful day time is going on so I must live on. Darn i'm going insane. For a while since that time just stands still
oh if i emailed u then please read all of my stories
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Just need to fix up some typos and things
and maybe figure out the meaning of the story in the first place
I mean, what are you trying to get across?
ya, sorry, you're asking an AP english student to read this... sweatdrop