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 Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 4:38 am
This is my Rp character (well His Animal form)
Name:Koji ( Spick thats him there)
Age 15
His Background sad Human) He is quiet but when transfromed in his animal form hes as hyper as can be.When human he doent do much Except Study and doens't talk much he's also very collective.
(Animal) Never stops talking,Untill asleep or got the crap beat out of him and will accept any challenge.
At Birth hes was injected with beastforming virus. His whole clan was also beastformer. Since he was a baby they thought that he could do much possible things. They did it in the Underground lab at the Cheif's Hut. Thus
He being able to transfrom into Spick.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:12 am
Write in complete and correct sentences. That would help. biggrin
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 1:51 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 11:35 pm
Euphoric Ghost Write in complete and correct sentences. That would help. biggrin Like he said before me, it would help us aka the readers, understand the point you're trying to make. Not to mention a little more detail than 'This is him and this is how he acts' would make this character stand out a bit more. But I don't believe this would be a start, it's more like a quickly jotted down idea that if elaborated would be quite nifty indeed. How did he get his animal form? BTW, when I saw the sonic picture I LOL'D so hard man, that's great.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:58 pm
he was injected with a Virus at biirth
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 2:18 pm
check me out i am syorana
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:00 pm
Wulfy07 he was injected with a Virus at biirth Who did it? Why did they do it? Where did they do it? What kind of Virus? Answer those questions in detail and it won't seem as much of a Mary-Sue add on...
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 1:46 am
ok in the order u asked...
His Parents and an clan of Beast fighters
they did it because at birth so he could be one of them as his parents were
They did it in the Cheif of the clans Underground Lab
The virus was a beastforming Virus so he could be a beast fighter too
they are ur questions asked In Order
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 1:55 am
Euphoric Ghost Write in complete and correct sentences. That would help. biggrin is this better
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:24 am
as i sed any can psot anything
Bump
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:54 am
*Shakes post* Detail? Hello?!?
And that pixel art is terrible. Don't use Sonic characters for OC, unless they're in a sonic rp.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 3:37 am
DUDE! Freaking nice pic of sonic, but the rest needs work...
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:22 pm
Orgasmic Gemini *Shakes post* Detail? Hello?!? And that pixel art is terrible. Don't use Sonic characters for OC, unless they're in a sonic rp. Exuce me is it ur Rp charachter No dont think so so y dont u Buzz off and tell it to sum other person
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:49 pm
Wulfy07 Orgasmic Gemini *Shakes post* Detail? Hello?!? And that pixel art is terrible. Don't use Sonic characters for OC, unless they're in a sonic rp. Exuce me is it ur Rp charachter No dont think so so y dont u Buzz off and tell it to sum other person You're the on crossing the line... Didn't you yourself say that anyone could say anything? Besides.... I have to agree with him on both counts, detail and picture.
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