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 Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 11:20 am
((I don't think I ever did this... if I did, apologies))
Player Name
Tau Cobalt
Player's Controller
aphroditia
Roleplays Touched
Mental: The Reawakening
Allies
None
Occupation
She did work in a bar...
Purpose/Personal Objectives
None yet.
Previous Accomplishments
Uh...college?
Physical Description
Tau is about 5'6", a nice olive complextion. Her ear right ear is pierced all the way around the lobe, 15 earrings in all and a simple, jade stud in her right nostril. Left hand: ten rings, five below the knuckles, five above. (elaborations later?) She keeps her fingernails short and polish-free
Her eyes are a very dark and hard black-green, almond shaped - a definite exotic flare to them. She usually lines her eyes with purple glittern and black shadow. That's all the make-up she wears. Her cheekbones aren't high, but they aren't set low on her face either. They're defined - like her brow bone. A nice soft line but nonetheless a line. Her nose has been broken three times - almost directly between her eyes, at the bridge, and right above the nostrils. That bottom piece set a bit crooked when it healed.
Her hair has seen many dyings - and currently it is a very odd shade of maroon with mahogany lowlights and orange highlights. It's cropped short around her face - almost boyish. Somedays she spikes it, others she slicks it back. It really all depends on her mood.
Magical Description
Well...she doesn't consider it too "magical", but she does suffer from Kleptomania. She's a damn good thief, too...but it doesn't make sense. Why would that land her in such a high-security, top-notch insane asylum?
Statistics
Uh...what? She doesn't have any yet.
Items
None
Location
Subania, Floor 3
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:24 am
15 earrings on one ear? eek
Yes please elaborate with the rings. XD
"Her cheekbones aren't high, but they aren't set low on her face either." Haha...I guess you could just remove it since her cheeks are at a "normal" place on the face.
"They're defined - like her brow bone. A nice soft line but nonetheless a line." Describe it a bit more to show how it's defined.
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 6:23 pm
Wonderful description on her facial features.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:12 am
Err....there's no personality description, just how she looks. You put a lot of thought into her image, but looks alone can't make a character. You need to add some background and some personality to make her sparkle hun, in my opinion at least.
And I don't believe there's much more to describing a eyebrow line, so I wouldn't pay much attention to the reviewer above who seems unable to imaging this characters eyebrow when it's perfectly defined in the description above.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:59 pm
Thanks for the con/crit guys. Yeah, I'm aware of the hole about her personality. I've yet to write it out. It's coming though! Promise. =)
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