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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:57 am
It's exactly what it says: Collaboration and Ideas. Wow, imagine that.
Why is this here? Well, it's main purpose is for you-the writers-to be able to present your ideas for, whatever, and go through constructive criticism. For Collaboration, some people think having two writer's thinking on one idea is better than one deciding everything.
So you come here, you get your ideas judged/helped, or you come here and ask if anyone wants to do a writing collaboration. This is basically the start for forming your..book, comic, what have you. Just a few Rules, if you could call them that:
-No Spamming[Obviously] -Don't get angry if someone says your idea needs a lot of work this is here for constructive criticism. -Be nice, no "Wow, Ur idea suxx butt!"-For one, it's rude. Secondly, If you don't have anything nice to say, then I might just have to punch you in the kneecaps.
That's it! Have fun, kiddies!
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:16 pm
Oooh, Oooh! I have something! Just, umm, where did it go? I know I had it around here someplace, but now it seems to have disappeared. While I go looking for it I shall leave a reservation and be back shortly. Found it, now mind you, this isn't even a day old, so there are things that have not been decided... And I'm not sure how I should format this... Characters Subject to Change Haiden Johanson: Protagonist -Eccentric son of a Bibliophile and CEO of International Corp. -Has had a crush on Jace since sixth grade -attends Theodore Roosevelt High Thomas Johanson: Protagonist's Father -CEO of Wealthy Company (need help with name and what it does) Rhianna Johanson: Protagonist's Mother -Avid Collector and Reader of Books (no matter the genre) Jace Somers: Protagonist's Best Friend -Been in Haiden's classes since 4th Grade -Often jokes about him liking her, oblivious to his feelings (Working on any antagonists and other characters with relations to Haiden) Plot Details -bought a outfit 2 yrs prior made up of a jacket and cargo pants with chains traveling the length of the legs along the back, and the arms, and from each link of the chain hangs an individual key -visits local library which is slated for destruction in an effort to save some of the books for his mother -finds a storage room filled with untitled books, each locked shot by a metal clasp, the sizes of the books vary -In the center of the room, he finds a large book, large enough to hold the contents of all other books in the room, and then some Now to answer some questions that may come up... (Basically fill in other plot details) 1. Yes, different keys on th chains open the locks on the different books 2. No, the outfit itself has no other virtue other than holding the keys 3. Each book contains a story that takes place in the continent of Mylnyr, each story may have different subject matter, whether it follows the events of a major war, details the life of a farmer, or explores the continents landscape. That's all I have for now, still working on whether or not, when he opens the book if he is truely sucked into the story, disappearing from the world for a period of time, or if its all in his mind, and the events he believes takes place when he opens the books are simply the results of his imagination whilst in a coma, induced by something or other...
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:56 pm
See, now something here reminds me of the old move.. "The Pagemaster"
Seeing as you literally just came up with the idea I'll just wait. 'Sides getting more posts will help coax others into the forum. More people posting is what's needed, yup yup yup!
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:01 pm
Pagemaster...?
Oh! That, I haven't seen that in god knows how long, but meh, I guess one could see some similarities, though there is no crazy librarian in this one...
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:24 pm
I know right! xd
OR annoying child protagonist, or talking books with glasses, or badly animated characters. The list goes on.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:00 pm
Nope. 3nodding
Yeah... Now, the Book commands that it be a trilogy... Though I'm not sure that i could possibly do that...
1st one for his first adventure
2nd one for his indecision concerning the stories
3rd his resolve to finish the story
Meh, So much details to fill in, how the hell do they do it?
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:37 pm
I know how Disney does it! They buy every good story from original authors, then mar it horribly by adding small, furry, talking animals and 'adorable' children or children-figures[i.e. 7 dwarves in Snow White]. Then they add something called a moral to the badly represented story, then fill it with cutesy-wutesy scenes and bad sing-a-long songs. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:38 pm
Eh, I'm not talking about Disney, I'm thinking more Holly Black, or Eoin Colfer...
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:41 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:44 pm
Well, what I said was the truth.
I would rather learn from those two than a company of people whose quality is sporadic at best...
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 7:51 pm
Oh thank god I need help for a comic book/rp I'm hoping to create. I want to do the comic but when I'm gonna find the time to illustrate it and ink it and photoshop it while in school is beyond me, so I'm thinking I may just use it as an RP for now and then base the comic off the RP when I have time to have a life. ><.
Okay so now let me go find the basic outline.
Well the title is Heaven's Gene, it's set a few centuries in the future when religion has become more of a cult concept and science is heavily valued (I'll go into why later on if people actually respond to this). And what happens is a few years ago a couple people hitting the final stages of puberty started to grow wings and with that pick up minor powers, not like they sprout over night or it's common or anything, it takes several months, I have all the stages and facts about the wings written down some where but that will come later as well. Anyways religious groups start to rise up and claim it's proof of god and scientific groups are trying to prove it's evolution so the entire plot is based on various aspects of the arguements of religion vs. science. In the center are two teenage roommates who both just happen to have grown wings, one is a flamboyant fem nerd, who thinks that with the wings and the minor powers they have they should be super heros! And his room mate is your ultimate anti-heroine. She wants nothing to do with the idea but gets dragged along for the ride.
The religious groups claim that the wings come from a passage in the bible claiming that angels and fallen angels came down to earth and procreated with humans. They say that the decendants of those humans at the ones growing wings. They use the fact that there are two basic types of wings, feathered wings and bat wings as proof of this and believe that people with bat wings are in fact the decendants of fallen angels and are evil, and need to be exterminated. It goes into good and evil and are we born that way, do we have free will, is goodness determined by the way people perceive us or by what we do?
Then there's the scientific side and I go into a LOT of quantum physics to explain the whole wings and super power process, because I'm scary like that and have actually thought up a reasonable sounding scientific theory for magic. Most people with wings don't exactly volunteer for experimentation so there are some scientists who go out and collect them.
So yeah if someone's interested in helping me out I'd love some comments about the main concepts. Let me know if you want to know the details.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 12:51 pm
Sprouting wings, religious fanatics, sounds interesting enough. Though when you say in the center of it, there are two teenagers, one of which wants to become a "Super hero" kind of draws away from what you wrote about everywhere else in the outline. Do they support the evolution theory or are they on the side of religion? Throwing them into the mix seems to take away from what the rest of the story is about unless you decide to sway them to one side or the other. If you do that, that would add a little spice and a more personal look to it, being able to see what certain individuals take to being thrown into the mix. As an rp though I think it would be interesting as well, letting people take one side or the other and the problems that always occur when fanatics who believe they are right decide to get militant.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:54 pm
takayuma_ryu Sprouting wings, religious fanatics, sounds interesting enough. Though when you say in the center of it, there are two teenagers, one of which wants to become a "Super hero" kind of draws away from what you wrote about everywhere else in the outline. Do they support the evolution theory or are they on the side of religion? Throwing them into the mix seems to take away from what the rest of the story is about unless you decide to sway them to one side or the other. If you do that, that would add a little spice and a more personal look to it, being able to see what certain individuals take to being thrown into the mix. As an rp though I think it would be interesting as well, letting people take one side or the other and the problems that always occur when fanatics who believe they are right decide to get militant. Well having them chose a side is part of it, for the first arc they'd be recruited on the religious side. Tasked with finding angels to protect them, and hunting down the fallen. Which would enevitably divide them and I'd be using their personal beliefs to move the plot along but also get more indepth as to the ups and downs of each side and explore the issues on a more personal level. I want to delve into both sides, and despite having a bias for science myself I do want to show that science can be just as fanatical. As for the rp I really would like to see how others would interpret that kind of senario. If I could get some really good rpers it would be interesting to play along and see where they'd take it.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 3:16 pm
Lady Aeval takayuma_ryu Sprouting wings, religious fanatics, sounds interesting enough. Though when you say in the center of it, there are two teenagers, one of which wants to become a "Super hero" kind of draws away from what you wrote about everywhere else in the outline. Do they support the evolution theory or are they on the side of religion? Throwing them into the mix seems to take away from what the rest of the story is about unless you decide to sway them to one side or the other. If you do that, that would add a little spice and a more personal look to it, being able to see what certain individuals take to being thrown into the mix. As an rp though I think it would be interesting as well, letting people take one side or the other and the problems that always occur when fanatics who believe they are right decide to get militant. Well having them chose a side is part of it, for the first arc they'd be recruited on the religious side. Tasked with finding angels to protect them, and hunting down the fallen. Which would enevitably divide them and I'd be using their personal beliefs to move the plot along but also get more indepth as to the ups and downs of each side and explore the issues on a more personal level. I want to delve into both sides, and despite having a bias for science myself I do want to show that science can be just as fanatical. As for the rp I really would like to see how others would interpret that kind of senario. If I could get some really good rpers it would be interesting to play along and see where they'd take it. Well, it does seem to have potential then. I think it might be good twist if after the lines are drawn between which side the main characters were on, if just one of them went the other way. As for science being able to have fanatics, that would be great because a lot of people fail to realize that with every belief that there is, there will be those who get fanatical about it. I also wouldn't mind trying it as an rp with your consent or with you and some others. Just might be able to see how good it can become. Another note though. Catholics and protestants have outlandish differences when it comes to believing in God. So would there be a distinction or is everyone just under one world religion? Maybe thats a little too deep for a comic and such, but might make for a decent book. Just a thought though.
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:36 pm
takayuma_ryu Lady Aeval takayuma_ryu Sprouting wings, religious fanatics, sounds interesting enough. Though when you say in the center of it, there are two teenagers, one of which wants to become a "Super hero" kind of draws away from what you wrote about everywhere else in the outline. Do they support the evolution theory or are they on the side of religion? Throwing them into the mix seems to take away from what the rest of the story is about unless you decide to sway them to one side or the other. If you do that, that would add a little spice and a more personal look to it, being able to see what certain individuals take to being thrown into the mix. As an rp though I think it would be interesting as well, letting people take one side or the other and the problems that always occur when fanatics who believe they are right decide to get militant. Well having them chose a side is part of it, for the first arc they'd be recruited on the religious side. Tasked with finding angels to protect them, and hunting down the fallen. Which would enevitably divide them and I'd be using their personal beliefs to move the plot along but also get more indepth as to the ups and downs of each side and explore the issues on a more personal level. I want to delve into both sides, and despite having a bias for science myself I do want to show that science can be just as fanatical. As for the rp I really would like to see how others would interpret that kind of senario. If I could get some really good rpers it would be interesting to play along and see where they'd take it. Well, it does seem to have potential then. I think it might be good twist if after the lines are drawn between which side the main characters were on, if just one of them went the other way. As for science being able to have fanatics, that would be great because a lot of people fail to realize that with every belief that there is, there will be those who get fanatical about it. I also wouldn't mind trying it as an rp with your consent or with you and some others. Just might be able to see how good it can become. Another note though. Catholics and protestants have outlandish differences when it comes to believing in God. So would there be a distinction or is everyone just under one world religion? Maybe thats a little too deep for a comic and such, but might make for a decent book. Just a thought though. Well in terms of the RP I'd love to create it myself but I'm being rather lazy about the lay out. I wouldn't mind some help with it though since I've never created an RP before. As for the difference between religions, this is set a few hundred years in the future, and while there will be similarities between the religions in the plot line and today's religions I'll be altering them to fit with the setting details. Essentially I don't want to have religious soccer moms chasing me down for putting ideas into their kids heads. sweatdrop I might start to focus on religious sects as the comic goes on, so that there's a mix of beliefs but I think while I'm setting up the plot I'd stick with a general concept. For the rp I'd allow as much freedom as people like for creating religious groups, so long as it was run by me first. I've got a lot of detail put into this so I'd want at least some well thought out concepts if people were gonna go with it, just so that I can explain it to anyone who does have questions....
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