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 Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 5:13 pm
*Nicole was sitting in a small cafe in the southern part of town, watching the people passing by her as she sipped her black coffee absently. Sighing to herself, she looked at the revolving fan on the low ceiling. As she noticed, she wondering what would happen if a tall person happens to walk into this very cafe.* "He'd probably be butchered, of course... To be perfectly blunt."
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:48 am
*Yuki walked into the cafe.*"I wonder when the sun will raise tomorrow. I don't know how much more time I have left."*she walked up to the counter and asked for a 20oz bottle of water. She sat down and poored a powder into the water. The watter turned thick and red.*"What would I do without powdered blood."
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:23 am
Admittedly, the title you provided aroused my attention, but I think you should've created maybe a simple plot line. Or maybe just a profile skeleton to let fellow RP'ers now some basic information about your character.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:03 pm
I do agree with you, Kara Wu Zun. There should be a basic plot, and a skeleton to let us see what the characters are like, and to make our own for others to see. This is why it got put in the beginner's level. No design at all.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 7:19 pm
Ah, you're right, I believe that's why one's posting.
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