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La Pixie

PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 8:24 pm


Okay, so I had this really weird dream and I wanted to write a storybookseries about it, so here is the main Idea ((The dream)):

I was orphaned and left in this strange town where a woman in a onion shaped house took me in. She had 5 children ((3 boys and 2 girls)) and totaly made her house feel like home. The town was very strange, out in the middle of a forest, everything was dark and damp, the sky was never clear... that sort of thing. The town also lost most of its rabbits in a sickness. I had attached myself to her and the oldest boy, he was my age and it was very easy to hang out with him. The mother was making dinner and we began to talk. She said she was a woman of change and when ever she felt threatened she would "pull up her roots and move." I laughed because I didn't realize she was serious, her onion shape home could litteraly pull up its roots and walk away, roots that I thought were from trees that they had cut down. The mother had this beautiful garden, full of plants and vines and flowers...the whole bit. At the entrace of the garden she had the angel gate with huge wings that looked like they would scoop you up and hold you in safety. The wings and angel split into and opened into the garden. The mother and children hated the father, everytime he came to see the littlest girl they would hide. So one day he came by and walked into the house. Mother had dressed up as the angel from the gate and we stood into front of her. When he walked in we ran and screamed "Mothers garden has gone mad!" We pushed him out of the house and he found out it was her. They began to have a talk and it started to rain. The rain was odd, parts of dead rabbits filled the sky and showered down on us. The oldest boy ran out into the street and I chased after him. We began to walk next door to check on the elderly neighbor. The youngest girl stopped us and told us not to bother her because she was making wine. The parents fought on as we walked back up to the house. Caught in the roots of the house was a rabbit, it dead eyes stared up at me...

I woke up in a cold sweat as daylight pored into my room, and that was the dream. I have some ******** up dreams...but not one as bad as this...


So I need your help! Here are something I need:
The name of a made up place
Name of town: Elysiavin
The name for the characters
Main Character: Sybil Vox
Oldest ((boy)) razz ax Brair
Second Oldest ((girl)): Dalia Brair
Third oldest ((Boys, twins)): Adare and Aden Brair
Yongest ((Girl)): Adrianne Brair
Mother: Blare Brair ((AKA Blare Aric))
Father: Samael-Seth Brair
Neighbor ((Old lady)): Maeva Stravoc
The name of the Illness that kills the rabbits
Name: Valdis-Libitina
A better name for the book!
Offical name: Morana- The wire rabbit

Do you accept your mission?
PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:20 pm


Whoa...I hope this isn't supposed to be a children's story...It would freak me out if I was a kid.

But anyway, I don't know what to tell you on names, because I don't think me (or anyone else) naming your stuff is a good idea. I don't know what you want it to be, if you know what I mean...

Just play around with names...For characters, I'd start with just some names you like. Or, open up a baby name book and look for some names that catch your eye. That's how I've gotten a lot of character names.

As for places...I'm really bad at naming places, to tell you the truth.

Spastic waffles
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La Pixie

PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:40 pm


I know! When I had the dream I woke up in a cold sweat.

I tried that but the names always turn out to be names of people I know...and they get miffed...

Well, thanks anyway. ^-^
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