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 Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 7:16 pm
I feel like writin', but I don't know what quite yet. So whatever comes out below this line was thought up on the spot.
The pace she set for me ain't easy,
Since, before, I took things slow.
Now I grow so tired and queasy,
Givin' up the times that pleased me.
Each day I think I'm gettin' better,
Even if it's not a lot.
I watch each word down to the letter,
Tryin' hard to not upset her.
And yet she never seems to gladden
And her moods keep gettin' worse.
The tone she uses tends to madden
While my hopes and feelin's sadden.
So now I sit here so confused.
Where was it I went wrong?
At least back then she was amused.
When was it that she got abused?
I lost the spark halfway through, so I just made up some stuff that rhymed.
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:00 am
She ain't into wine & roses
Beer just makes her turn up her nose
And, she can't stand the thought of sippin' champagne
No Cuervo Gold Margaritas
Just ain't enough good burn in tequila
[♥]
Aweuh D=
for some reason that made me think you were writing about Chez.
sweatdrop
[♥] She needs somethin' with a little more edge and a little more pain
She's my little whiskey Girl
She's my little whiskey Girl
My Ragged-on-the-edges girl
Ah, but I like 'em rough
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:24 am
Well, it partially is, but I had to make up stuff near the end so it would rhyme, so it's not the truth.
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:29 pm
i liked the poem, but i got a little worried that it was about chez and it was all true until it declared it wasn't in the poll sweatdrop
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-RandomRadRainbows- Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:41 pm
Sorries, should have made it more clear.
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