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 Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:53 am
Gaian Name: Silvershadowhero
Name: Silver Leinhert
Personality: Hyper (in some situations such as being bored, with some
freinds and in some awkward times),cool,easy going,friendly,
sometimes harsh, and shy around girls he likes.
Biography: His parents are split up and he's been moving to
different schools since 5th grade. Silva tends to get very cautious when people ask
him questions that he thinks is personal. He is also part Elf.
Crush: none so far since he just transfered to the school.
Sexuality: Straight
Appearance: 5'8",light brown skin and ok in the looks department, with spikey hair,
and gray eyes, and a some what athletic looking body.
Age: 18
Race: Human-Elf hybrid
Other: He likes to draw even though he isn't very talented at it, writes
poems, and likes football. A pretty smart fellow when
he feels the need and plays video games when he wants to make sure
he thinks in a fun way, and also to stay smart ( he thinks it helps to play games).
Suggestions??
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:41 pm
I think you should be more descriptive in the history part. How exactly did his parents meet in the first place? Why did they divorce? Mentioning he's half-elf gives much to the imagination, but little in the terms of details.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:09 am
Tyjora I think you should be more descriptive in the history part. How exactly did his parents meet in the first place? Why did they divorce? Mentioning he's half-elf gives much to the imagination, but little in the terms of details. ok thnx.
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