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PostPosted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 12:23 pm


arrow Amy is my other side... well
She was...


I look in the silver mirror
To see what I've become
A monster
Something that can't be undone

I made a promise
Even though I still love you
But the moster inside of me
Is telling me what to do

She tells me how to act
She tells me how to eat
She tells me how to think
and even how I'm suposed to speak

I try to silence her
to say I'm in control
But she doesn't listen
and she takes over my soul

It stared out as a whisper
When I fell into a slumber
Like it was the wind in my ear
telling me I couldn't be any dumber

Now she's taking over
I'm no longer me
People thought they knew
But now they're like "Who is she?"

A question I can't answer
But one I find myself wondering
As the rain pours down
And it starts thundering

She laughs at it all
Says I've had a pethedic life
Says for me to watch and learn
As she plays with the long knife

The first cut brings me back
The second is to make sure
The thrid is so deep
I know I've gotten rid of her

It meant loosing myself
Only for a little while
with the pouring crimson blood
Staining mommy's white bathroom tile...
PostPosted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:03 pm


I thought that was a really really good poem! I really liked how you described the "monster." How it just started one night and then it had total control. Great job!

cool_cait


luna_luv_manga

PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:22 pm


that was beutiful! crying it really did make me cry! each of us have a monster, an "Amy" inside ourself. it was sad that the monster took over compleatly, but i suppose that happens to lots of people.
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