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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 5:30 am

i am writing a book at this moment, and it is mostly about things that are unexpected, hapening regularly. for example, i have a carnivor(person) who hates vegitarians because he belives they have feelings to (and did you know that most of the time when you eat plants... they are still alive!). but i wanted to make a gay/les or both couple in the book, and i wanted them to be difrent along these lines, any sugjestions?

Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:38 pm

Erm, that makes no sense to me...
You want to write a book about a person who hates vegitarians, because vegitables have feelings too...? And you want to have a couple of lovers that are homos and lesbians?
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Well, good luck on that book. =S
I mean, that sort of knowledge about a person is usually just part of the personality, not the main story. Like I said, good luck though. ;D

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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 3:27 pm

he is just one of the characters, the book is suposed to make people think. the carnivor thing was just suposed to poke fun at the idea. and that has nothing to do with the actual storyline. anyway, i posted this on a yari form because i wanted some ideas for a lesbian, bi or homosexual pairing.

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:18 pm

Ah, well... It's called a vegan. They're someone who doesn't eat a lot because they feel plants also have feelings.
And the couples thing.... I don't know how much I could help. =|

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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 9:55 pm

I went into a vegan shop with a friend and it smelled naaasty... T.T
I felt as if I should have brought in a nice greasy heart stopping burger and put a piece in each of the foods they had in their buffet. whee

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:32 am

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Ah, well... It's called a vegan. They're someone who doesn't eat a lot because they feel plants also have feelings.
And the couples thing.... I don't know how much I could help. =|

well, i just want sugjestions on things like what you would want to read about, the couple arnt very major characters. but i want to have a place to start developing characters. that and i have gotten writers block and ran out of imagenation for now. so i thought i should ask for ideas here.

please tell me some thoghts, i want a paring that goes against most staryotypes, like the carnivor thing. another character can tell the futer, but he is the least smart person in the book. i have no idea how to make this into the irony/break the norm kind off thing i have been doing.

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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:39 am

1. You're awful, Wolfie. D<

And skipping over 2. to 3. What is your main topic? Like what does the story have to do with...?

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:56 am

this is the prologe
wait, this is three pages long, would that be spam?

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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 5:34 pm

Your idea could be made into a really good story if you try hard enough. It depends though. You have to be a GREAT writer. Not insulting or anything.

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 7:50 pm

i am at page 104 and planing sequel.

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