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 Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 9:06 am
Masks
Is this me?
The thought rings in my head.
I grasp the edge of the mask
and struggle with all my might.
With a sickening snap
it falls to the ground and shatters.
One more down
how many more to go?
When will I find the real me?
I see others wear them proudly.
Too afraid to be themselves.
Too afraid to change
and peel away the masks.
Every day another down,
every day they hate me more.
I often wonder though
is the real me something I want?
What if he's horrible?
But then I remember
the masks need to go.
Look what it's done to them.
Love,
Fox Makenshi
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 12:03 pm
I really like this one because it reminds me of myself and how people are in general. Nice.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:34 pm
i like it. it reminds me of a poem i wrote in english about who i was and who i had to act like around my family...
lets just say i went to the councellor for that one.
your's is very good.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 6:04 pm
Thats amazing. And its so true. You are a very good poet sir.
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WeCanLiveLikeJackAndSally
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