This is a preview of a story I'm working on. Basically, it takes place in the future where all intelligent, literate, and even slightly above average people are persecuted and captured for the sake of the world to be "saved", as the Earth's supplies and lifestyle is diminishing. But as the main character, Dameon finds out, there is more than meets the eye as she races against the clock to find out who is truly behind all of the injustice in the world...

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Here's a link to it; it may be too long. sweatdrop

http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/?mode=view&post_id=9674615

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Please tell me whether I should continue, or anything else that you may think.
Comments and constructive criticism is appreciated. Oh, yes. Please remember this is merely a rough draft.