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About my last story: O.K. so my last story was not so good. Apparently the detail about the house was good enough, but the detail about the character's were not. And alos it seemed a bit more rushed. Plus, everything was rushed. Which brings me to realize something. I now remember watching something called Scariest Movie Moments. Well, one part of it was this guy saying that there is two types of horror movies, the type that adds suspense, builds up tension, and the like, and the type that's just one murder after anouther with no suspense. So let's see what I can come up with. Here goes....

It was halloween night. That meant one thing each for James, Lily, Sara, Steave, and Billy. For Steave, it meant party time. He was a party animal. For James, it meant getting to dress like a lunatic who thought he was psycopathic doctor and no one would think him crazy. For Lily, it meant getting to dress like a slutty witch, and the old people would give her not the slightest amount of trouble. For Sara it meant nothing more than having a good time, and for Billy it meant having the chance to go inside that old house that was about to be demolished. There were plenty of rumors about it, and Bily, loved proving rumors- alonge with just about everything else- false. One such rumor was that a man there was abusive to his wife and kids, and finally the wife ended up killing him, their two kids, their cat, and their dog.

(I'll get back to this story later)

yeh its not like the cat and dog couldve done anything wrong but anyway how does the rest of the story go???