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To sleep, perchance to dream: ay, there's the rub
  For in that sleep of death what dreams may come
  When we have shuffled off this mortal coil, must give us pause
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:41 pm


There's the respect that makes calamity of so long life

Ima enter again in the arena as the personification of William Wordsworth's poem "To A Butterfly"


But it needs more tweeking to make it more childish and light any suggestions?


I'VE watched you now a full half-hour;
Self-poised upon that yellow flower
And, little Butterfly! indeed
I know not if you sleep or feed.
How motionless!--not frozen seas
More motionless! and then
What joy awaits you, when the breeze
Hath found you out among the trees,
And calls you forth again!

This plot of orchard-ground is ours;
My trees they are, my Sister's flowers;
Here rest your wings when they are weary;
Here lodge as in a sanctuary!
Come often to us, fear no wrong;
Sit near us on the bough!
We'll talk of sunshine and of song,
And summer days, when we were young;
Sweet childish days, that were as long
As twenty days are now.


STAY near me--do not take thy flight!
A little longer stay in sight!
Much converse do I find in thee,
Historian of my infancy!
Float near me; do not yet depart!
Dead times revive in thee:
Thou bring'st, gay creature as thou art!
A solemn image to my heart,
My father's family!
Oh! pleasant, pleasant were the days,
The time, when, in our childish plays,
My sister Emmeline and I
Together chased the butterfly!
A very hunter did I rush
Upon the prey:--with leaps and springs
I followed on from brake to bush;
But she, God love her, feared to brush
The dust from off its wings.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:51 pm


Try throwing in another color to make it seem "brighter and childish", y'know? It's the only thing I can think of. >.>

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