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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:17 pm


Welcome to the profiling class!

This is the class where you will learn the basics of creating a balanced and realistic character profile. Yes it's easy, but some people will need some help and that's what I'm here for.

Hmm.. Where to start. Well I guess I'll start with your ability to make a profile realistic.

Here you will make a profile, using the form below, for your RPC for this school. Which means you will be making a student character.


Student Application Form

Miss Holly
Character Name:
Age:
Sex:
Description: [What does your character look like?]
Personality: [Big points here, be careful!]
History: [Big points here as well, be careful!]
Likes:
Dislikes:
Clothing: [Yep, there's even a place to describe what your character wears!]
Strengths: [Let's go with classes in the School thread. Which classes do you do well in?]
Weaknesses: [Let's go with classes in the School thread. Which classes do you need help in?]


Remember to be creative, but don't go too overboard!


The Grading System!

Alright this is where I'll explain my method with a little example!


Example
Character Name: Bailey Black
Age: 14
Sex: Female
Description: Bailey is a small girl. She's 4 feet an 11 inches and weighs a mere 84 pounds. She has shoulder length, dirty blonde hair and hazel eyes. Her skin is slightly tanned and when she smiles people's hearts melt. She's as cute as a button. [Very nice ^_^]
Personality: Bailey is happy all of the time, always finding the best in everything. She likes to make people happy and is very talkative. She's always loud, but can be quiet at times. [Too sketchy, please fix!] You can always see joy in those hazel eyes of hers.
History: Bailey has just started in the L.O.L. school, and she's very excited about her stay. She's had a rough past with friends, and that's the reason for her moving! [Not enough information! Please fix]
Likes: Her favorite treat is pocky, and she loves to laugh.
Dislikes: She doesn't like the dark, and she hates seeing people miserable.
Clothing: You can often see Bailey wearing little plaid skirts with a little matching t-shirt. On her feet are black dress shoes that have a strap to fasten her feet in. She wears colorful knee socks, usually with a cute little pattern on them. Other than that, she wears a headband in her hair all of the time.
Strengths: I love profiling! [Heck yes!] And I'm pretty good with theatrics.
Weaknesses: I think I might need some help in making my posts longer.


[This is how I make my little comments, sometimes they're good and sometimes they're bad]

This is the text that isn't written to good standards, and I will expect you to fix it.

Very simple, yes?

That's all for now. As for working on balancing your character, I'll save that for your profiles for the Forest RP. So be careful, don't think nobody is watching you in there, because I will be. ninja
 
PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:03 pm


Don't waste your time with politics...


Character Name: Rain Jouji
Age: 20
Sex: Male
Description: A tall young man, Rain is 6 foot 2, who is naturally well trimmed, His blond hair is just long enough to cover his face and neck, although he combs it aside out of his eyes. His Skin is Semi-tanned, which makes his smile pop even more.
Personality: Eccentric and most of the time extremely bipolar, Rain is the clothing designer with amazing skills and an attitude to boost. He flirts shamelessly, and does everything in his power to seduce girls.
History: Being an only child, rain received the best education his parents could supply, but this made him spoiled. Harboring no ill will or hate towards his parents, even though they treated his as a child until he moved away from home. Rain Left home to attend College majoring in Fashion design, His skills were quickly noticed, and even though he is still technically in college, he already has a job in the fashion industry, as well as his own Studio's.
Likes: He loves Girls with Long Blond hair, As well as girls who tease him.
Dislikes: Rude people. He also Dislikes immaturity.
Clothing: Being the Fashionaire that he is, He is often seen in well fitted Casual suits consisting of; Long sleeve button up shirts with stylish designs and exotic fabrics. Long curvy slacks that accent his long legs, and over the top jackets that usually are less practical then anyone would like to know.
Strengths: Art, he has a natural eye for whats looks good... and what looks bad. He is also a very good conversationalist, and has a knack for cheering people up and making them feel...'Special'
Weaknesses: Math, He has always hated Math, usually he would skip his math classes in high school and go off campus. He also doesn't do well in situations where there are more then 2 or 3 girls talking or playing with him...



...Just chase skirts instead
 

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:32 am


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Don't waste your time with politics...


Character Name: Rain Jouji
Age: 20
Sex: Male
Description: A tall young man, Rain is 6 foot 2, who is naturally well trimmed, His blond hair is just long enough to cover his face and neck, although he combs it aside out of his eyes[This is a run-on sentence, too many commas! Try to space it out in sentences]. His skin is semi-tanned, which makes his smile pop even more.[Good smile description ^_^]
Personality: Eccentric and most of the time extremely bipolar, Rain is a clothing designer with amazing skills and an attitude to boost. He flirts shamelessly, and does everything in his power to seduce girls. [Pretty good, lacks length. If there is need to make your profile longer, add how your character acts around people, certain things, etc.]
History: Being an only child, Rain received the best education his parents could supply, but this made him spoiled. Harboring no ill will or hate towards his parents, even though they treated his as a child until he moved away from home [It sounds like you're about to go somewhere with this, but then it just ends with a period.. If this is supposed to trail onto the next sentence, use proper punctuation. Also on another note, if you want more lenghth to your Bio, add more about childhood and how his parents effected him with more detail.]. Rain Left home to attend college majoring in fashion design, His skills were quickly noticed, and even though he is still technically in college, he already has a job in the fashion industry, as well as his own Studio's[Another run-on sentence. Please seperate sentences wisely ^_^" Also, if you want to add more length, you could state where and how he's doing in the present time/ what his views are now, aybe even if he's changed at all from the past?].
Likes: He loves Girls with Long Blond hair, As well as girls who tease him.
Dislikes: Rude people. He also Dislikes immaturity.
Clothing: Being the Fashionaire that he is, He is often seen in well fitted Casual suits consisting of; Long sleeve button up shirts with stylish designs and exotic fabrics. Long curvy slacks that accent his long legs, and over the top jackets that usually are less practical then anyone would like to know.[Good description, use proper punctuation.]
Strengths: Art, he has a natural eye for whats looks good... and what looks bad. He is also a very good conversationalist, and has a knack for cheering people up and making them feel...'Special'[Good :] ]
Weaknesses: Math, He has always hated Math, usually he would skip his math classes in high school and go off campus. He also doesn't do well in situations where there are more then 2 or 3 girls talking or playing with him...



...Just chase skirts instead


I've also noticed that you capitalize many words that shouldn't be capitalized.
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