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well..i dont really know how to make one yet..so ill just try..^_^

If you don't mind me posting in here (if you do, let me know and I will delete this post for you), I have some recommendation when making a profile.

When making a profile, don't be afraid to add in details. You would be amazed at how the details would help make your character appear better, as well as help you role play the character with more accuracy. Details also help give other people an idea on what your character can and can't do.

Another thing, on average that is, you can also always add thing into your profile as your character grows. I am not saying you can change your profile to match a situation, but you can add in details as they come to you. Nothing is set in stone.
What I mean here, is like if your character just went through a traumatic experience, like their family dieing. Then you can add this in and any changes it might of had to that character's personality.

Some of the threads in the following link may be of help to you:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewforum.php?f=105871

No problem. If you want any suggestions or advice, just let me know and I will help you where I can.

~DARK WISH~

Name: Odele
Age: 16
Faction: shadow lord
Personality: Odele is kind hearted and gentle, but she's good at concentrating when fighting. Eager to learn new things, eager to gain more knowledge and power.
History: Some of Odele's family and ancestors have been shadow lords. She has been trained ever since she turned 8, when her shadow first took over her. Odele is more gentle than her shadow, although when she fights, she is focus and doesnt lose her concentration. Odele might not be as stong as Valara, but shes more eager for knowledge and experience.
Powers: odele uses the sword that could be split into two, except she prefers to use just one big sword unlike valara (her shadow). she uses her blood on her sword, since her blood has an ancient magic passed through her blood line. Odele's blood is poisonous to others, unfortunately, their blood is also poison to Odele.
Appearence:

Shadow
(For everyone, because anyone can lose control to their shadow, but especially Shadow Lords. If Ancients try to unseal or Agents try to draw more power than they can, they start drawing shadow energy)
Name: Valara
Appearance: looks just like Odele but instead, Valara has a black hair and instead of red eyes she has green
Personality: Valara is selfish and a push over. she likes fighting and giving Odele a hard time because she prefer to fight someone a bit stronger than her. And she could be Arrogant at times when she takes over Odele's body. Valara is fearless. She might look like Odele, but they are opposite of each other when it comes to their personality.
Powers: just like Odele, Valara also uses the sword, except shes faster than Odele, because unlike Odele, she uses 2 swords which is Odele's sword thats split into two