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 Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:19 pm
Comments appreciated<33 Dont worry I can take critique
Please someone check my vital signs
Don't tell me that I'll be alright
Because then I'll be walking past the line
The doctor says to not hold me so tight
I sat in my bedroom, waiting for you at midnight
No calls and no signs
I thought you'd hold me tight
But you told me home at nine
Morning came and went
I looked for you and found nothing (that i wanted to see)
She looked heaven sent
I thought you loved me
Chorus
I see, I see she wasn't to taunt me
I know, I know it wasn't to hurt me
Love is a glass rose that can break and shatter
but even a glass rose has it's thorns, that make feelings not matter
Verse 2
Sometimes thoughts of you make me numb
So won't you give me my life back?
I'll use your strategy of draining pain with rum
And then I be in the ex girl stack
Maybe I may be over reacting
But at least I'll admit to it
I know you may not want to say a thing
Cuz your too busy putting out the flame you lit
I'm slowly but painfully regaining sanity
But things aren't always as they seem
I sometimes want the numbness back to blind out memories
And I know you know the ones that I mean
CHORUS
Sing me a lullabye
Of apologies and lies<--x5
CHORUS
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:40 pm
you might not want to say Sing me a lullabye Of apologies and lies five times. you might want to go for three.
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 6:33 pm
maybe but then i wouldnt have time for a 10 minute guitar solo trying to break a record lol jk
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 2:29 pm
you're a really good songwriter!! I read your other one, " a rose shaped scar" and this one and the other one were both amazing!! * hugs * whee
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