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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 8:44 am

This is a comic that is being made for the sake of a site that a couple people and I are building... So i present it to you as test rats to see the reaction of the public...

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I wont update till thursday or so... But tell me what you think so far. By the way, kitaro is me, sq and velo are the other guys making the site with me.

Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:57 am

I like! I like!
Nice author-character, looks very unique. Almost none grammar mistakes... The only thinG i have to criticize is the "effects" of when characters are "abuducted". I understand if you only have paint, but when it zooms in frame-by-frame to see the character floating up, it doesn't look too good. Try to seperate the new panels with outlines around them.
Keep up the good work and don't stop now!

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SexySexMuffin

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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 11:20 am

psyniac_123

I like! I like!
Nice author-character, looks very unique. Almost none grammar mistakes... The only thinG i have to criticize is the "effects" of when characters are "abuducted". I understand if you only have paint, but when it zooms in frame-by-frame to see the character floating up, it doesn't look too good. Try to seperate the new panels with outlines around them.
Keep up the good work and don't stop now!

Yeah, i only have paint.... the abducting stops soon anyway.... and yeah.... soon it will reach a very important piece of story... that is once i return hom and can use my own comp...

Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 12:26 pm

SexySexMuffin

psyniac_123

I like! I like!
Nice author-character, looks very unique. Almost none grammar mistakes... The only thinG i have to criticize is the "effects" of when characters are "abuducted". I understand if you only have paint, but when it zooms in frame-by-frame to see the character floating up, it doesn't look too good. Try to seperate the new panels with outlines around them.
Keep up the good work and don't stop now!

Yeah, i only have paint.... the abducting stops soon anyway.... and yeah.... soon it will reach a very important piece of story... that is once i return hom and can use my own comp...

Good, can't wait smile

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