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 Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:17 pm
Note: Please do not submit more than five techniques at a time for approval as anything more kills the moderating team. Thank you.
Please keep in mind the following. With the adjustments to the battle system, techniques may be stronger or weaker than originally intended. Also - you may only learn a technique if it has been taught to you by the original user. Techniques may be copied in play with difficulty, and with the approval of the original creator. Because each technique is unique to its user, we will not be putting up a technique listing for Zanjutsu or Hakuda. If you have a style/move that has been approved, but does not yet have any statistics to it, please refrain from using it until you can get it approved again, with the technical aspect added. The original thread may be found in the Guild Archived Thread II forum.
Also note that where it says Strength/Agility, this refers to one or the other, not both, depending on if your style is strength, or speed based.
Zanjutsu Format
Name: Jap Name - English Trans in italics
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: Please explain the effects, or technique used, in as much detail as possible.
Reiatsu Cost: Only applies if reiatsu is used in the technique. Then rei cost is equal to total reiatsu focused in move.
Requirements:
Level: (Required Score)
Zanjutsu: (Required Score)
Strength/Agility: (Required Score)
Damage: (All Zanjutsu damage will be assigned by, or must be approved by, a moderator. Also note that when a moderator refers to 'base zanpakuto damage' this refers to the original 1-10, not damage + your modifiers.)
Hakuda Format
Name: Jap Name - English Trans in italics
Art: Hakuda
Description: Please explain the effects, or technique used, in as much detail as possible.
Reiatsu Cost: Only applies if reiatsu is used in the technique. Then rei cost is equal to total reiatsu focused in move.
Requirements:
Level:
Zanjutsu:
Strength/Agility:
Damage: (All Hakuda damage will be assigned by, or must be approved by, a moderator. Also note that when a moderator refers to 'base hakuda damage' this refers to the original 1-4, not damage + your modifiers.)
(Note: No techniques of either style that take away from, or add to a specific stat as a result of the technique, may be learned until at least level 10.)
A good example of a zanjutsu technique is the following: Humbra Name: Suraisu-onjun / Controlled Blow Art: Zanjutsu Description: This sword technique is a controlled sword swing that lends itself more to skill than to strength. It is a single, focused slash with the user's weapon. Although it dramatically decreases the damaging power of the user's attack it focuses the user's strike to allow for an equally dramatic increase in his/her chance to hit. This effects of this technique is void ('does not work') if the user attacks more than once during their attacking phase with a melee/ranged weapon. The technique is also void if the user's Hp is beneath 50% or if the user's Rp is beneath 10%. This technique requires a level of focus--meaning that the technique cannot be mastered if the user is in a state of extreme mental illness/pain. Reiatsu Cost: N/A Requirements: Level - 10 Zanjutsu - 60 Strength - 20 Damage: Damage = Original Damage / 3 Attack Bonus = Original Attack Bonus * 2
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:40 pm
Name: Kujiku Kiriai - Break the Crossing Sword (lit: Break Crossing Swords)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: Instead of getting out of the way of the attack, the off hand weapon is used to 'break' the opponent's sword swing. If successful, it throws the opponent off balance. Once off balanced, the opponent must regain balance or await a crushing blow as the next sword swing is made with the whole weight of the daisho user in an all-out, downward, diagonal slash.
Requirements:
Daisho
Level 4
Zanjutsu - 25
Agility - 12
Awareness - 12
Intelligence - 22
Damage: ??
Notes:
off balance is the same as being 'flat footed' in which agility and awareness are not added to the next dodge roll
in the case of this attack, immediate retaliation (attack roll) is not possible if dodge fails
Name: Suraisu Reiatsu - Slicing Reiatsu (lit: Reiatsu Slice)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: Focusing the entirety of one's reiatsu pulse into a one's zanpakutou, strength can be forgone in order to make a clean slice with the sharpened edge. This is especially useful for damaging or even breaking hollow masks, shinigami swords, or anything else created/sharpened with reiatsu pressure.
RP Cost: ??
Effect: Reiatsu check to damage reiatsu pressure item, Reiatsu Control check to break reiatsu pressure item
Requirements:
Zanpakutou
*Shikai
Level: 6
Zanjutsu: 20
Reiatsu Control: 30
Agility: 20
Intelligence: 24
Reiatsu: 30
Damage: ??
Notes:
*only indicates that shikai needs to be known, the skill can be used while zanpakutou is sealed
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 11:05 pm
ChaosHuntress Kujiku Kiriai - Break the Crossing Sword
Suraisu Reiatsu - Slicing Reiatsu Quote: Name: Kujiku Kiriai - Break the Crossing Sword (lit: Break Crossing Swords) Art: Zanjutsu Description: Instead of getting out of the way of the attack, the off hand weapon is used to 'break' the opponent's sword swing. If successful, it throws the opponent off balance. Once off balanced, the opponent must regain balance or await a crushing blow as the next sword swing is made with the whole weight of the daisho user in an all-out, defense passing attack. Requirements: Daisho Level 4 Zanjutsu - 25 Agility - 16 Awareness - 16 Intelligence - 22 Damage: Standard User Zanjutsu Damage Notes: The dodge for this attack is done as base dodge + awareness + strength + 2 per 10 zanjutsu ranks. If the dodge is successful then the next initial dodge that the opponent makes does not get the benefit of their agility modifier. When this technique is used the user forfeits one attack in order to perform the technique, but receive full strength bonus regardless of which hand they use.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 9:36 am
Name: kage odori (shadow dance)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user begins to sway side to side quickly to make the illusion of many copies, while the defender is occupied by the shadows the attacker comes from either underneath or behind and strikes with a upward slash.
Rp: 15
Requirments: Houhou: 10, Agility:18, Awr: 18
level: 3
Zanjutsu: 25
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage:30-50
Name: doragon ro-tasu (dragon lotus)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user twist his arms behind him in a circular pattern and launches it forward in a spinning motion ussual to the rib or gut area. If you charge your Reiatsu it causes a type of force wall to knock back your opponent
Rp: 10
Requirments: Str:18, Rei: 15
Level: 2
Hakuda: 10
Strength/Agility: Strength
Damage: 50-80
Name: tsuchi she-ka (earths scream)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user jumps high into the air forming his Reiatsu in the Zanpakuto, as they came to the ground the wielder pierces the ground as the Reisatu flows from the blade it snakes its way to the defender and sends a jagged piece of earth upwards.
RP:50
Requirements: Str 25, Rei: 18
Level: 5
Zanjutsu: 25
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: 60-90
Name: bouseki hirate (spinning palm)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user hits in the ribs with a open palm twice with each hand and the final blow comes from underneath. The user bends down and comes up with spinning motion to the jaw as he launches himself upwards the defender is knocked off his feet.
Rp: 5 each blow
Requirements: Str: 15, Rei: 12
Level: 1
Hakuda: 5
Strength/Agility: Both
Damage: 8-12 per blow
Name: Rhino gachan (Rhino slam)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user lets their enemy charge at them, when their enemy comes they take their first attack and use it to spin them around till they are dizzy and slam them into the nearest surface.
Requirments: Int: 15, Str: 20, Agl: 16, Awr: 13
Level: 3
Hakuda: 10
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: 20-35
Name: Kage e-su (Shadow Ace)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user simply shifts their Zanpaktou to a upside down position letting the handle upwards and the blade point downwards. As this occurs every hit that smashes the blade a puff of black smoke forms catching the attacker off-balance. This is due to the blade is still straight up, but not seen.
Rp:45
Requirments: Rei:25, Reiatsu Sense: 20, Reiatsu Control: 15, Reiatsu Use: 15
Level:6
Zanjutsu: 30
Strength/Agility: Agility
Name: ketteiteki kire (Final Slice)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Karite charges his reisatsu into his fingertips. Expanding it out to form claws. Charging at the target karite slices the torso horziontaly
RP: 25
Requirments: Str:20, Agl:18, Rei: 15
Level:2
Hakuda: 12
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: 50-75
Name: ketteiteki otakebi (Final roar)
Art: hakuda
Description: Karite charges the reisatsu into the vocal chords of his throat, with a deep breath he release a drum busting roar that shatters the ear drum of the target.
Rp: 35
Requirments: Rei: 16
Level:3
Hakuda: 15
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: dodge cut in halve for 4 rounds
Name: batsu reikyuu (Punishing Coffin)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: Charging the reisatsu into his left palm, Karite runs his hand over the blade letting it soak in. Stabbing the blade into the ground 4 columns raise. Charging the Reisatsu into both hands Karite slams them into the ground to gain control of the pillars. Using the shadows casted off the pillirs he moves his hands in towards the blade and controls the shadows squeezing the target into submission.
Rp: 85
Requirments: Str:35, Rei: 40, Reiatsu Use: 20, Reiatsu Control: 25
Level:6
Zanjutsu: 35
Strength/Agility: Strength
Damage: 100-275
Name: Grizzly oujou haji (Grizzly death grip)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user gets behind his enemy charging the reiatsu into his fore arms, and then using the spirit pressure grabs their target and squeezes them till they pop.
RP: 25
Requirements: agl: 17, STR: 20,
Level: 2
hak: 10
Strength/Agility: Strength
Damage: 30-50
Name: chi deruta dageki (Blood Delta Strike)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: the reiastu is charged through the hilt and sent through the blade. The user bites their finger and writes a delta symbol into the blade with their blood. Forcing his reiatsu out of the delta symbol, Karite causes a wave a red force to drain the reiastu from their body.
Damage: 90-110
RP: 45
Requirements: STR: 22, Rei: 18
Name: kangaru sakugu (Kangaroo Tackle)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Karite jumps up and kicks his target in the face. Landing on his hands, Karite gut checks the target with a punch.
Requirments: Str:15, Houho: 10
Level:1
Hakuda: 10
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: 45
Name: suteppusu tame makai ryou (Steps to hell finish)
Art: Hakuda
Description: the user jumps from a side surface and repeatedly kicks the target in the chest till they hit the ground.
Requirments: Agl:21, Str: 20
Level: 2
Hakuda: 15
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: 65-80
Name: hebi baito kyoubou (Snake bite Frenzy)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Using the pressure points of the body one charges at the target and hits the points in order from top to bottom.
RP:30
Requirments: Str: 30, int: 25, Agl: 20
Level:5
Hakuda: 36
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: Dodge halved for 8 rounds
Name: aoi tsume (Blue claw)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Charging the reiatsu into the knuckles of both hands the user forms a spiked gauntlet. Once the spikes are there the user has two options. They may throw them, or attack with them.
RP: 20; 10 per post
Requirments: Agl: 18, Str: 22, Int: 18, Rei: 20
Level: 3
Hakuda: 25
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage: 15 per claw thrown
25-35 per hit taken
Name: sora doragon slash (Sky Dragon Slash)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user throws his blade into the air. Forming the reiatsu in his hands, the user then jumps up putting the reiatsu into the blade and coming down stabbing it into the ground. Causing the earth to glow and shoot the reiatsu up with a explosion.
RP:45
Requirments: Agl: 20, Awr:20, Str:25, Rei: 30
Level: 5
Zanjutsu:40
Strength/Agility: Both
Damage:80-120
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 11:24 am
Name: Volt Punch (i'll find the name soon.)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user throws a punch at the oppoenent with a fist full of reiatsu. But you dont hit the person you stop your fist before it hits the person. Reiatu flickers threw the hand and the opponenet see's a flicking motion of blue in the air before the reiatsu is forced at the oppoenent.
Rp: 20
Requirments: Reiatsu:20 reiatsu control:8
level: 2
Hakuda: 10
Strength/Agility: Agility
Damage confused
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 3:36 pm
Name: Suraisu-onjun / Controlled Blow
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: This sword technique is a controlled sword swing that lends itself more to skill than to strength. It is a single, focused slash with the user's weapon. Although it dramatically decreases the damaging power of the user's attack it focuses the user's strike to allow for an equally dramatic increase in his/her chance to hit.
This effects of this technique is void ('does not work') if the user attacks more than once during their attacking phase with a melee/ranged weapon. The technique is also void if the user's Hp is beneath 50% or if the user's Rp is beneath 10%. This technique requires a level of focus--meaning that the technique cannot be mastered if the user is in a state of extreme mental illness/pain.
Reiatsu Cost: N/A
Requirements:
Level - 10
Zanjutsu - 60
Strength - 20
Damage:
Damage = Original Damage / 3
Attack Bonus = Original Attack Bonus * 2
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 7:00 pm
Humbra Name: Suraisu-onjun / Controlled Blow
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: This sword technique is a controlled sword swing that lends itself more to skill than to strength. It is a single, focused slash with the user's weapon. Although it dramatically decreases the damaging power of the user's attack it focuses the user's strike to allow for an equally dramatic increase in his/her chance to hit.
This effects of this technique is void ('does not work') if the user attacks more than once during their attacking phase with a melee/ranged weapon. The technique is also void if the user's Hp is beneath 50% or if the user's Rp is beneath 10%. This technique requires a level of focus--meaning that the technique cannot be mastered if the user is in a state of extreme mental illness/pain.
Reiatsu Cost: N/A
Requirements:
Level - 10
Zanjutsu - 60
Strength - 20
Damage:
Damage = Original Damage / 3
Attack Bonus = Original Attack Bonus * 2
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 7:05 pm
Unfortunately, because you kinda filled out the technical aspects of them wrong, I can't approve them, because they're confusing me just slightly. And the damage ratio is too high. If you want to talk to me about these over messenger, I've got you added on all three. Also, please keep in mind that when we ask for Str/Agl in the technical aspect, we're asking for a score for one or the other as a requirement, not an indication of which it is. Extra stats used should go below the ones we already have listed, so like with your first technique, it would read:
Requirments:
Level: 3
Zanjutsu: 25
Houhou: 10
Agility:18
Awr: 18
For all of the technical aspects of it.
Please review what you have, and make adjustments accordingly, and then resubmit them for approval. Thank you. :3
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 7:06 pm
Kobayashi_Akira Name: Volt Punch (i'll find the name soon.) Art: Hakuda Description: The user throws a punch at the oppoenent with a fist full of reiatsu. But you dont hit the person you stop your fist before it hits the person. Reiatu flickers threw the hand and the opponenet see's a flicking motion of blue in the air before the reiatsu is forced at the oppoenent. Rp: 20 Requirments: Reiatsu:20 reiatsu control:8 level: 2 Hakuda: 10 Strength/Agility: Agility Damage confused
I'm going to pose the same words to you that I said to Nightzblade. Please adjust the way the technical stats are written, and I'll go about approving it from there. We have the format a certain way to make things easier on me, and I don't want to have to read a jumbled up amount of stuff. As far as the technique itself, once you adjust the technicals, we'll see about setting damage to it. This reminds me just slightly of a Reiatsu Gun style attack, which reminds me slightly of Yu Yu Hakushou. xD
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 7:43 pm
Name: kage odori (shadow dance)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user begins to sway side to side quickly to make the illusion of many copies, while the defender is occupied by the shadows the attacker comes from either underneath or behind and strikes with a upward slash.
Rp: 15
Requirments:
level: 3
Houhou: 10
Agility:18
Awr: 18
Zanjutsu: 25
Damage confused
Name: doragon ro-tasu (dragon lotus)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user twist his arms behind him in a circular pattern and launches it forward in a spinning motion ussual to the rib or gut area. If you charge your Reiatsu it causes a type of force wall to knock back your opponent
Rp: 10
Requirments:
Level: 2
Str:18
Rei: 15
Hakuda: 10
Damage: ?
Name: tsuchi she-ka (earths scream)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user jumps high into the air forming his Reiatsu in the Zanpakuto, as they came to the ground the wielder pierces the ground as the Reisatu flows from the blade it snakes its way to the defender and sends a jagged piece of earth upwards.
RP:50
Requirements:
Level: 5
Str 25
Rei: 18
Zanjutsu: 25
Damage: ?
Name: bouseki hirate (spinning palm)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user hits in the ribs with a open palm twice with each hand and the final blow comes from underneath. The user bends down and comes up with spinning motion to the jaw as he launches himself upwards the defender is knocked off his feet.
Rp: 5 each blow
Requirements:
Level: 1
Str: 15
Rei: 12
Hakuda: 5
Damage: ?
Name: Rhino gachan (Rhino slam)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user lets their enemy charge at them, when their enemy comes they take their first attack and use it to spin them around till they are dizzy and slam them into the nearest surface.
Requirments:
Level: 3
Int: 15
Str: 20
Agl: 16
Awr: 13
Hakuda: 10
Damage: ?
Name: Kage e-su (Shadow Ace)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user simply shifts their Zanpaktou to a upside down position letting the handle upwards and the blade point downwards. As this occurs every hit that smashes the blade a puff of black smoke forms catching the attacker off-balance. This is due to the blade is still straight up, but not seen.
Rp:45
Requirments:
Level:6
Rei:25
Agl: 20
Reiatsu Sense: 20
Reiatsu Control: 15
Reiatsu Sense Use: 15
Zanjutsu: 30
Name: ketteiteki kire (Final Slice)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Karite charges his reisatsu into his fingertips. Expanding it out to form claws. Charging at the target karite slices the torso horziontaly
RP: 25
Requirments:
Level:2
Str:20
Agl:18
Rei: 15
Hakuda: 12
Damage: ?
Name: ketteiteki otakebi (Final roar)
Art: hakuda
Description: Karite charges the reisatsu into the vocal chords of his throat, with a deep breath he release a drum busting roar that shatters the ear drum of the target.
Rp: 35
Requirments:
Level:3
Hakuda: 15
Rei: 16
Agility:16
Damage: dodge cut in halve for 4 rounds
Name: batsu reikyuu (Punishing Coffin)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: Charging the reisatsu into his left palm, Karite runs his hand over the blade letting it soak in. Stabbing the blade into the ground 4 columns raise. Charging the Reisatsu into both hands Karite slams them into the ground to gain control of the pillars. Using the shadows casted off the pillirs he moves his hands in towards the blade and controls the shadows squeezing the target into submission.
Rp: 85
Requirments:
Level:6
Str:35,
Rei: 40,
Reiatsu Use: 20,
Reiatsu Control: 25
Zanjutsu: 35
Damage: ?
Name: Grizzly oujou haji (Grizzly death grip)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user gets behind his enemy charging the reiatsu into his fore arms, and then using the spirit pressure grabs their target and squeezes them till they pop.
RP: 25
Requirements:
Level: 2
agl: 17,
STR: 20,
hak: 10
Damage: ?
Name: chi deruta dageki (Blood Delta Strike)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: the reiastu is charged through the hilt and sent through the blade. The user bites their finger and writes a delta symbol into the blade with their blood. Forcing his reiatsu out of the delta symbol, Karite causes a wave a red force to drain the reiastu from their body.
RP: 45
Requirements:
Level: 4
STR: 22
Rei: 18
Damage: ?
Name: kangaru sakugu (Kangaroo Tackle)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Karite jumps up and kicks his target in the face. Landing on his hands, Karite gut checks the target with a punch.
Requirments:
Level:1
Str:15
Houho: 10
Hakuda: 10
Damage: ?
Name: suteppusu tame makai ryou (Steps to hell finish)
Art: Hakuda
Description: the user jumps from a side surface and repeatedly kicks the target in the chest till they hit the ground.
Requirments:
Level: 2
Agl:21
Str: 20
Hakuda: 15
Damage confused
Name: hebi baito kyoubou (Snake bite Frenzy)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Using the pressure points of the body one charges at the target and hits the points in order from top to bottom.
RP:30
Requirments:
Level:5
Str: 30
int: 25
Agl: 20
Hakuda: 36
Damage: Dodge halved for 8 rounds
Name: aoi tsume (Blue claw)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Charging the reiatsu into the knuckles of both hands the user forms a spiked gauntlet. Once the spikes are there the user has two options. They may throw them, or attack with them.
RP: 20; 10 per post
Requirments:
Level: 3
Agl: 18
Str: 22
Int: 18
Rei: 20
Hakuda: 25
Damage: 15 per claw thrown
25-35 per hit taken
Name: sora doragon slash (Sky Dragon Slash)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: The user throws his blade into the air. Forming the reiatsu in his hands, the user then jumps up putting the reiatsu into the blade and coming down stabbing it into the ground. Causing the earth to glow and shoot the reiatsu up with a explosion.
RP:45
Requirments:
Level: 5
Agl: 20
Awr:20
Str:25
Rei: 30
Zanjutsu:40
Damage confused
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 10:37 pm
Nightzblade Technical adjustments/approval notices are as follows Kage Odori - Not Approved - This is more of a shikai or bankai technique than a normal zanjutsu technique. Doragon Rotasu - Pending - The stats are okay, but the description makes no sense. Give us some clarification, and we'll see about reviewing it again. Tsuchi She-Ka - Approved RP:25 Requirements: Level: 5 Strength: 25 Reiatsu: 20 Zanjutsu: 25 Damage: Standard Zanjutsu Damage + 2 per 5 RP spent in cost for a max of 10. Bouseki Hirate - Approved Rp: 5 per hit Requirements: Level: 17 Strength: 15 Reiatsu: 20 Agility: 30 Hakuda: 30 Damage: Base Hakuda Damage + 1 point per each RP spent per blow, for a max of 5 extra damage per blow. Rhino Gachan - Approved Technique Effect: You forgo a dodge, and when you attempt to attack your opponent, you forfeit all other attacks that round to use this attack. You receive a bonus to hit equal to the bonus you would have received to your dodge, agility & awareness, which are instead applied to your attack bonus, along with all other standard attack bonuses. Requirements are good. Those don't need to be changed. Damage: 3-12 + Standard Str & Hakuda Mods Kage E-Su - Not Approved - This attack is too overpowered. Throwing someone off balance requires quite a bit of sacrifice. You're negating their ability to do much of anything. This would need a complete rewrite before being approved. Ketteiteki Kire - Approved Duration of this technique is one round per five RP spent in the cost, this makes it a maximum of five posts. RP: 25 Requirments: Level: 4 Strength: 20 Agility: 18 Reiatsu: 20 Reiatsu Control: 30 Hakuda: 20 Damage: 2-8 + Standard Hakuda Mods This also turns the damage dealt from subdual (non-lethal) to lethal damage. Ketteiteki Otakebi - Approved Rp: 35 Requirments: Level: 15 Reiatsu Control: 65 Reiatsu: 40 Awareness: 40 Effect: Target loses the awareness and hohou modifier to their damage for three rounds. This does not effect shikai based barriers which add to dodge. Batsu Reikyuu - Not Approved - This is more like a shikai technique than a normal zanjutsu technique. Grizzly Oujou Haji - Not Approved - The technique is very vague. You need to make it more specific, and submit it for reapproval. Chi Deruta Dageki - Not Approved - We're currently not allowing techniques that are not shikai or bankai based, that allow a user to drain the reiatsu of another. Kangaru Sakugu - Not Approved - This isn't really a 'technique', its more just a series of attacks, which you can achieve with the dice. Suteppusu Tame Makai Ryou - Not Approved - This technique would require you to be an extremely high level, and in addition, striking someone until they hit the ground doesn't qualify as an technique, just a series of attacks, like above. Hebi Baito Kyoubou - Not Approved - This technique would require a very high number of hakuda attacks, as there is no actual list which states the exact number of pressure points in the body, but just the head, neck and chest area is upwards of 20. Aoi Tsume - Not Approved - The way this is described, is throwing reiatsu, which is more of a kidou technique than a hakuda technique. Sora Doragon Slash - Approved RP:45 Requirments: Level: 5 Agility: 20 Awareness:20 Strength:25 Reiatsu: 30 Reiatsu Control: 30 Zanjutsu:40 Damage: Standard Zanpakuto Damage + 2 Per 5 RP Spent, To A Maximum Of 18 Additional Damage
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 1:32 am
Name: Hibiki Dageki - Echo Strike
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: Using reiatsu to cause a small zanpakutou to vibrate, the user can cause the zanpakutou to resonate sound waves as he attacks an opponent. Utilizing the sound waves as a means of attack, the repercussion of the sound waves will do damage to an opponent even if the actual zanpakutou misses...The statistical effect of this skill would be a +2 attack bonus. An additional +2 can be added for an additional 15Rp cost...Applicable to only one attack(daisho cannot use it for both hands unless user pays 30 Rp for a +2 to each hand, 60 total for a +4 to each...)
Reiatsu Cost: 15(30)
Effect: Attack Bonus +2(+4)
Requirements:
Level: 5+
Zanjutsu: 20
Strength: 15
Reiatsu: 25
Reiatsu Control: 20
Damage:
[(Normal Zanpakutou Damage)/2]
If Attack Roll Successful even without the bonuses from this skill(in RP terms, the zanpakutou hit the opponent as well as the sound waves):
[(Normal Zanpakutou Damage)*1.25]
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:45 pm
Name: Grizzly oujou haji (Grizzly death grip)
Art: Hakuda
Description: The user gets behind his enemy charging the reiatsu into his fore arms, he then uses his spirit pressure building up from the focus of reiatsu and headlocks there opponent crushing their skull.
RP: 25
Requirements:
Level: 2
agl: 17,
STR: 20,
hak: 10
Damage: ?
Name: chi deruta dageki (Blood Delta Strike)
Art: Zanjutsu
Description: the reiastu is charged through the hilt and sent through the blade. The user bites their finger and writes a delta symbol into the blade with their blood. Forcing his reiatsu out of the delta symbol, Karite causes a wave a red force to drain the blood from their body.
RP: 45
Requirements:
Level: 4
STR: 22
Rei: 18
Damage: ?
Name: kangaru sakugu (Kangaroo Tackle)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Karite jumpes up wrapping his legs around the targets neck and flips them to the ground. Once they have hit the the ground the user jumps up and smashes both feet into there chest
Requirments:
Level:1
Str:15
Houho: 10
Hakuda: 10
Damage: ?
Name: suteppusu tame makai ryou (Steps to hell finish)
Art: Hakuda
Description: the user jumps from a side surface and kicks the target in the chest, then bouncing of the chest lands on the ground. Running forward he then flips up and delivers a flip kick to the chin with both feet.
Requirments:
Level: 2
Agl:21
Str: 20
Hakuda: 15
Damage confused
Name: hebi baito kyoubou (Snake bite Frenzy)
Art: Hakuda
Description: Forming the reiatsu into the finger tips the user strikes the joints of the body in the shoulders, knees, and wrist.
RP:30
Requirments:
Level:5
Str: 30
int: 25
Agl: 20
Hakuda: 36
Damage: Dodge halved for 8 rounds
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:06 pm
Uchiha~~Shunketsu Name: Hibiki Dageki - Echo StrikeArt: Zanjutsu Description: Using reiatsu to cause a small zanpakutou to vibrate, the user can cause the zanpakutou to resonate sound waves as he attacks an opponent. Utilizing the sound waves as a means of attack, the repercussion of the sound waves will do damage to an opponent even if the actual zanpakutou misses...The statistical effect of this skill would be a +2 attack bonus. An additional +2 can be added for an additional 15Rp cost...Applicable to only one attack(daisho cannot use it for both hands unless user pays 30 Rp for a +2 to each hand, 60 total for a +4 to each...) Reiatsu Cost: 15(30) Effect: Attack Bonus +2(+4) Requirements: Level: 5+ Zanjutsu: 20 Strength: 15 Reiatsu: 25 Reiatsu Control: 20 Damage: [(Normal Zanpakutou Damage)/2] If Attack Roll Successful even without the bonuses from this skill(in RP terms, the zanpakutou hit the opponent as well as the sound waves): [(Normal Zanpakutou Damage)*1.25]
Not Approved - Automatic hits aren't allowed, regardless of how good the system is behind it.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:23 pm
Nightzblade Grizzly Oujou Haji - Not Approved - 'Crushing their skull' would be considered an instant kill, not going to fly, especially not as a level 2 skill. Don't submit this one again. Chi Deruta Dageki - Not Approved - This is more like a shikai or kidou technique. If it was a move in a style, it would be something like a final surekill technique, something that a master might learn. As a level 4 technique, this is way too overpowered. Modify it extremely, and try again. Kangaru Sakugu - Not Approved - Same reason I stated before. You can achieve this with the dice, and it isn't really a 'style' or 'technique'. It would require two attacks in a round, something not even possible until you reach level 5 and gain your second hakuda attack. Suteppusu Tame Makai Ryou - Not Approved - This technique would require more than one hit, not suitable for level 2, and again, is something that you could achieve just with the rolls of the dice. Hebi Baito Kyoubou - Not Approved - Eight is a lot of rounds, and it requires at least six hits. This is far beyond a level five technique. The concept is okay, the damage isn't, and the technical elements need revamping.
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