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carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 12:16 pm


Title: Revenge is sweet
Author: me... call me carrie
Main Characters: Creed
POV: depending on the chapter
Authors note: lol ok this is my 1st fanfic ever so dont be to tough on me ok? sweatdrop i write for fun ,but i got dyslexia. it makes my brain take in words differently. so it makes it harder to read and write. I almost never show anyone anything i write in fear they might mark it up with mistakes like a teacher. iv been singled out in school alot so i really avoid anything close to having my stuff being graded.
so there might be alot of mispelling in this. anyways let me tell you about the story. smile

The idea for the story started off as a dream i had with frank poping out of my locker lol then i lengthened it and wrote a story based on it! hope yall like it!

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the 1st chapter will be posted soon i just gotta get the time to type it up! sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 12:26 pm


Oooh, a new fic!

Don't worry, I won't grade you like a teacher. wink

And one of my best friends is dyslexic....I still love her to bits and it hardly shows.

[x] Natasha [x]


I_am_his_Boo

PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 12:34 pm


Yay! new fanfic.I love new fanfics. I don't care about typos.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 1:16 pm


thank god for people like yall lol whee

carrieXchaos


carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 1:49 pm


Chapter #1 Rise'n'shine!

Creed woke up to her alarm clock, playing her favorite radio station. She got up with a mown, but didnt let herself fully wake up before she started to get ready to go to school. She had to walk to school and back so she didnt have the time to not hurry.

She 1st got dressed: she sliped on her misfit shirt, tight bleached and worn down jeans, studded belts, thingerless hobo gloves, and her beloved converse. Then she started with her make up. Creed loves eyeliner, she always puts alot on. Liciud eyeliner was next, her gave herself cat eyes and then added on mascara. she then powdered herself up.

oh no only 10 minutes left!

Creed quickly put her short died black hair in a pony tail, brushed her teeth and ran down stairs to get a brakfest snack. a juice box and yogurt would have to do for this rushed morning, but yogurt was delish to Creed so she was happy.Dang i forgot to get a spoon for my yogurt! As she walked out of her appartment building she punched a hole in the yogurt lid using her finger and slurped it down.

Yummy yummy in my tummy!

then by the time she got to school she had finished her juice.

today might have started smoothly but that wasnt going to last for long

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ok thats the first chapter iv already got the next chapter ready to type but i want to hear what yall think first.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:37 pm


"Be yourself, don't take anyone else's s**t,

Very interesting. You have the same name as me.... That's awesome.

and NEVER let them take you alive." - Gerard Way

my unholy confessions xx


carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:52 pm


This Chapter is told through Creed! enjoy!
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Chapter #2 Linda: The Meanest Girl I Know!


I walked into my first class of the day: Algebra. After the bell rang Mr. Smith passed out the dialy assignment, explained them, and then the class got to work. For once, I knew what to do! SCORE! About half way through my work i heard a vioce say "whats with the gloves?" . I looked up from my desk and saw Linda Smith, the teachers younge relative, standing before me with he hands on the hips.
"hey, oh these? I just like'em" i said forcing a smile. I then got back to work, maybe she'll go away.
"They look kinda wierd, if you ask me". she said "it makes you look like a homeless person" I put down my pencil, She obviosly wasnt going to go.
"well, no one asked you"
"Ok just say'in maybe if you dressed more normal you would make friends."
"I have lots of friends, ok? Know i got to get to work."

"you mean you havnt finished? it was easy! hey, how are you doing in this class anyway?" she said with a giggle
"Im doing just fine" i said with a scowl.

Shes been like this ever since her dad got that big raise.... back when we were friends. Our dads work together at a record company office, thats how we came to know each other. anyways, Her dad got an unexpected raise that was suppose to go to my dad. She thought that sinse she was suddenly richer than me that she was some how better than me. So ever sinse we have been enemies. She rubs her pricey purses, clothes, and great grades in my face each day.

Man, I hate her so....


after a few minutes they conversation turned into a arguement and students were 'ooo and awww'ing.
Before things got out of hand, Mr.smith let me go to the bathroom to cool off. I walked out of the classroom into the hall. I wasnt planning on going to the bathroom. I was really going to my locker to call my mom to pick me up from school, but i dowt she would. she works on the other side of town.

but no harm in trying, right?

I got up to my locker and sat down on the floor to try to get myself together. i didnt want my mom to know i was crying, so after the lump in my throught went away. i started to unlock my locker so i could get my cell phine. just as it opened up a guy leaned out of my locker and when "BOO!" I gasped and backed away. I think i was about to cry again.
"OH MY GOD!!! wrong locker! Im so sorry!" he said as i got out off the small cramped locker. how did he fit in there anyway?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:30 pm


if life ain't just a joke
Authors note


This is cool! Iv never had anyone read any of my stuff before! so i really hope yall like it! 3nodding i really want to update again but no one has commented yet! as soon as i get about three comments ill post again with the next chapter. smile pinkey promise!

then why are we laughing?

carrieXchaos


I_am_his_Boo

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 10:50 am


I love the story so far.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 11:51 am


Yay! I love it! More please!!! heart

[x] Natasha [x]


carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:44 pm


ok chapter #3 coming up! this one is told by creed and the guy *cough cough* frank *cough cough*

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Chapter #3: 10 rings


"Did I make you cry?" he asked. "no, a girl in my class did" i said a little shaken "why were you in a locker anyway?" He laughed a little and then told me. "I was doing a revengeful prank on a x-girlfriend"
"oh... wow. uh well, i got call someone so i guess ill see you around."
"ok. uh.... it was nice meeting you... um..."
"my names Creed"
"oh, mine's Frank"
and with that we akwardly waved goodbye.

Man, that was wierd!

I realized that he might have tried to steal somethings,so checked me locker,but everthing was normal .... except for my locker smelling like a big cigarette.

I got my cell phone and called my mom. The phone ringed 10 times before she picked up

"hello dear"
"hey mom, im having a bad day... please come pick me up"
"is it that linda kid, again?"
"... yeah..."

" all you have to do is stand up to her"

I roled my eyes and hung up. she always says that... and it never works, its a endless battle. ok whatever. maybe linda left the classroom too. i should go to class before her and talk to the teacher about changing classes. I turned to walk back to my class and noticed my bag on the floor.
"oops! almost forgot, i brought my bag with me" i thought as i picked it up.

when i got back to class, everyone was back to work. I sat down and noticed that Linda was back. DARN! so instead of talking to my teacher i reached into my bag to get my notebook. as soon as i felt the inside of my bag i knew something wasnt right. No textbooks, no notebook ...... did i just feel a lighter?

"oh no" i whispered to myself. i violently opened the bag and found a notebook with the name "Frank Iero" on it. he was obviesly a smoker, there were 2 packs of cigarettes and a lighter that looked like a gun. so thats why my locker smells like cigarettes.... oh and he has pop rocks and soda.

~~Franks POV~~

I walked outside to a spot were no one would see me, under the stands by the football field. I hadnt had a smoke in hours sinse i traped myself in that girls locker. I wonder what that other girl did to make her cry....
well time for a cola, pop rocks, and a smoke. I reached in my bag and pulled out a pack of cigarettes.... only it wasnt a pack of cigarettes.... it was a pack of green apple gum. what the hell?... I dug into my bag to find a bunch of text books, a makeup bag, a magazine, and a couple of pencils. "OH CRAP! " i said. This bag belonged to that girl Creed... "but hey this gum is good ...... ooooooo! a girls magazine, haha this is gonna be interesting" as i pulled the magazine out of the bag a school ID fell out of it I read Creed Dupwee. (pro-knownced: doo-pwee) the bag DID belonged to the cry'in girl in the hall.

Im psychic! Haha

but how do i get it back to her?

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its the classic bag switch-a-roo! i hope yall liked it i typed it up on the spot! sometimes it makes the story better so i wanted to try and see.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:38 am


Oooh, loving it so far!

More please! heart

[x] Natasha [x]


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 9:53 am


This is good! More!
PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:24 pm


Punk vs Emo
This is good! More!

im already writing the next update.... but im at my grandparents house so when ever i start to write a dult will lean over and ask "what cha do'in?" its a bit of a set back i must say. but my grandparents make coffee by the galloon! so ill be up tonight writing "slurps coffer from a twisty straw* yummy

carrieXchaos

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