I just need to reboot my artistic ego with some Fags critting my most recent arts.
I just...feel like I'm missing a lot and I really want to get better. sweatdrop
Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:23 am
Hiya! Some of these have changed a bit since I last saw them...
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 1:25 pm
is the background on that first one a very small jpg you scaled up? It looks very scaled.
I don't really like the first pair very much at all, that image seems rough and hard in a way that i just don't dig here.
The next two however, are kind of nice. There is a softness in that one that you usually don't seem to have going on.
Overall, I feel like I have watched quite a change in your art. I don't mean this as an insult, but it seems like you've hit artistic puberty; from superbutch robotmen to softcore porn in such a short time wink
Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:17 am
Oh, you and your porn.
Is that a bit of crazy spork style I see in the black chick? Because it looks like it.
In the first image (which was not served well by color balancing), slut doesn't have any legs. Slut needs legs. Give them to her.
in the second, the lineart of the woman's face is charming and effective. You know exactly what face she's making and it's great. The colored version, not so much. She just looks sort of gimpy and old in the face here.
Props to the hairy vag on the third. I don't know why, but I approve.
I like the fifth image a lot, some of the only true Gaia porn I've seen other than those yaoi pictures of prommies they occasionally troll GD with. her legs seem sort of off-balance, though, like she wants to jump up in the air and click her heels (which she couldn't do very well in that situation, anyway).
The ninth image tells me you need to work on faces. Also, it kind of creeps me out that the girl is grinning like she's at an awkward party with a bunch of women she doesn't like while she's being ********. What is up with that?