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 Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:36 pm
I'm new here to this guild, but I'm no stranger to a good yaoi fanfiction. This particular one is all about Sasuke x Naruto love (and maybe something else as well). Sasuke's being evil, again, and all Naruto-kun wants to do is make him realized he is loved. It took me forever to write what I have so far, and it's an ongoing series with a kinda intricate plot. So far it's gotten pretty good reviews, and I'm pleased with the amount of pageviews.
Now this fanfic is Teen rated for language and violence, but later on in the M rated chapters...well, I'll let you see if I get to post them <3. Anyways, here it is:
A Life Remembered…
Chapter One
UzumakiNaruto stood approximately five meters away from the one he cared so much about. His blonde hair shone in the sunlight and blew in the wind. His face, once filled with joy and hope, turned to a serious glare. His eyes, as blue as the ocean, stared fixed directly onto his opponent. His body, built with age and transformed into a thing of beauty, remained still. His fists, empty like his heart, clenched together. His feet, worn from chasing his friend, were still and rotted in the sand. His heart, once empty and weak, now knew what to do. He burned with desire to be with his friend. The one called…
Uchiha Sasuke stood approximately five meters away from the persistent human being he once knew. His black hair remained deep and colorless, blowing in the wind, not bothering to reflect the sun’s majestic rays. His face, once unsure, now had a look of complacency and lack of emotion. His eyes, as dark as the gaps between stars, soullessly gazed upon his opponent with a tired, sorry look. His body, built with rage and forbidden strength, remained motionless. His fists, empty like his heart, remained still by his sides. His feet, clean from lack of motion, remained still. His heart, once empty and weak, now knew what to do. He burned with desire to shatter his bond with the one called Uzumaki Naruto.
“Is this is, Sasuke?” Uzumaki Naruto spoke to his companion. “Is this what our lives have lead up to? Are we honestly going to stand here and plan on how each other will die?”
Uchiha Sasuke simply stood tall, emotionless. “Maybe,” he said.
Naruto’s eyes began to tear. “I know you hate me now. I know how much you hate the village. I know how much you despise me, Kakashi, Sakura, and all of the others. I know how much you wish to break the ties you have with our village. I know how much stronger you wish to grow. And I know ho strong you’ve become because of it.”
Sasuke stared and responded: “You’re exactly right, Naruto-kun. Breaking the ties with that annoying little village caused me to grow stronger than any shinobi from there. You remember my little demonstration earlier?”
Naruto remembered that day. The day when he, Sakura, Sai, and Yamato all stood before him, only to be torn down by Sasuke’s power.
“Yes, I do,” Naruto replied. “I also remember something else from that day.”
Sasuke’s eyes grew wider with curiosity.
“You had another chance,” Naruto continued, his eyes filling with tears. “You had another chance to destroy me! You’ve had two chances to finally break our bond! Our bond is the only bond preventing you from killing Itachi, and you’ve had two chances to destroy it! It proves that you’re not the soulless monster you claim to be.”
Sasuke smiled. “You ignorant b*****d. Don’t you get it? My reasons for keeping you alive are plain and simple. Because I do not want to follow the same road as Itachi and fall victim to his plans. Don’t you get it? This bond isn’t keeping me from destroying him. I can kill him anytime I want.”
“No you cannot!” Naruto interrupted. “I know that, he knows that…” he paused.
“…And you know that as well.”
Sasuke glared. “I’m not going to fall into his little plan. I’m going to kill him my own way! I don’t need that goddamn Mangekyo Sharingan! I don’t need to follow his plan!”
Naruto gazed up, his eyes becoming filled with understanding.
“You already have fallen into his plan,” Naruto said. “He wanted you to continue plotting your revenge. Didn’t he even tell that to you personally? Isn’t revenge the only reason why you’re still alive today? Isn’t revenge part of Itachis’s plan all along?”
Sasuke’s eyes widened as his mind was being bombarded with thoughts and flashbacks.
“The only reason…” Sasuke murmured.
“By giving up your life, your friends, and me…” Naruto continued, and then weapt more. “You continued to follow in his footsteps.”
“Shut up!” Sasuke growled.
“Didn’t he do that?” Naruto asked. “Didn’t he too give up his family and friends all for power?”
“Shut the hell up!” Sasuke growled.
“Didn’t you do that as well?” Naruto continued to ask.
“No one is dead! Don’t you dare compare me to him!” Sasuke snarled back.
“But they’re dead to you, aren’t they? They’re nothing more than a hinderance. You can kill them at any time. That’s what you’ve become.” Naruto continued, his face growing sad and his eyes tearing.
“I am not Itachi! I am not Itachi!” Sasuke repeated with his hands on his head.
“Of course not. You’re Uchiha Sasuke. You’re better than him, only because you can stop this madness. Only because you can return to the village and still be loved.”
Sasuke glared at Naruto. “I am better. But he still must die for my family! You don’t understand that! You were born from nothing! Imagine having it all, and then it being taken away from you by someone you loved!”
Naruto looked directly into Sasuke’s eyes. “I have. And it was you who took it all away.”
Sasuke’s eyes reddened, and the trademark three-pointed Sharingan came into view.
“You…” he said. “I took everything away from you? You still have friends! They’re still there for you!”
“But not family.” Naruto said softly. “My family was taken away by you.”
Sasuke’s glare turned to confusion and anger. “Me?”
“Yes. You are my family. You are my strongest tie. And when you’re not here with me… I feel like my family has died.”
Sasuke glared and his palms began to sing like a thousand birds, sparkling with radiance.
“You, Uchiha Sasuke. I love you more than anyone I know.” Naruto looked directly at Sasuke as his hands turned to electricity and his gaze turned to rage. “Look at what you’ve become. Powerful, but only after giving everything away.”
“Shut the hell up!” Sasuke screamed and instantly drove his hand through Naruto’s heart, the Chidori sparkling behind his back.
Naruto stood tall. “Look at what you’ve done.”
Sasuke was dumbfounded. “You’re still alive?”
Naruto smiled. “I guess you really do want to follow Itachi’s footsteps.”
Suddenly, the Naruto before him exploded into a white cloud.
“s**t!” Sasuke cursed. “Always with the Shadow clones, eh?”
Naruto appeared atop a nearby boulder. He instantly whipped out a weapon scroll and drew his bloody thumb across it, causing a massive blade to emerge from the lifeless paper.
“This will get interesting.” Sasuke said, smiling as he drew his own blade from behind his back.
“Sasuke. Remember what I said before?” Naruto cried. “I’ll take you back even if I have to break your arms and legs!”
Sasuke chuckled. “Humor me.”
Naruto leapt from the boulder and onto the dirt below, charging at Sasuke with blade in hand. He swung left and right with lightning speed and accuracy, only to be blocked effortlessly by Sasuke’s defense. Naruto, swung his sword horizontally, only to have Sasuke leap into the air and somersault behind him, thrusting his sword in a stabbing motion. Naruto cringed as the blade went through his gut. Sasuke removed it and sensed something behind him. He quickly slashed behind him and struck a clone. Only this clone was different. When the attack hit, the sword simply bounced off of it and showered sparks. Sasuke knew that this wasn’t an ordinary bushin, but a rock clone. The stabbed Naruto vanished in a cloud of smoke and in its place lie a kunai with an exploding tag, ready to destroy.
“s**t!” Sasuke yelled and leapt into the air, right before the tag exploded. He spiraled into the air and landed feet first on the side of the jagged peak behind him. He then calmly turned around to face his enemy.
Or enemies. Ten Naruto clones came charging down the cliff’s side, each with their own katana. Sasuke made a stance and fed his electric chakra into the blade. Naruto, noticing this, fed his wind chakra into his. All of his clones leapt into the air. Sasuke dodged the first few and attacked the ones coming for him, waving his blade back and forth, blocking and attacking every clone until only one was left. He screamed and charged at the Naruto before him, only to be surprised as it quickly jolted behind him. Sasuke swung his blade onto Naruto’s, and Naruto’s blade effortlessly pushed Sasuke forward.
“What the hell?” Sasuke said.
Naruto screamed and pushed Sasuke forward, charging at him with blade in hand. He struck Sasuke’s sword with such force and power that it flew into the air and down the cliff’s side. Naruto leapt backward and slashed the blade with his wind-enhanced katana, shattering it in two. He brought the chakra back to his feet and gazed angrily at Sasuke.
Sasuke was stupefied. “How…how the hell…”
“It’s because of you and my dream of becoming Hokage that’s made me into what you see before you.” Naruto replied.
Sasuke smirked. “Your dreams are pathetic. As well as your ties with me.” Sasuke did the necessary hand signs and inhaled, spitting out a river of searing flames onto the unprotected Naruto. The flames swirled and created a dome, only to part and reveal the purpose. A massive ball of chakra in his right palm accompanied by another in his left.
Sasuke instantly read this move and appeared behind Naruto, chidori in hand.
“Too late!” he said and made a stabbing motion toward Naruto’s heart.
Suddenly, out from the cliff, two Naruto clones came up and held Sasuke’s arms. Naruto twirled around, dual Rasengans in each hand. He glared at Sasuke and drove both directly into his chest. Sasuke’s eyes rolled back and his mouth spurted blood as his body feel backward down the cliff. Naruto and his clones each split up and ran down the cliff, following Sasuke’s descent in speed. Each clone leapt across Sasuke and landed a large slam into his face. The real Naruto leapt into the air and landed a flurry of blows onto Sasuke’s stomach, causing vomit mixed with blood to cough out from Sasuke’s body. Naruto lifted Sasuke so his legs were wrapped around his head and fell onto the ground, Sasuke’s skull impacting on the surface, leaving a crater where his head smashed. Naruto leapt off of Sasuke’s body and the two clones beside him disappeared.
“Don’t you seem, Sasuke? You leaving the village and betraying us was not the only way to get power. You deserting and giving up everything you cared for was all Itachis’s plan this whole time!”
Sasuke’s battered face gazed up at Naruto’s body, his sharingan eyes staring.
Naruto lifted Sasuke up by the throat and clenched his fist around it. “Don’t you get it? You fell into Itachi’s trap! Admit it! You gave up everything you loved and joined Orochimaru! You deserted you life and became this soulless, empty shell! Why wont you undertand that?”
Sasuke weakly began to speak. “If I must…follow Itachi’s plan…to kill him…so…be it…”
Naruto’s face turned to rage. “******** idiot!” he said and slammed his face again.
“You’ve become nothing but a pawn! You seek power and the only way you know how to get it is by destroying everything you love? You’re not Itachi, you’re weaker than Itachi. And you always will be as long as you ignore what you love.”
Sasuke’s eyes glared. “Never say that again.” He said weakly.
Naruto glared. “You’re weaker than him! You’re nothing as long as you try to gain this power!”
Sasuke’s face began turning black as wavy lines began to consume his features.
“And now, you’re trying to use that power against me! You’re still trying to kill me, even though you said you weren’t going to.” Naruto said. “You’re so goddamn confusing! Make up your mind? What are you going to do?”
“Naruto…” Sasuke murmured. “die…”
Naruto’s eyes widened. “You’re going to try to kill me, aren’t you?”
Sasuke’s face turned dark, his lips turned purple, the whites of his eyes turned black, his hair turned purple and extended. Out of his back sprouted two massive webbed hands.
Naruto set Sasuke down and backed away in fear.
Sasuke grabbed his neck and held the seal Orochimaru had placed on him so long ago.
“Now would be a good time to use your Kyuubi.” Sasuke said with a serious look on his face.
Naruto smirked, yet his eyes still showed fear. “I told old Kyuubi to take a rest for a while. Besides, I don’t need him to defeat you or anyone else.”
Sasuke smiled. “Naruto…Cocky as ever…”
Naruto held his smile. “Sasuke…Always trying to be the best.”
Sasuke charged at Naruto and slashed his extended fingernails, slashing Naruto’s whiskered cheeks. Naruto flipped back and used two weapon scrolls. One produced a long metallic pole and the other produced two small knives. Naruto quickly attached them and fed his wind chakra to each point, sharpening them tenfold.
Sasuke grinned and charged. Naruto twirled the pole behind his back and swung it’s bladed points at Sasuke, each being blocked by his hands. Naruto winced and flipped backward as Sasuke went on the offensive, using his lightning chakra to explode a force field around him. Naruto’s wind staff easily cut through the chakra’s power and slashed through the bolts, leaving Sasuke open. As he thrust the staff forward, Sasuke vanished. Naruto sniffed the air and the double-taked, thrusting hid pole at Sasuke behind him. He held it at the center and thrust each end at Sasuke, who dodged the blades. Naruto then backed up and grabbed one end of the pole twirling and using his momentum to swing his blade with immense force at Sasuke, who frantically dodged the motions and leapt into the air, flapping his wings a short distance and landing with his back turned to Naruto. He swiped his hands immediately, striking Naruto and tearing his shirt, leaving his chest exposed and bloody.
“Impressive Naruto. You no longer rely on the Kyuubi as the source of your strength.” Sasuke remarked.
“I see you still rely on your cursed seal though.” He said.
Sasuke glared. “This is the power that will destroy my enemy!”
Naruto wiped the blood off his chest. “You said enemy, not enemies! That proves that Itachi is controlling you!”
Sasuke glared and charged. Naruto held up his pole and braced himself as Sasuke’s force slammed into it. He held Sasuke at bay, struggling as the Uchiha put his full force into it.
“How does it feel Naruto? To share the pain of losing the ones you love, eh?”
Naruto held Sasuke above him, squinting as the pressure became too much.
“You told me you love me just now, is that right?” he asked. “Doesn’t the pain want you to kill something? Like, say, Orochimaru?”
Naruto listened and continued to hold Sasuke away from him with his staff.
“Don’t you want him dead for taking me away? Don’t you?” Sasuke questioned.
“He’s already…dead…” Naruto managed to get out. “He’s already dead. It doesn’t matter if I killed him or you did. As long as he’s dead, I am happy. I wasn’t going to throw my life away to kill him.”
“But you threw your life away for me! Is that right?” Sasuke yelled, applying more pressure onto Naruto’s body.
Naruto smiled. “Yes, but not because of hate. Because of love. That’s why we differ, Sasuke. Because you think that hate will get you stronger. Yet, it won’t. It’ll feed off of you until you die.”
Sasuke glared at Naruto. “So you say that I should allow that b*****d Itachi to kill me and anyone else?”
Naruto kept his smile and struggled to hold Sasuke up even more.
“No. But don’t destroy who you love because of it. You see, Itachi told you that you don’t have as much hate as he does. That’s not your weakness. In fact, it’s his. Show him that you can defeat him without following in his crooked path.”
Sasuke’s glare turned softer and lighter.
“Show him that love can kick hate’s a** any day of the weak!” Naruto said and used his remaining strength to lift Sasuke up with the staff and slam him into the ground.
Sasuke panted bled in the crater where he was slammed. His face grew weary and his body grew numb. His hair, eyes, and the rest of his body returned to normal. And his sharingans disappeared. Naruto, shirtless and bloody, walked down to Sasuke, tattered and bloody. He noticed tears trickling down Sasuke’s eyes as he lay motionless in the crater.
“Naruto-kun. I’m so…” he said, afraid to admit his feeling.
Naruto walked down toward his fallen companion and lifted him up into his arms.
“Let’s just go home,” Naruto said, and took one step forward, beginning what would turn out to be a long journey home.
End of Chapter One
TELL ME IF YOU WANT MOREZ!!
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 6:51 pm
woah
impressive o.o
it means that this fic is gonna be really good
nice first chappy
update soon!
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 9:53 pm
You can now view my story on this all new website i made:
http://www.freewebs.com/aliferemembered/
Now for chapter two!Chapter Two Uzumaki Naruto, slashed and weak from battling Uchiha Sasuke, carried said person, beaten harder and bloodier, in his arms as the two made the trek toward home. The two had fought furiously, only to both be left weak and in tears. Naruto paused and let Sasuke rest on the dirt road, panting heavily and kneeling on a rock. He remembered his backpack and brought it forward, unzipping the front and pulling out long strips of gauze. He then carefully unraveled a long strand of gauze and wrapped it around his bare, slashed chest. He stopped and winced at the pain which Sasuke had given him, thinking about how he felt at this moment. He cut off another long strand and propped Sasuke’s head on his lap, using a small square of gauze to cover Sasuke’s nose and cutting it. The patch filled with blood and Naruto heard Sasuke whimper in pain. “Sorry, Sasuke,” Naruto said, carefully using adhesive to stick and a cotton ball to dab the dripping blood. Sasuke winced and then smiled, saying “You broke my nose, you b*****d.” Naruto smiled and cut another square of gauze, covering Sasuke’s cheek. “Naruto,” Sasuke began, “You did nothing wrong. I’m the fool here.” Naruto dabbed adhesive onto the pad. “It’s okay, Sasuke. You’re here with me now. Everything’s okay.” Naruto reassured him. Sasuke frowned. “But, look what I did. You must hate me by now,” he said. Naruto smiled. “Would I risk my own life a countless amount of times for someone I hated?” he said, grinning cheerfully. Sasuke stared into Naruto’s deep, blue eyes. He felt warm and comfortable, knowing that they never lied to him before. Such simple logic defied all doubt. “Of course. Stupid me,” he said. “Those eyes can never lie.” Naruto continued to display cheer. “What’s that supposed to mean?” he asked. Sasuke slowly lifted his arm toward Naruto’s face, but then stopped and let it fall toward the ground. Naruto grabbed it and wrapped it tightly in gauze. “You need to be more careful, Sasuke. You may end up ruining it for good.” He said, applying a relaxing pressure onto the arm. Sasuke’s face curled in pain. “I’m sorry,” he said, “I just…” Naruto held his finger to his mouth. “Shhh, say no more,” he said, “Just shut your eyes and rest.” Sasuke nodded and gazed deeply into Naruto’s eyes, only to shut his own and fall into a deep sleep. “Sleep tight, Sasuke-kun,” Naruto said and removed his jacket, covering Sasuke’s beaten body with it. No… Not this…No… Who are you? Why have you come? Sasuke wandered aimlessly through the snowy forest before him, gazing out into the deep, repetitive woods, knowing he sensed someone’s presence. “Reveal yourself!” he screamed. “Don’t order me,” came a voice from behind. Sasuke twirled around, only to discover a man dressed in a black cloak with red, swirling clouds. The man stood slightly taller than Sasuke and resembled him eerily, only having shorter hair and two lined wrinkles running down from his eyes. “Itachi, what are you…” Sasuke began, only to be interrupted by Itachi’s grip around his throat. “Don’t speak, you ******** whelp,” Itachi cursed, restraining his brother and squeezing his throat tighter. Sasuke couldn’t help but gag as he tried to scream. “You let me go so easily, didn’t you?” Itachi asked, furrowing his brows. “You let me go off scot-free, didn’t you? What ever happened to your life-long goal of finally killing me to honor our family? Whatever happened to all the years you spent training for this day? Why haven’t you improved at all?” Sasuke choked on his words, struggling to breathe as his brother held him against a tree. “Have you given up? You’re a shame to the Uchiha clan. A bigger shame than I. Why? Because even though I destroyed them, you have the nerve to say you don’t care about their death.” Sasuke gazed into Itachi’s Mangekyo Sharingan, shivering in fear of the deadly jutsu. “I will let you speak, Sasuke-kun. Now, I want you to give me a damn good reason why you gave up on your clan.” Itachi said, releasing his grip enough to let Sasuke talk. “I…didn’t give up on them…I gave up on you…” Sasuke said to Itachi’s disbelief. “Killing you for revenge is selfish of me… I can be a greater ninja than you not by killing you… but by outsmarting you at your own game… You will die eventually, Itachi-nii-chan. But I don’t give a s**t about you anymore…” Itachi strengthened his grip tighter around Sasuke’s neck, yet Sasuke proved himself stronger by continuing his speech. “Your weakness is your hate, brother. Your ignorance is your Achilles heal. Your stupidity is what makes me the better Uchiha. I don’t need to prove myself to you. I don’t need to avenge anything. All I want is justice to be done. Anyone can kill you, and I’ll be just fine about it.” Itachi kept his usual facial expression, only this time he gave off his emotion like radiant heat, squeezing his brother’s throat hard enough to draw blood from his lips. “How foolish, little brother. I looked forward to the day you’d kill me. I actually had hope that you would.” Sasuke grinned. “It’s alright. I’ll kill you eventually. But my life isn’t going to be like yours. I’m not going to give it all away for you, but for the people I love.” Itachi spoke. “You really have, changed haven’t you?” Sasuke replied. “Unlike you, weasel.” Itachi’s grip tightened and Sasuke felt his neck muscles rip and his head drop clean off his shoulders… Sasuke screamed in terror and his body shot upward. Naruto, who was still awake despite the pitch black night, looked at him with concern. “You had a nightmare, didn’t you?” Naruto asked, his blue eyes shining with the moonlight. “Yeah…” Sasuke said, nodding in agreement. “…About Itachi?” Sasuke stared directly into Naruto’s eyes and nodded. “I knew it would happen,” Naruto said, “You just need to let him go.” “I’m trying to, Naruto. It’s not that easy.” Sasuke responded doubtfully. “It’s hard to ignore the one person who’s made your life a living hell.” Naruto looked up at the moon. “I know you’re having problems, but just replace Itachi with a healthier obsession. One that wont get you hurt.” Sasuke, trying to see the humor in the previous statement, sighed and leaned back. “Yeah… I’ll try…” he said. “By the way, what are you doing up so late anyway?” Naruto smiled and moved his eyes toward Sasuke’s. “Protecting you,” he said, “You know, keeping watch and stuff. And being awake Justin case you needed to chat.” Sasuke smiled. “Thanks…” Naruto smiled back. “Anytime, Sasuke-kun.” Sasuke felt a rush of emotion flow through his body as his saw Naruto gazing up into the moon. His eyes remained fixated on his, even as they looked upward. His mouth curved upward and he blushed slightly. “Are you okay, Sasuke?” Naruto asked. “Yeah, sorry.” Sasuke responded. Naruto stared into Sasuke’s deep, black eyes and became lost in them. “Sasuke?” he asked. “Yeah,” replied Sasuke. Naruto paused. “I’m glad to have you back.” Sasuke smiled. “I love you too.” Naruto was taken back by the statement. “What?” “Remember when we fought, when you told me you love me?” Sasuke reminded. “Well, I feel the same thing. I’ve finally figured out the bond that we share, Naruto. And it’s that of love. You were my first love this entire time, and I’m only realizing this now. Naruto-kun, I love you.” Naruto smiled and his eyes relaxed. “Sasuke. I’m glad you finally figured it out. I was afraid as well. All of these years, my emotions, my feelings, and my heart have been tugged. I didn’t know what to believe or who to love. And that’s when I realized why I wanted you to return so badly. It’s because I love you. I need you, Uchiha Sasuke. Now we can show our feelings without any fear of what the other would think.” Naruto leaned forward and gently touched Sasuke’s hand. Sasuke leaned forward and placed his hand on Naruto’s chest gently, feeling it as the two drew closer. Both closed their eyes and went in for the kiss. Naruto’s lips planted on Sasuke’s, his mouth tingling with excitement and his body filling with emotion. Sasuke held Naruto’s head up on his lips, pressing them close and sticking his tongue down his throat. Naruto shut his eyes and pressed his chest against Sasuke’s, the two sharing the kiss and sweating. Sasuke leaned his head back and the pairs of lips smacked as they were brought away from each other. “Sasuke…” Naruto said, his face showing a deep desire. “Naruto,” Sasuke replied. Sasuke leaned in and kissed Naruto hard on the lips a second time. This time, it became rougher and more intense. He two shinobi moved their heads back and forth, sucking each other’s face. Sasuke grabbed onto Naruto harder and Naruto smiled and grabbed Sasuke’s buttocks. Sasuke trembled at first, but then moved his body closer to Naruto’s. Sasuke’s hand met Naruto’s spin, and he trickled his fingers down. Naruto giggled and used his hand to gently massage Sasuke’s back, biting Sasuke’s lip and positioning himself more comfortably under his body. Sasuke planted another set of passionate, rough kisses onto Naruto’s lips, Naruto returning with a movement of his head to better accommodate Sasuke’s mouth. Sasuke shivered and lifted his hands, rubbing them upon Naruto’s chest, feeling it with desire. Naruto lifted his head away from Sasuke’s lips and bent it backwards, allowing Sasuke to travel along his neck and coat it with saliva. “Oh, Sasuke,” Naruto said, holding the Uchiha’s head and stroking his soft, black hair. “Uzumaki,” Sasuke said softly as he nibbled away at Naruto’s soft neck. Naruto sat back and kicked off his sandals, exposing his feet, sore from walking. Naruto smiled and ran the soft soles of his feet along the bottom of Sasuke’s legs. Sasuke chuckled and said “Always playful, Naruto…” Naruto looked deeply into Sasuke’s eyes and kissed him on the cheek. Sasuke used both of his feet to remove each sandal, his cold, bare feet becoming fully exposed. Naruto held Sasuke on his chest as Sasuke’s feet ran up against Naruto’s. Naruto’s toes wiggled and stroked Sasuke’s soles softly. Naruto, who loved the feeling of Sasuke’s feet on his, moaned slightly. Sasuke, upon hearing this, ran his foot slightly harder along Naruto’s sole. In return, Naruto rubbed his feet on the tops of Sasuke’s gently. Above the feet, Sasuke’s hand rubbed into Naruto’s chest and his lips met next to them. Naruto held Sasuke close on his chest as Sasuke kissed and stroked it gently. Naruto gazed up into the heavens above him. The twinkle of the stars and the vast multitude of them caught his eye. Just then, a shooting star slowly passed on up ahead. “Sasuke, a meteor!” Naruto exclaimed. “It came from the West!” Sasuke smiled and gazed up into the night sky. “I see the trail,” he said. “Aww, but you missed the best part!” Naruto said, slightly disappointed. “Was it nice?” he asked. “Beautiful, like you,” Naruto said. Sasuke chuckled and kissed Naruto gently on the cheek. He thought deeply about Naruto and how much their love went undetected and for so long. As he gazed up into the sky, mapping out the stars into different patterns and bodies, he painted a fox’s tails. Naruto had always wanted to be with Sasuke ever since the day they first laid eyes on each other. Tonight was a night of love and togetherness. Despite wanting to see everyone back in his hometown, he wished the night would never end. And who knows, he even had a shooting star to back it up, and a whole sky full of supporters. End of Chapter Two
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:00 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:23 pm
Chapter Three
Naruto awoke to a beautiful sky above his head. The birds whistled happy tunes, the wind was gently kissing his face, the sun greeted his vision with color, and the scent of pine was in the air. The whole setting was beautiful, until he realized what the major problem was. His mood suddenly shifted from peacefulness to shock.
“s**t! I fell asleep!” he exclaimed, remembering he was supposed to keep watch over battered Sasuke. He gazed toward where Sasuke was supposed to be asleep. Much to his shock and dismay, Sasuke was gone. “Sasuke!” Naruto yelled to the heavens.
“Cool down, Naruto!” came a voice from the distance. Sasuke emerged from the woods shirtless and drenched in water. In his hands were two large salmon.
“Sasuke, thank goodness,” Naruto said, relieved. “You should be resting!”
“I got breakfast. You fell asleep late last night and woke up later than I did. Four hours later, to be exact. So, I decided to do a little fishing.” Sasuke explained and laid the fish down on thick, green leaves.
“But your wounds! You should have been resting! You could’ve woken me up; I could’ve fished for you!” Naruto said.
“Nah, you deserve rest, what with you always being there for me and all. Think of this as a little apology, and a thank you.” Sasuke said sweetly as he placed the fish on the mat.
“Think you can get a fire going?” Naruto asked playfully.
“I think I’m gonna use flint this time. My chakra’s kinda low.”
“I see,” Naruto said, digging through his pocket. “I have a lighter here for you.”
“Thanks,” Sasuke said, taking Naruto’s lighter and lighting the patch of sticks below the fish. “Why do you carry a lighter?”
“I find it easier to use than ordinary flint or matches,” he explained. “Plus, it helps when I’m on a mission with Shikamaru.”
“Shikamaru smokes?” Sasuke asked, preparing the fish.
Naruto sighed and looked down. “He started ever since Asuma-sensei died.”
Sasuke stopped in his tracks. The name sounded so familiar to him. It has been years, after all, since he’s left Konoha.
“Asuma…Now I remember,” Sasuke said, beginning to place kindling on top of the wrapped fish. “How did he die?”
“Akatsuki,” Naruto said, “An especially dangerous one named Hidan. He performed some sort of jutsu ritual which tied his pain with Asuma-sensei. Using his own immortality, he stabbed himself in the heart, thus leading to Asuma-sensei’s death.”
Sasuke was dumbfounded. “Immortality?”
“Yeah. Him and his partner Kakuzu claimed to be immortal. In fact, I even heard that Asuma beheaded Hidan and Hidan had his partner just sow him back up again.”
“And what happened to both of them?” Sasuke asked.
“Well, Shikamaru took care of Hidan by leading him into a trap and dropping him into a pit to rot. Now Kakuzu, it turns out, was actually extremely old. He’s even fought the First Hokage!”
“What?” Sasuke asked.
“Yeah. He stole people’s hearts and kept himself alive by replacing them when the current one ran out. He had four, I think. So we had to kill him four times.”
“Who killed him?” Sasuke asked again, glancing at the cooking fish.
“I did actually, using that jutsu,” Naruto said.
“I remember that. You used it one time when we fought. You almost got me with it, too!”
“Yeah. Kurenai-sensei was depressed as well. After all, she was carrying his child.” Naruto said, returning to the subject of Asuma’s death.
“Really? Such a shame,” he said, vaguely remembering Kurenai.
“I know. His kid will never see his father.” Naruto said.
Sasuke smiled a bit. “I’m pretty sure she’ll be fine. She’s a tough ninja.”
“Yeah. I heard a story from Kiba that she once tore off Shino-kun’s glasses, broke them in two, and threw them across the table and into the wall when he once said she was gaining weight from eating too much miso pork ramen!”
Sasuke grinned. “Really, now. How is everyone?”
“Pretty good, actually. Everyone’s gotten better since I left to train with Erro Sennin.” Naruto said, recalling his first days back in Konoha.
“Really? If they’re anything like you, then they must be light-years ahead of themselves!”
Naruto laughed. “Actually, when I returned, everyone was already advanced in rank to Chuunin! The only ones who were jonin when I returned were Neji, Kankuro, and Temari.”
“Oh, the two sand ninja.” Sasuke remembered. “Wait, what about Gaara?”
“Gaara is the current Kazekage,” Naruto said blushing and smiling.
Sasuke laughed. “I guess he beat you to it!”
“I’m not too disappointed,” Naruto said and giggled. “When I came back I was still a genin. After retaking my exam and passing with flying colors, I became a chuunin. And now, guess what I am?”
Sasuke closed his eyes and kept a smug look upon his face. “Lemme guess, A Jonin?”
“Nope!” Naruto said, his smile growing even wider.
After pondering and doubting the possibilities in his mind, he finally grew to accept it. Almost.
“Son of a b***h, you’re in ANBU?” Sasuke asked. “But how?”
“I guess they liked what they saw!” Naruto said.
“I mean, well…” Sasuke stuttered, losing his words. “What about your clothing, huh? Where’s your ANBU suit?”
“Going out and finding you wasn’t an ANBU mission. Just something I could do on my spare time.” Naruto said, smiling conceitedly.
“At least have some modesty,” Sasuke complained, pouting.
Naruto smiled and placed his arm behind his head; his usual sarcastic “I’m sorry” pose. Sasuke smiled and gazed at the fish.
“Seems that they’re about done, Naruto,” Sasuke said, unwrapping the fish and handing one to Naruto. “Careful, it’s hot.”
“Thanks, Sasuke,” Naruto said, juggling the grilled salmon in his hands. “Do I just bite in?”
“Well, yeah. Just go ahead and munch into that,” he said, already taking a bite into the fish and chewing on it.
Naruto took a bite as well and closed his eyes, enjoying every last flavor.
“Wow, this is so good dattebayo!” Naruto said with a cute grin spread across his face.
“You still say dattebayo, huh?” Sasuke asked.
“I actually haven’t said that in a month,” Naruto elaborated. “Ever since I joined ANBU, I’ve been pretty out of it. So many missions, so much time, so much effort. It really drains you of your life, y’know?”
“I guess so. We might not have much time to be together,” Sasuke explained.
“Yeah, I guess your right. That is, unless you join ANBU yourself. Then we may get missions together and stuff!” Naruto said with hope.
“Nah, I don’t think ANBU’s my thing,” he said, taking another bite out of his fish.
“Oh, right,” Naruto replied, reminded of Itachi’s affiliation with the Konoha ANBU Black Ops.
“I might just stop at Jonin, train a group of kids, and just live my life relaxed. Kind of like Kakashi-sensei, but less Icha Icha,” Sasuke joked, reminiscing about his sensei’s fascination with dirty novels.
Naruto laughed. “That’s Kakashi’s only weakness dattebayo!”
“I guess he’s not ‘Kakashi-sensei’ to you anymore.” said Sasuke.
“No. In fact, him, me, Sakura and Sai formed that team, remember?” said Naruto.
“Oh yeah. How is that guy, Sai,” asked Sasuke.
“Well, he’s pretty odd if you ask me. He’s a pretty damn good artist, but he shows no emotion at all. In fact, he simply smiles when he tries to show any. He’s also obsessed with penises, if you know what I mean,” said Naruto, winking.
Sasuke chuckled. “Well who wouldn’t be after being in a team with you!”
Naruto blushed and nibbled on his fish more. “He’s in ANBU too, and he’s pretty skilled. He does have a knack for pissing people off, though.”
“I know someone who used to piss people off left and right,” said Sasuke, alluding to Naruto.
Naruto laughed with a piece of fish in his mouth. “Yeah, I was quite the prankster at that age.”
“How old are you now?” Sasuke asked Naruto.
“Sixteen,” Naruto said.
“That must make me 16 as well,” Sasuke said, nibbling more on his fish.
“It's July tenth,” Naruto mentioned. “Your birthday comes in thirteen days.”
“Really?” Sasuke asked, astonished that he had forgotten such an important date.
“Yeah. I can't believe you're older than me, yet you'll be a genin once you return to the village.” Naruto said, biting into his fish again, savoring it flaky, juicy meat.
“Don't remind me. I'll have to take that stupid chunin exam again, have to redo that damn forest of death crap, have to deal with the annoying match-ups at the end, and become embarrassed in front of hundreds of people who'll all be like 'Isn't that the Uchiha kid who betrayed Konoha?'” Sasuke complained aloud.
“I had a similar problem, though not that bad,” Naruto explained. “Everyone was like 'Isn't that that brat from before?' or 'Even though he beat Neji all those years ago he still didn't pass?' or my favorite 'How many times must he have failed the exam to be this far behind his age group?'”
Sasuke laughed. “Your skeptics must have died when you became a member of ANBU.”
“Oh yeah. They sure were. In fact, this one girl, who hated me ever since that whole accidental kiss thing I gave you, complained to the Granny Tsunade saying 'If he's in ANBU then how come I'm not in your seat giving him missions?'”
“Sounds like a troublesome woman,” Sasuke said.
“She kind of was. The b***h even tried to throw a punch at me! I just grabbed her fist and told her to calm down by staring her down.”
“What happened then?” Sasuke asked, biting into his fish more.
“Well, she blushed and smiled, telling me I was 'a different person than what she remembered before.”
“Sounds like she thought you were hot. Who can blame her for that?”
Naruto laughed. “I'm so glad I beat some sense into you!”
Sasuke cackled back. “Sure am! In fact, I think that you are my perfect birthday present.”
“Aaww, how cute,” Naruto teased, sticking out his tongue playfully.
“By the way, where the hell are we?” Sasuke asked, scanning the open patch amidst the forest.
“Luckily, ANBU training made me less directionally challenged. We're about 15 degrees south-southeast of Konohagakure.”
“Wow, you've gotten smarter, haven't you?”
Naruto blushed. “I guess so!”
“What's you IQ?”
“I think they told me 175,” Naruto said.
Sasuke choked on his salmon and spit it up while Naruto gazed at him with a look of frustration.
“Why is that so suprising?” he asked.
“I didn't know you were that smart!”
“I'm not an idiot anymore,” Naruto explained with a pout on his face.
“Never thought you were,” Sasuke said attempting to win Naruto back on his side.
“Uh, yeah you did. Remember way back in the day when you and I were both on team 7? Yeah, you thought I was an idiot back then.”
“Well, I underestimated you. Everyone did, Naruto. After all, how can an idiot master a new technique not even the Fourth Hokage can master? How can an idiot surpass Kakashi-sensei in rank and in power? How can an idiot become a member of the ANBU Black Ops? How can an idiot save a stubborn a*****e like myself?”
Naruto sighed and leaned into Sasuke's chest. Sasuke responded by holding his salmon in one hand and gently brushing Naruto's hair with the other.
“Thanks, Sasuke,” Naruto said softly.
“No, thank you Naruto,” Sasuke responded.
For a few romantic seconds, Naruto gazed up at Sasuke as Sasuke gazed into the sky.
“We really should get moving,” Naruto said.
“I agree. Let's pack up what we left and eat our fish on the way,” Sasuke suggested.
“Good idea,” Naruto said. “I kind of wish we could stay out here forever.”
“Now Naruto, we can't both abandon our village, can we?” Sasuke said, smiling.
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:24 pm
Chapter Four
With the campsite packed and the fire put out, Uzumaki Naruto and Uchiha Sasuke were ready to get themselves on their way homeward bound. Naruto took a fresh, deep breath of air and exhaled, the oxygen he inhaled filling his lungs with spirit and desire. Sasuke, on the other hand, looked at his feet worried. He thought about the thoughts that would possibly be passed around within the ninja in his age group. He worried that many would not accept his return. He feared the icy shoulder...
“Sasuke, are you alright?” Naruto asked, pausing a few meters ahead of Sasuke.
“Oh, yeah, sure Naruto,” Sasuke said hesitantly, showing an obvious look of worriedness on his face.
Naruto saw the look, but decided to give Sasuke time to think.
“Alright. Are you up for dashing?” Naruto asked.
“I think I'm alright, but we can't go too fast, k?” Sasuke said.
Naruto smiled with big, bright eyes, trying to cheer Sasuke up. Sasuke looked up and smirked slightly, yet his eyebrows still slanted in a concerned manner. Naruto quickly leaped into the tree branch above him and into the next. Sasuke groaned and quickly followed Naruto. The two ninja traveled extremely quickly, pushing against a few of the branches to propel themselves forward.
“Naruto, slow down!” Sasuke yelled ahead.
“Sorry, Sasuke,” apologized Naruto, “I'm just so excited to bring you back to the village!”
“Stop acting so cute and hyper for once, will you?” Sasuke complained.
“Alright,” Naruto said begrudgingly and slowed his pace slightly to even Sasuke's.
Sasuke spotted something in the corner of his eye. Something disturbing.
“Naruto!” Sasuke yelled. “Stop!”
Naruto nodded sent chakra to his feet, gluing him onto a tree branch alongside Sasuke.
“What is it?” he asked Sasuke.
“Look. By that tree over there,” he said.
Naruto nodded again and put his fingers together, summoning a Shadow Clone. The Naruto bushin leapt toward the tree ahead and stared at it quietly. Out of the blue, a blade protruded from trunk of the tree and directly into the Naruto clone's head, rendering it lifeless and causing it to explode in a poof of white smoke.
“A trap,” Naruto whispered. “This forest is bobby trapped.”
“What if it wasn't a trap, but really an enemy's jutsu?” Sasuke inquired.
“No. Before the bushin died, it saw a very small etching on the tree. Whoever did this doesn't want us to make it back to the village.” Naruto explained.
“So, what do we do now?” Sasuke asked again, almost flabbergasted by the notion that he was asking Naruto for help.
“We set off all the traps,” he said. “Kage bushin no jutsu (shadow clone jutsu)!” he yelled, and a thousand Naruto clones appeared before him.
“Wait, Naruto!” Sasuke said, interjecting the clones' movements, “What if there are other types of traps in this forest? We don't know what this enemy is capable of.”
The Narutos all thought for a little bit. Then, all but ten poofed into white puffs while the rest huddled.
“We can't take the alternate route, because that could cause a breach in security if we lead the enemy straight through the secret entrance.” One clone said.
“And we don't know how widespread the traps could be,” another clone said.
“Ack! What if there's only one trap?” one said frantically.
“What if they weren't even meant for us?” another asked.
“Why don't we just continue ahead and see if there are more?” another clone suggested.
“We were going to do that before. I guess Ockham's Razor prevails!”
Sasuke sighed.
“Alright, break!” the clones shouted in unison and then shot off into the woods.
The real Naruto stood behind.
“This shouldn't take too long,” he said confidently.
“Let's hope so,” Sasuke replied, yet in his heart he wanted as much time as possible to ponder how his companions would react to his leaving the village.
“Anyway, let's chat,” Naruto said, sitting down on the branch.
Sasuke's senses perked. “About what?”
“Well, what're you gonna say to everyone when you return to the village?” Naruto asked inquisitively.
Sasuke pondered shyly and looked away. “I haven't really..thought about anything ...yet.”
“C'mon. How about 'I'm back, everyone!' or 'It's the return of Uchiha Sasuke!'” Naruto joked. “Or how about 'Orochimaru was an a*****e anyway!'”
Sasuke tried to smile, but sighed and sat down before Naruto.
“Or you could apologize,” Naruto said, putting on his serious face.
Sasuke looked into Naruto's deep, blue eyes.
“You could tell them how you feel about leaving now that you're back home. You could say hello to everyone, or-”
“I'm afraid,” Sasuke said.
“Don't be afraid of them, Sasuke. They worked hard, hell, even risked their lives to see you back here in Konoha. Don't you think that the way to make them happy is by being there for them?”
“Sakura-chan,” Sasuke said. “I vaguely remember her new appearance. How is she?”
“She's strong. She's probably as strong as Granny Tsunade. And she's also got the healing touch. She's a tough woman, but weak when it comes to you.”
Sasuke looked at Naruto directly again.
“She misses you,” Naruto said. “We all miss you.”
Sasuke blushed. “Is she still obsessed about me?”
Naruto looked up in thought.
“I actually don't know. We both were kind of obsessed about you. Loving you, well...”
“What?” Sasuke asked.
“I guess we moved on. I sort of parted with her, and she sort of parted with you. I went to you..and she...”
Sasuke smiled. “Who's the lucky guy who got her?”
“...Me,” Naruto said looknig at Sasuke's feet in shame.
Sasuke was stunned.
“She looked at me differently when I arrived back at the village. I was taller, more mature, and stronger than I was when I left. She finally saw that in me, and, it took her a months, but we recently hooked up.”
“I see...” Sasuke said.
“Yeah,” Naruto said shyly. “It's not the same, though. When I was younger, I didn't know what I wanted. All I knew was that Sakura-chan was the one for me. Then, as I grew older, I thought about you more than her. She was secondary, but I could never really say that you were the one for me, y'know?”
Sasuke nodded.
“So, even though I loved Sakura, I also loved you behind all that. In fact, I thought I could never have you, so I decided to finally be with her.”
“You did love her first,” Sasuke said.
“Yeah. I was crazy about her. Now, I don't know who to pick. Morally, I guess she would be the right choice. But, it won't be the same knowing I could have you. I can't imagine breaking up with her. I might as well break my skull right now; at least she'll pity me.”
Sasuke nodded, a sad look appearing on his face.
“What am I going to do?” Naruto cried and buried his head in his hands.
Sasuke reached forward and kissed Naruto's head gently.
“What does your heart tell you?” he asked.
Naruto looked up at a smiling Sasuke.
“To bring a smile to your face, no matter what,” Naruto said.
“You're a smart guy, Naruto. And a better ninja than I, or anyone else I know. You'll figure this out.”
Naruto smiled and looked up a bit more, soon followed by another frown and averted eyes.
“What about Sakura? I don't want to hurt her. If she knows I left her for her other love interest, she'd be devastated. Both of her loves, me and you, her original anti-drug... gone.”
Sasuke embraced Naruto tightly, wrapping his arms around him and gripping him with his hands.
“I don't know. She's so strong, she'll get over it quickly.”
“I hope you're right. I love her, but not the same as I love you.”
Sasuke blushed and kissed Naruto gently on the lips.
“Sir!” came a loud voice from the woods. “Everything is in order, sir! No more traps are left from here to Konoha!”
Naruto stared at his bushin and made it vanish.
“We'd better get going,” he said, standing up. “Now you got me worried about returning!”
Sasuke chuckled.
The two sprinted forward, leaping confidently from tree to tree. Much was on their minds, yet they both knew one thing. That their love would make everything better. Eventually. No...
...hopefully.
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:24 pm
Chapter Five
In the distance, behind them, Naruto heard something faint trickle on the grass. He knew it wasn't a leaf, or an animal of some sort. No, this sound had a distinct push upon the ground that, even if it only lasted a fraction of a second, could easily be identified as human.
“Sasuke,” Naruto said softly as the two sprinted forward to Konoha, “We're being followed, right now. Do as I say and don't stop running.”
Sasuke nodded and kept his pace.
“There you are,” said a cold, dark voice to himself as he stalked the two ninja. “The Jinchuuriki containing the kyuubi. And look who we got here, Uchiha Sasuke. He's pretty high in the bingo book. The two of them here together is simply perfect, mmm!”
“Why do you always go 'mmm' at the end of every sentence?” asked a second, less serious voice.
“Because I can, that's why,” replied the first man to the second.
“Isn't that Itachi-kun's little bro?” asked the second man. “The one who wants to kill him?”
“Yes, it is,” came the first voice. “I think we can do Itachi-kun a favor by bringing him not only the kyuubi, but his little brother's head as well, mmm!”
“There you go with the 'mmm'. Are you hungry senpai?”
“Idiot...”
“What did you discover?” asked Sasuke.
“Well, the clone I sent out collected that there are two of them,” Naruto explained. “They referred to your brother as a friend, saying Itachi-kun. One has a deep voice while the other is sort of an idiot.”
“Akatsuki,” Sasuke said, groaning. “Probably that masked guy and the clay guy.”
Naruto nodded.
“Deidara and Tobi. Despite Deidara's short temper and Tobi's clumsiness, they do make a pretty good team.”
Sasuke thought. “We should split up. I don't think we can outsmart them together.”
“No,” Naruto said. “We have to stick together. No more separation.”
“Why? Afraid you'll lose me again?” Sasuke asked.
“Exactly. I don't want you out of my site, love.”
Sasuke grinned. “Alright!”
“What'd they say? What'd they say?!” asked Tobi frantically.
“Goddammit, shut up!” Deidara said, holding a small white mold to his ear.
“Tell me! What did Mr. Bug tell you?”
“It appears they are afraid of separation. It seems that the two are...in love.” Deidara reported.
“Aaaaw, how sweet! The two finally went gay for each other! Just like you and Itachi-kun!” Tobi said, obviously giddy underneath his whirling mask.
“Shut the hell up about that!” Deidara yelled, embarrassed a bit. “It also appears that we're being watched by a kage bushin.”
“Where? Lemme at 'em!” Tobi growled.
“Tobi! Hurry the ******** up or we'll lose them!”
“I'm tired. Why can't you make a giant bird thingie with your clay?” Tobi complained.
“One, to conserve clay. Two, because every damn person can see it in the sky. And three, shut up!”
“Okay, geez. Mr. Grouch...”
“I heard that!”
“Anything new?” asked Sasuke.
“Apparently they know about the clone. And apparently they're listening in on us somehow.”
Sasuke looked up and down Naruto's backside not for pleasure, but as a search to find any odd substance. Suddenly, he spotted a tiny little ant, poking its head out of Naruto's blonde, lucious hair.
“Naruto,” Sasuke said. “Look at me.”
Naruto gazed behind, still able to run forward. Sasuke made a gesture by lifting up his hands and shaking his own hair. Naruto repeated and, surely enough, a small clay insect came falling out of his hair. Sasuke dodged it, remembering the explosive nature of Deidara's clay. The small clay insect smacked against a tree and instantly, the tree exploded, sending splinters and debris flying in the two Akatsuki's path.
“Damn,” Deidara swore.
“Mr. Bug died, didn't he?” Tobi asked.
“I believe so. However...” Deidara pondered.
“What is it senpai?” Tobi asked.
“Why don't you be a good boy and play with the kage bushin, will you?” Deidara asked.
“Sure thing, senpai!” Tobi said with a playful salute and vanished from sight.
“Whoa!” Naruto said, gasping.
“What?” Sasuke asked again.
“My clone just...vanished,” he explained. “It was just listening in on the two, and then Deidara told Tobi to go 'play' with the kage bushin. Then, darkness. Then, poof.”
“How do we lose these guys?” Sasuke asked.
Naruto thought for a few seconds. He then stopped abruptly, sitting down on a tree branch.
“What are you doing? We can't rest now!” Sasuke complained.
“Alright, come on out you two, we know you're following us!” Naruto yelled.
Sasuke ran toward Naruto and slammed his hand over his mouth.
“What are you doing?” he inquired.
“You'll see,” Naruto said, winking.
“Hey, he said he knows we're here! Let's go!” Tobi said, attempting to sprint toward the two ninja, only to be pulled by the collar.
“No, he obviously wants us to come out in the open.” Deidara said.
“But what if he knows you know and wants you to do the opposite of he what he thinks he knows what you'll do?” Tobi asked.
Deidara stared at him puzzled.
“No, for now, I call the shots, okay mmm?” Deidara asked.
“Yessir senpai sir!” Tobi obeyed.
“We still need to surprise them. We can't hide forever.” Deidara planned.
“I love suprises!”
Deidara grinned. “I'm sure you do.”
“They're not going to come out, Naruto. Let's just get the hell outta this place!”
Naruto sat and smiled. “Wait for it...”
“For what?” Sasuke asked.
“Wait for it...” Naruto built up. “Wait for it...”
Sasuke simply stared with anticipation at the surrounding area.
“Now!”
“So, how should we surprise them?” Tobi asked.
“I don't know yet...” Deidara answered.
“Y'know who likes surprises?” came a new voice from behind the two.
Deidara and Tobi twirled around and came face to face with three Naruto clones, each holding a ball of chakra in their hand.
“s**t,” Deidara swore.
“We do!” shouted the clones, who threw their arms into both Deidara and Tobi. Sending them exploding and spiraling backwards, slamming into a wall of rock.
“Don't mess with the best!” Naruto shouted arrogantly.
“We agree,” came a familiar voice from behind.
The Naruto clones twirled around to face Deidara and Tobi, standing atop a tree branch.
“First rule of surprises,” Deidara began, flipping his long, yellow bang.
“Don't tell anyone?” asked Tobi.
“No, you idiot. Don't do something expected.”
A Naruto clone stared at the Deidara and Tobi they sent flying into the rockwall. They were nothing more than splattered clay scattered amongst the rocks.
Deidara held his finger up to his mouth, preparing for a blast.
Over by the tree branch where Naruto lay and Sasuke complained, a hundred crawling ants consumed the two and buried them underneath, suffocating them and filling their lungs.
“s**t...Can't...breathe...” Sasuke stammered.
“Don't worry you guys, we wont kill you! Just blow you all to hell!” screamed Deidara, who triggered the jutsu which binded Sasuke and Naruto. The pressure of the ants crawling through their bodies was so great, that the two were instantly knocked out from lack of oxygen.
“Almost too easy mmm,” Deidara said as he walked toward the two lifeless bodies on the treetop. “Let's get these guys to the lair, and fast. The boss has been dying to get the nine-tails mmm!”
“Wait, senpai.” Tobi said.
“Not now, Tobi,” Deidara ordered, “Let it wait and help me out.”
Tobi, whose head was turned away, looked forward at Deidara-senpai again.
“Okay senpai, sorry,” Tobi apologized.
“This Uchiha kid will get us rich for sure!” Deidara said, smiling.
“I thought you didn't care much for money,” Tobi said.
“Nonsense. An artist needs money in order to express his art more mmm!”
Deidara walked up to Sasuke and went to lift him up. Just then, he sensed something odd.
“Senpai!” Tobi screamed.
Deidara twirled around and froze in place. It was already too late.
MUHAHAHAHAHA!!! blaugh domokun SUSPENSE NOOBS!!!
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:38 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:42 am
REMEMBER, you can still read this on its site, especially now that it's completed! www.freewebs.com/aliferememberedChapter Six Deidara gazed down upon the restrained boys, trapped within his own twisted justsu of clay. He smirked and uttered a defining “hmph”, leaning down to lift up the Uchiha first. Just then, an odd sensation rushed through his body. “Senpai!” screamed Deidara's bumbling assistant Tobi. Deidara twirled around, only to face Uzumaki Naruto and a blinding, swirling, shuriken-like accumulation of blue chakra in his palm. There were two of him, one behind the other. Deidara struggled to move, but found the Uchiha tightly gripping his body. “s**t!” he swore openly as he braced for impact. Naruto slammed the swirling shuriken of chakra into Deidara's body, sending him and Sasuke flying backwards and into the cliffside. Deidara slammed against the wall right after Sasuke leaped away, avoiding serious back injury. “This isn't the end, mmm!” Deidara screamed just before passing out and collapsing to the ground. “Nice job with the bushins Naruto,” Sasuke complimented referring to the two trapped clones Deidara held prisoner. “Where's Tobi?” he asked. “Probably ran and hid. Coward,” Sasuke said, looking away from Naruto and to where Tobi once stood. “Anyway, we should kill Deidara,” Naruto said. Sasuke looked shocked. “Naruto!” “He's too dangerous to be kept alive,” Naruto argued. “Besides, he's a member of Akatsuki, and like all Akatsuki, he is wanted for various crimes. Had this been an ANBU mission, he would be killed on the spot.” “I understand,” Sasuke submitted. Naruto pulled out his kunai and walked toward Deidara's body, lifting up his head and pulling back his hair. He held his kunai above Deidara's Adam's apple and prepared to slice. “Wait!” Sasuke interrupted. “What, Sasuke?” Naruto asked, impatiently waiting. “What if we take Deidara in for questioning?” Sasuke suggested. “That way we can find out more about the Akatsuki. Their goals, their victims, their members, their headquarters, anything possible! We can't lose this golden opportunity, Naruto.” Naruto thought. “Okay, but we'll have to get home quick if we are to get there before he wakes up.” “Right,” Sasuke agreed. With that said and done, Naruto pulled out a weapon scroll and pulled out a string with a blade attached at the end. Sasuke held Deidara's body upright while Naruto bounded him, infusing chakra into a special seal put on Deidara's back. Sasuke carried Deidara on his back while Naruto led the way through the remaining patch of forest. Alone and worried, Tobi sat cross-legged underneath a tree, making sure to conceal his position as he attempted to make contact with the Akatsuki leader. A shadow of Tobi appeared in a large, empty room with the shadow of another figure sitting at a chair, staring at him with brooding, orange eyes. “Tobi, report,” the man said to him. “Sir, Deidara-senpai got captured by the kyuubi kid and Itachi's little brother.” Tobi reported. “What?” the man asked. “Are they taking him to Konoha now?” “I think so. What should we do?” Tobi asked. The man laughed. “Tobi, Tobi, Tobi. Deidara wont go down that easy, y'know. You should know by now of his charming yet stubborn disposition.” “I guess so, but what if they kill him?” Tobi asked. “Then we will just have to move on. Like we did with Sasori, Kakuzu, and Hidan so long ago.” “Okie-dokie! Who's gonna be my new friend until DeiDei comes back?” The leader smiled a bit. “Just you wait. You'll have your friend. Just be sure to follow my instructions.” Naruto stopped and leaped down in front of the massive gates to the Hidden Leaf Village. Sasuke followed and smiled. Fear soon consumed him, and he nearly dropped his hostage thinking about his peers. “Sasuke, don't worry. Everyone’s gonna love you,” Naruto reassured. “Not everyone is as understanding as you, Naruto-kun.” he said gazing downward. Naruto smiled. “Well then I'll make them understand dattebayo!” Sasuke inhaled deeply and continued walking beside Naruto toward the gate. Two familiar faces waited by the gate's security hut. Both wore goatees, but one had hair going downward while the other boasted a bandage on his nose and wilder hair. “Hey, Kotetsu,” said the first man. “Yeah Izumo?” replied the second. “Isn't that Uzumaki Naruto in the distance?” Izumo asked. Kotetsu looked in the distance. “Yeah. And he's brought someone.” Izumo looked and saw two people approaching. The other was unidentifiable. “Who's the other guy?” Izumo asked. Naruto drew closer and closer to both with Sasuke trailing close behind. As he approached the two, Kotetsu and Izumo remained frozen in shock, realizing who the second individual was. “Hey Kotetsu, Izumo!” shouted Naruto, waving as he passed. Kotetsu and Izumo gazed at the figure who passed behind Naruto. “Isn't that Uchiha Sasuke?” Izumo asked. “Isn't that an Akatsuki member?” Kotetsu asked. Naruto looked behind to Sasuke, grinning with his arms behind his head. “See, isn't that a great feeling?” he asked. Sasuke remained silent. “Before we talk to anyone else, can we drop Deidara off with Hokage-sama first?” Sasuke recommended. Naruto nodded. “Whatever you want.” Tsunade sat down in her office, shuffling papers and sipping random amounts of Sake. Her assistant, Shizune, walked in with her hands on her hips and Tonton, Tsunade's pig, following her. “Tsunade-sama! No sake for you at this hour!” Tsunade sipped more, leaving a smudge of lipstick on her cup. “Ugh, Tsunage-sama...” Shizune complained. Just then, two knocks were heard on the door. “Hey, Tsunade no baja (granny tsunade)! Open up!” came the voice. “Ugh, Uzumaki Naruto,” Tsunade groaned. “Come in!” Naruto opened the door and burst through, running toward Tsunade's desk and slamming his hands on it. Though Tsunade glared, Naruto grinned widely. “And the meaning of you barging into my office and throwing your hands on my desk disrupting my work and spilling a small amount of my sake on the table is?” she said with a vein popping on her head. Without warning, a tall, lean figure walked in carrying a person on his shoulder dressed in black. Tsunade gazed past Naruto's triumphant gaze and stared shocked. “Uchiha Sasuke, I presume,” she said. “Yep,” Sasuke said, looking at her with a shy stare. “It's been awhile.” “From the look in your eyes I guess you returned here for good, right?” Tsunade asked. “And I brought a gift.” Sasuke said, dropping Deidara onto the ground before her. Tsunade knew it was an Akatsuki, but she still could not believe her eyes seeing one in captivity like this. “Did you do this?” she asked. “We did. Naruto did most of the work, believe it or not.” Sasuke explained. Naruto blushed. “Sasuke, you're giving me too much credit!” “Well, I'd like to commend you for bringing Sasuke back with us, Naruto. And for capturing an Akatsuki member.” “Anytime Hokage-sama,” Naruto said. “But, you were gone for a few days. Your team was worried. You missed quite a few missions because of your little absence.” “It's okay, Hokage-sama. I'd trade any amount of missions to save a friend.” Naruto explained shifting his eyes toward Sasuke. “That's nice,” Tsunade then turned to Sasuke. “Now, Sasuke. You do realize the seriousness of what you have done, haven't you?” “Yes, Hokage-sama. I apologize for every wrong I have committed. I realized the error of my ways and decided to rejoin Konoha. I don't care if I'll never become anything more than a genin for the rest of my life. I want to start anew. And I'll do whatever it takes.” “Good. Now that that's settled, there is the manner of Deidara. I'll have a squad of Tokubetsu Jonin interrogate him until he spills some valuable information. Until then, Naruto, I have a mission for you.” Naruto perked up and stood upright. “Yes Hokage-sama.” “I want Sasuke to become reacquainted with his friends. Make sure to show him some of the changes we've done around here. Also, make sure he has a place to stay.” Sasuke perked up and smiled. “Will do, Hokage-sama!” Naruto replied, smiling widely.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:49 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 8:17 pm
want more? or do you wish to whore the fic's site links? XDXD Seriously, I'll give them to you if you want and don't like to wait for posts.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 8:01 am
The following are two more chapters from the fic:
Chapter Seven
Sasuke's hands shook nervously as he stumbled forward, his head spinning with anxiety.
“What's everyone going say, Naruto?” he asked mervously.
Naruto turned to face him.
“Sasuke, it'll be fine,” Naruto encouraged. “Nothing is going to happen! Hey, look!”
Sasuke stopped while Naruto faced the people behind him.
“Hey, Shikamaru!” Naruto greeted and bolted off.
“Hey, Naruto,” Shikamaru responded, toted in his usual green chuunin jacket. “Who's your friend?”
“I think you know him,” Naruto said smiling. “Remember him?”
Shikamaru studied harder and suddenly gasped.
“It couldn't be! You?” he said in shock.
Sasuke turned around to face Nara Shikamaru with a blank stare. Naruto looked disappointed.
“Sasuke, at least smile!” he complained.
“Sorry,” he said, grinning slightly. “What's up?”
Shikamaru grinned and extended his hand. “Welcome back. We risked our asses trying to bring you back and Naruto here does it in two days! Shows improvement.”
Naruto blushed. “We also managed to pick up an Akatsuki member as well.”
Shikamaru grinned. “No joke! Which?”
“Deidara,” Sasuke said.
“Ah, the androgynous clay-head,” Shikamaru commented, referring to Deidara's feminine appearance. “What about his partner, Tobi?”
“Ran off when Deidara was captured,” Naruto said. “He's less of a threat than Deidara. In fact, we're not sure about him at all.”
“Don't underestimate an enemy belonging to an organization that powerful,” Shikamaru said. “Don't make the same mistakes as we did.”
Sasuke looked worried. “Sorry.”
“No problem. It was pretty troublesome looking for you, anyway. Thank you for popping up so quickly!”
Sasuke grinned.
“Well, we should get going,” Naruto said.
“Why run? The word should've already spread about Sasuke's return. And look who's coming now.” Shikamaru said, gesturing behind Naruto and Sasuke.
The two turned their heads to face Sakura and Ino racing toward Sasuke. Sasuke gasped as the two leaped onto him instantaneously with tears in their eyes.
“Oh, Sasuke-kun!” Sakura screamed. “When I heard the news about you returning, I couldn't believe my ears! We've missed you so much!”
Ino nuzzled into Sasuke's exposed chest. “Hey, I love the new outfit Sasuke-kun. It's pretty hot!”
“Ahem,” Naruto said, tapping his foot.
“Oh, hi hun,” Sakura said, leaping off Sasuke to face Naruto.
“Yeah, hi Naruto,” Ino said quickly. “I guess since you're with Naruto-kun, Sakura, I get to keep Sasuke to myself!”
Sasuke blushed and smiled.
“Still obsessive I see,” he said.
Sakura looked at Naruto lovingly, and Naruto tried his best to imitate the same feeling.
“Naruto-kun. Thank you,” Sakura said, hugging Naruto deeply. “Thank you for keeping your promise.”
Naruto returned the hug and looked directly into Sasuke's black eyes. Sasuke returned the look as he was being embraced by Ino. Both knew that the two girls before them would be heartbroken. And both knew that their love was purer than any other love they could receive from anyone else.
Tobi held his map and twirled it upside-down as he walked through a piece of land covered in wilderness.
“I'm so lost...” he said. “I wish I could fly like Deidara-senpai. Oh wait, I still have some of his clay!”
Tobi reached into his side pouch and drew a small amount of clay, molding it into a tiny bird-like model. He put his two fingers up to his face and made straining noises as he attempted to bring it to life.
“Gah...” Tobi gasped, straining too hard. “Deidara-senpai makes it look so easy... I wish I could make things come to life like he can.”
Tobi shrugged and continued walking through the woods.
Sasuke smiled as the younger genin surrounded him, leaping up and down with joy! Among them were Konohamaru, Naweki, and Udon, all but one of which leaped up and down with joy. That one was Konohamaru.
“I don't get it,” he says pouting. “This guy betrays Konoha, leaves the village, joins Orochimaru, and gets Naruto-dono all depressed. Now he returns and he's a hero.”
Naruto put his hand on Konohamaru's shoulder.
“He's changed, Konohamaru. He's been going through a lot of tough times. He didn't know what to believe in. Him returning is a sign of good things to come.”
Konohamaru's pout turned to a smirk.
“He's like you, Naruto-kun!”
Naruto smiled. “I guess your right.”
Sasuke gazed at Naruto and Naruto gazed back. The two were lost in each other's stares.
“Um, Naruto-kun?” Konohamaru asked, looking directly into Naruto's lovesick stare. “Naruto, are you alright?”
Naruto snapped out of his trance. “Sorry, just. A distraction...”
“I bet it was,” Konohamaru said with a smirk.
“This is the spot!” Tobi exclaimed. “Yup! Tattered trees, a pit filled with rocks, and some dirt.” Tobi pulled out a small shovel from his pouch and held it in the air. “Time to start digging!”
Sasuke walked side-by-side Naruto, gazing around the village with awe.
“Amazing,” he said. “I can't believe everything is just the way it was when I left.”
“Actually, it's better!” Naruto described. “The movie theater was upgraded to 18 screens. Maybe we could catch a movie or something later on.”
“I'd like that,” Sasuke said, his eyes wandering to the faces carved on the side of the mountain. “They added The Fifth to the rocks!”
“Yeah. Now she can stare down the entire village at once!”
The two laughed and continued their pace. Just then, a loud barking noise came from around a corner. Sasuke turned around to face a massive white dog in mid-jump, ready to tackle him. Sasuke leaped backward and drew his sword in defense.
“Whoa whoa whoa, easy there tiger!” came a loud voice from atop the beast. Why, it was non other than Inuzuka Kiba and his trusty dog/ steed Akamaru. Kiba was wearing a leather jacket and tight,black pants. His usual look to the others, but to Sasuke it was new.
“Kiba?” Sasuke asked.
“The one and only!” Kiba exclaimed. “And Akamaru's happy to see you as well!”
The massive Akamaru barked loudly, lapping Sasuke's cheek with his extended tongue.
“Hey, Kiba!” Naruto greeted.
“Well, well, if it isn't Uzumaki Naruto. We haven't spoken ever since you joined ANBU. How is it there?”
Naruto shrugged. “It's kind of overrated. I mean, the missions are nice and tough, but their's just so many of them, y'know?”
“You're beginning to sound like Shikamaru!” Kiba joked.
Naruto giggled.
“So, Uchiha Sasuke. What was it like always on the run?” Kiba questioned.
Sasuke turned away with a sad gaze.
“Ooops...” Kiba said. “Uh...I mean...”
“Ugh, Kiba! And just when he was getting in a good mood, too!” Naruto exclaimed.
“No, I'm fine,” Sasuke said. “Just thinking.”
“Eheh, sorry.” Kiba apologized.
Akamaru let out a small growl.
“I know, don't rub it in!” Kiba retorted. “Well. It was nice seeing you, but I have to meet up with Kurenai-sensei and help her train. See you guys!”
Kiba leaped on top of Akamaru and bolted off.
“You alright, Sasuke?” Naruto asked Sasuke, putting his arm on his shoulder affectionatly.
“Yeah, let's go catch that movie!” Sasuke said.
The two ninja walked slowly toward the theater up ahead, showing off their smiles and happy that no one was around to spoil the moment.
“Dig dig dig!” Tobi sung. “Dig dig dig, diggy dig dig, dig dig dig, diggy dig dig!” Tobi rapidly scooped up more and more dirt with his tiny plastic shovel. “I can't wait to get my prize!” Tobi kept digging and digging, not complaining at all. His motivation was friendship, and he was about to receive it.
The movie raged onscreen. Princess Fuun, the protagonist, screamed and waged war against the evils of oppression. Naruto was fixated on the movie, having always been a fan of Princess Fuun, especially after Team 7's mission to the Snow Country. Sasuke, who enjoyed the moive, was less enthralled. His hand crept to Naruto's and gently stroked it. Naruto noticed this and gazed at Sasuke, his blue eyes reflecting the screen majestically. Sasuke leaned his head over and onto Naruto's shoulder, smiling widely. Naruto leaned his head into Sasuke's as well. Both eyes returned to the movie.
“Give it up Princess Fuun!” yelled the main villain. “You'll never defeat me with such petty allies as love and kindness!”
Fuun stood upright, brushing off her opponent's attack.
“If love and kindness are weak,” Princess Fuun started, “than hate and malice must be an ant. An ant that deserves nothing but a good crushing.”
“I always say this, but that was the best Fuun movie yet!” Naruto shouted.
Sasuke, who was beside him, smiled and replied. “You always said that, Naruto-kun. Ever since we saw the last one together.”
“Oh yeah,” Naruto remembered. “That one was great too. This one brings back memories of old Team 7.”
“Yeah,” Naruto said, noticing a familiar figure in the corner of his eye. “Hey, Sakura-chan.” he continued in a serious tone of voice. “How long have you been watching?”
“Long enough to know the truth,” she responded.
Tobi continued to drive his shovel deep into the ground.
“I can't wait!” he said, tirelessly digging his shovel into the ground.
Suddenly, he struck gold. Tobi gazed as his shovel unearthed a severed leg.
“Eeew,” he said. Tobi continued to unearth the soil around him, finding another leg, an arm, a few fingers, and a hand with a ring on its index finger. Next came a patch of hair. Tobi pulled the tuft of gray hair out from the ground with force. He unearthed an entire head.
“Ow! Watch it, you clumsy ********!” yelled the severed head to Tobi.
Chapter Eight
“Gah!” Tobi screamed. “Oh, it's just you Hidan.”
Hidan coughed and threw up blood.
“Yeah, just me. ******** shadow possession kid set a trap and buried me alive. Praise Jashin you found me.”
Tobi looked confused. “Jashin? Who's that?”
“Heathen. Just shut the hell up and sew me together.” Hidan demanded.
Tobi growled and pulled out a sewing needled.
“The Boss taught me how to sew like Kakuzu-sama. You'll be patched up in no time, new friend!”
Hidan rolled his eyes. “What the hell have I gotten into..?” he thought.
Tobi lifted up Hidan's torso and gently placed his head on top. While holding it, he began to stitch the necklines carefully.
“Hehe, I'm actually impressed,” Hidan said. “Kakuzu always stitched my head to my body, and I'll admit, you're actually good at it!”
Tobi, whose mask covered all emotion, tilted his head sideways in admiration.
“Thanks Hidan-sama!” Tobi said.
“Just keep stitching...” Hidan said, annoyed.
Sakura held Naruto by the arms and stared at him.
“Sakura-chan,” Naruto said, looking sideways and with shame.
“How could you, Naruto?” she asked. “After all I've done for you. You always used to bother me just to talk to me. I always turned you away, but you kept crawling back for more! Then, after you finally get what you want, you have to want more. Isn't that it?”
“No...” Naruto said.
“And with another boy as well! I'm usually not like this, but neither are you, Naruto? Since when..?”
Naruto continued to stare away from her piercing eyes.
“Naruto, please tell me!” she yelled, seeming to beg for an answer.
“I've always felt a connection between Sasuke and I,” Naruto began after pausing, “I didn't know what it was at first. Friendship? More. Brotherly? More... I couldn't describe these desires to be with him...until now Sakura-chan.”
Sakura's eyes turned less angry as Naruto continued to speak.
“You know how it feels, don't you? One minute you hate me, then the next minute you love me. I loved you when you hated me, and now I...” Naruto's eyes watered. “Now I know that Sasuke had those same feelings as I. That's why... He's feeling love, Sakura. And I know that I can give that to him. He hasn't felt love in years, ever since he left...”
Sakura's eyes teared.
“I'm sorry Sakura-chan. But I'm the only one he's ever felt a desire to be with... I'm the one he wants... And he's the one I love. My emotions were twisted, but now they're clear. Punch me as hard as you can, just like the good old days. Beat me to a pulp and leave me to die. Just like the good old days. I deserve a good beating after taking Sasuke and your trust.”
Sakura's fists clenched and Naruto looked at her with the same, lonely, sad look he displayed as a child. A hated and despised carrier for a hated and despised demon... She embraced Naruto, holding him tightly.
“You've been through enough,” Sakura said to Naruto. “You don't need to ad me to your list of pain.”
Naruto's eyes widened, expecting nothing short of a death-dealing blow.
“To think, you of all people would beat me to Sasuke,” Sakura continued. “I'd never thought I'd see the day when Naruto-kun would come out gay!”
Naruto smiled. “C'mon, it's not that gay.”
Sakura giggled. “It's the definition of gay!”
The two exchanged laughs.
“Remember Konohamaru's boy-on-boy sexy jutsu?” Sakura asked, teary eyed with laughter.
“How could I not?” Naruto said.
“What did you really think about it?” Sakura asked, prodding her shoulder into Naruto's arm.
“My reaction was true. I didn't like it.” Naruto said.
“Why not?” Sakura inquired.
“It included Sai,” Naruto explained. “If it were just Sasuke, you would've seen my nostrils erupt!”
“Is everything okay?” asked an approaching Sasuke. “I heard my name a few times.”
“Yeah,” Naruto said.”We're just talking about you!”
Sakura looked at Sasuke with a long stare. Sasuke looked back the same way. She knew his eyes looked different than before. They were... brighter.
Tobi managed to finish up Hidan's patch job fairly quickly, putting the final touches on Hidan's fingers.
“One more step!” Tobi said, pouring his chakra into the sutures. The stichings gave off a flowing blue current and then disappeared, leaving Hidan with a natural uniformity to his skin. “All done!”
“Wow, you even beat Kakuzu's old record. He used to keep ripping me apart and stitching me up. It was annoying, dumb b*****d heathen.” Hidan stated.
“Awww, thanks Hidan sir,” Tobi said.
“So anyway, why did you of all people come to me?”
“Well, you see,” Tobi began, “Deidara-senpai got captured by Uchiha Sasuke and Uzumaki Naruto, aka the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki. I'm all alone, so the boss assigned me to go dig you up and sew you back together. We have a mission together that's pretty cool sounding! Wanna hear it?”
“No s**t,” Hidan said. “Tell me.”
Naruto walked beside Sasuke casually, not displaying any open affection.
“How did it go?” Sasuke asked.
“What?” Naruto said.
“Telling her. Did she take it hard?”
Naruto thought. “At first she did. Then she sort of went back to normal. We kinda chatted nice before we split.”
“And she's not upset at all?” Sasuke asked.
“She's matured. We all have, Sasuke.” Naruto explained. “That, and she's a major yaoi freak!”
“Sakura-chan?” Sasuke asked.
“Yeah. Konohamaru-chan was doing sexy jutsus and did one featuring you and Sai on top of each other!” Naruto laughed.
Sasuke stared blankly.
“And Sakura exploded. She became a female Erro Sennin!”
“...Sai?” Sasuke said slowly. “I know he's not the straightest guy around...but why him?”
“You answered your own question there,” Naruto said. “I guess he saw through your women hating facade and saw you for who you really are!”
“...I'll kill him...” Sasuke said.
Naruto smiled.
“He's really improved since you left.”
Sasuke glared.
“I mean as a ninja! Duh, haha!” Naruto laughed.
“Thanks Naruto nii-chan!” came a familiar voice from above.
Both Naruto and Sasuke looked upward to find Konohamaru upside-down and looking straight down at them. He leaped down and held his footing, smiling in his wide, mischievous way.
“Hey, Konohamaru!” Naruto greeted.
“Glad you like my boy-on-boy ninja harem!” he said.
Sasuke's eyes became filled with rage.
“Okay, lemme make it up to you!” Konohamaru said, holding his fingers in a cross.
“Don't even think about it.” Sasuke threatened.
Konohamaru disappeared behind a cloud of smoke and emerged with two bodies. One body took the shape of Naruto and was on his hands and knees, looking like he wanted something badly. The other body formed the nude shape of Sasuke, who was standing directly behind Naruto and staring down with lustful rage.
Naruto's eyes became wider than saucers.
Sasuke's eyes turned into sharingan's copying every detail.
Soon after, both flew backwards, blood flowing from their noses like geysers.
“How did you...know...?” asked a stricken Naruto.
“Because you stared at him too long before. You've always been bad at hiding emotions, Naruto nii-chan!”
“I see,” Hidan said, holding his hand to his chin in thought. “It's a damn shame I can't kill anyone, though. Lord Jashin will not be proud.”
“Don't worry, Hidan-sama, you can kill anyone you like after we capture the kyuubi!” Tobi replied.
“Quite an elaborate plan. It's a shame Deidara will miss it.” Hidan said.
“He'll be okay. He's been in worse spots.” Tobi explained.
Naruto arrived with Sasuke to his apartment. Naruto flipped out his keys and unlocked the door.
“Welcome to my humble abode!” Naruto said.
“It's pretty nice,” Sasuke said. “It's simple, yet has a lot of feeling in it.”
“I guess,” Naruto said, kicking off his sandals before setting foot on the mat.
Sasuke did the same and followed Naruto to his couch, whereby he sat close to him. Naruto wrapped his arm around Sasuke and held him close to his body. Naruto smiled and looked at the setting sun from his bedroom window.
“Naruto?” Sasuke asked softly.
“Yes, Sasuke?”
“I want you,” Sasuke said, licking his lips.
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOBS!!!! I won't be posting anymore until this topic is whorred out more razz
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 6:01 pm
no on reads anymore
;w;
crying
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:37 pm
Noooo me wantttt moreeee pwzzzz *begs*
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:03 am
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