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Well I wrote this for a manga a friend and I are drawing, but I think I like it better in words.I'm not a good writer so bear with my errors.
'blah'= thought
Levin Cottmen
-Morning-

The young man put on his t-shirt, looking in the mirror for any obvious imperfections in his appearance.Pulled on some black pants, socks, pushed on his shoes forcefully, causing the back of the shoe to catch under his heels, he hated that. Body spray.
"Ok, good enough for a friday."he half whispered to himself.Checking the mirror one more time.He combed his long fingers threw his silky, thick, brown-chocolate hair,so that it stuck out at the ends in frayed parts.
"Mother! I'll take my leave if you don't mind!"the young man shouted up the stairwell he just tromped down.
"Ok! Be safe! Watch out for murders!"a middle aged woman shouted back, giggling like a teenager.
"Will do!" the boy played along.
"Oh!And Levin, be sure to close the windows when you get home,the news says that is is going to be cold tonight!"
"Ok."Levin shouted one more time and walked threw the front door, being sure to lock it behind him."blasted thing won't close unless you lock it."Levin mumbled past the front gate, then turned right to start his short up hill trek on the street to his school bus stop.'I should have brought a watch with me 'he thought as he stood at the designated area of cement and leaned against a light poll, that was his bus stop.There were other teenagers at his same stop, but few gathered in small conversation.'She is late' was all Levin could burn into his mind.'Late!Late!late!Always!'A large vehicle, the bus he recognized, made its way towards his stop from around a street about two blocks away.'Finally!'Levin visibly sighed and waited to move until "she" pulled up about five feet away from where he was standing.He climbed the dirty,old,clunky stairs and made his way to a seat. Third on the right,Levin sat there every day,and because his stop was the first, he could pick any seat he wanted. He liked this one tho,because he had an emergency exit lever to his left, he could see and point our the driver's mistakes ,'the reason I ride the bus?' Levin thought to himself for a moment.'Because mother can't drive me?Not necessarily It's because I can sit here and do nothing for 45minutes,so it stops me from doing it during class at school.And that's the intangible truth.' Levin smirked to himself about this thought.


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So how was it? Not too bad I hope.