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PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:47 pm


Right. I dont have anything GOOD finished yet,(Im redoing my only GOOD story) but I do have one story. Its not good, its not bad, its mediocre.
This is chapter 1 and 1.5 (You'll see) of my mediocre story. Go ahead and comment, tell me if I should continue.
~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter1~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The sea air rustled the piece of parchment in Dimitrii's hand. It read "Reward for the capture/head of Alastor, reward: " The last bit was ripped. Dimitrii grinned. This was his big break, and he was not gunna let it slip. His ship approached the small dock and he checked to make sure he had his stuff. He still wore the circular flute with a gem in it on his neck, and his sword was on his back. He hopped onto the dock when he arrived, and started up the path towards the tower in the middle of this small, deserted island. He started to think back on why he came...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter1.5 (Flashback) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Dimitrii! Run!" His mother yelled. He ran to the balcony and saw his mom holding off the demons with knives, summoned out of thin air. He turned and took off, and ran past his dad. His father had dropped his sword, and was now holding off the demon with a hatchet. Dimitrii picked up the fallen blade and went to help his mother. He never saw his dad again. He took out a demon sneaking up on her, then turned around and saw his mom get hit with an arrow. "Dimitrii....take this necklace...it stores souls....so that you can purify them.....please, take my soul, and.... " his mother died, but as per her request, he took her soul. He felt the knife summoning ability course through him. He saw the demons closing in, and he ran, his mothers amulet on his neck, and his fathers sword in his hand. From that day on, he was a demon slaying mercenary, but he didn't work for money...He worked to find that demon that lead the attack on his family. He eventually did. That name was Alastor.

Enjoy.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:50 am


Think I should keep going?
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