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Lemon-Lime Merignue

PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 6:45 am


he missed her kisses all last night
while he dreamt alone in fright.

can he ever let her go?

he falls and lies beside the vise
holding her 6 feet in the ground.

can he ever let her go?

her body, cold and stiff, was torn.
he was not made to be without her.

can he ever let her go?

anger, frustration: why did this happen?
Fear tears his heart apart.

can he ever let her go?

little boy cries alla lone
as he lays beside her stone.

can he ever let her go?

her pretty eyes will shine no more,
nor her skin smell as sweet as before.

can he ever let her go?

her angel suffocates him
and he chokes out his last goodbye

can he ever let her go?

slowly, but surely
time will pass by.

will he ever let her go?
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:08 am


That's so sad! You did good at getting the emotion of the characterand the feeling itself though.

Angel Bruja

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