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 Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:48 pm
Thus is my very first poem to post. It's nothing special, but it isn't just about what you think it is about, think about it...
Fast
Falling
Waves of green
Riding on springs
Wandering breeze
Flying hear,
And gliding there
Knowing winter
Will soon
Be there.
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:00 pm
Wow, I also write poems that people ask "What does that mean?" and then I'll say "What do you think it means?" Over all it's a good poem. I don't like the beggining, but i don't know why. that might just be me though, anyways i don't know why i don't like it. So just ignoore me. when i read it I thought of the four seasons.
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 11:03 pm
it's very descriptive. great imagery. please excusre my horrible grammar.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:37 am
Its a good poem, very short and sweet, but I'm afraid that I'm too silly to find a particular meaning in it xp
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