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  hi! *stares at the writing*
  *decides to read it*
  *stares....then Starts to walk away *
  (Continues from above) *is chased by moonlight who tries to pull you back* STAY!!! (>_<) (T_T)
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Moonlight_HuangHou
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 11:34 am


I bought a book a long time ago and finally took it out. It's a book on dragons and towards the end it has legend stories (fake of course but entertaining to read! ^_^). They're like short stories. Well, this one is called the Dragon Prince so see if you like it! ^_^ heart

THE DRAGON PRINCE


In the High Middle Ages, the most renowned competitions of poetry in all of France were held at the courst of Eleanor of Aquitanine. Once a yaer, celebrated troubadours gathered there to show off their arts, and a winner of this poetic contest would be announced.

On one occasion, the winner was an unknown and very handsome man. He refused to give his name or say where he came from, despite the entreaties of Eleanor herself. There was a strange aura of mystery surronding this anonymous traoubadour. Together with his kindness and beauty, this soon made him one of the favorites amoung the ladies of the court.

Griselda, a young and wistful maiden, the youngest daughter of the Lord of Foix, fell passionately in love with the stranger. Moved by the maidens entreaties, the troubadour agreed to marry her in secret and take her to his home. He made one condition: Griselda shoudl never try to see him other than when he chose, and she shoudl never try to discover his identiy. The lady, deeply in love, promised to comply with this strange condition. It seemed little to ask in exchange for being about to remain with her loved one.

One night, the young Griselda had fallern asleep in the arms of her beloved in Eleanor of Aquitaine's castle, where she lived. Suddenlt, on opening her eyes, she found herself in an unfamiliar room. It was a luxurious place, adorned with silk and precious stones, and beside her lay her husband smiling benignly at her.

"You are in my mansion, which belongs to you," he said. "You may give orders to my servants and do whatever you please. There are stables with fine horses at your desposal, and huntsmen and hawks for hunting. You may come and go as you wish. You are my lady and wif, and all that is mine is yours. There are maidens ready to serve you and to carry out your every whim, dancers and musicians to entertian you, and jewels and silks to adorn you. If you need anything, tell me and I will give it to you."
"I only wish for you love, my lord," replied the young woman bewildered.
"That is good, my love, but do not ever forget your promise."

"Greiselda, full of happiness, demonstrated her compliance by flinging herself into the strong arms of her beloved husband. For a while this gentle lady kept her promise and believed she was in paradise. Her troubadour-knight husband, who was kind and passsionate, spent most of his time with his wife. Occasionally, he would disappear into a locked room, but geiselda faithful to her promise, did not ask him any questions.

Unfortunately, her curiousity gradually got the better of her and one day she decided to find out the secret of her myseterious knight. She crept up to the door of the forbidden room, which he had left ajar, and spied through the opening. Aghast, she watched as her husband turned into a huge dragon with golden scales and powerful wings.

She could not prevent a cry of utter horror escaping from her lips. The Dragon Prince, thus revealed, wheeled around and saw his horrified wife in the doorway. Deeply hurt by her broken promise, the dragon bade his servents remove Griselda immediantly to the court of Aquitaine, and never again did he return to see her.

The lady could never forget her beloved, and not a day went by without recalling the months of supreme happiness and bliss beside the disguised dragon.

Preniten and full of grief, she wrote down her adventure, which is how the famous story of the dragon prince foudn its way to us.

THE END. ^_^

*lets out a sigh. This story is short to read even though it appears long. But it sure was a lot to type!! >_< Hope you guys liked it though. Chat about it or other things in this topic! ^_^
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 5:21 pm


*sigh* Why do they always have to go sneaking about where they're not wanted..... rolleyes

0Moon_Maiden0


stefster

PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:11 pm


Aren't you supposed to talk about your own writing here? o_o
PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 1:27 pm


no no! You can post other published stories just give credit to whoever wrote it. Claiming that you wrote it yourself is plagerism and not allowed.

Moonlight_HuangHou
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dragontamer363
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:50 pm


cool- liek a litte fiary story :3


For something similar (but more morally twisted-buwhaha) you shoudl read 'the bloody chamber' by angela carter.

in fact teh whole short story book (also called teh 'bloody chamber') is oretty good. It's all fary stories that have been twisted into a famisist gothic mush of sadistic goodness *cackle*

her story 'the tiger's bride' is also like this *nods*
PostPosted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 1:42 pm


I definantly have to try that book sometime! ^_^

Moonlight_HuangHou
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AdrianaKitten

PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:51 am


Thankies! I need an interesting short story. 4laugh
This reminds me of the story of Eros and Psyche except Eros never allowed his wife to see him except in the dark at night. She too one day shined a light (literally) on his true being and found out he was absolutely gorgeous (being the son of Aphrodite "Goddess of love and beauty")...then he woke up and kicked her out. rolleyes
Another minor difference is that her sneaky jealous sisters (married to much uglier men) convinced her to betray her husbands promise of not seeing him. 3nodding
If I were being treated like someone's princess, I'd totally love my husband despite his freaky identity requests. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 9:48 am


Wow! Now that you mention it those stories are so simular! o_O!!
I would do the same like you. ^_^
The only difference was that in the end...her story was good. She got to live with her beloved again (awe ^^). I feel sorry for this princess. sweatdrop

Moonlight_HuangHou
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