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As She Waits

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Roobledooble

PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:09 pm


She was on the edge

of space and time

waiting to fall

into the nothing below

that will swallow her soul

no rescue came

no rescue cared

for the one girl

who was to vanish

stars and sun

stars and sun

she waits to fall

into the dark nothing...

at last the slip came

but to her surprise

she was in a place of light

how can this be

she whispered

a voice replied

my sons life and love
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:09 am


I think it's rather realistic. A lot of people push themselves to the edge trying to run from God and to the world but when they get there they actually find God's forgiveness instead of his anger. Good job.

metocloud
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cherrilie__x
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 1:07 pm


Yeah, I was just about to say that a lot of people probably feel that way. =D
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 3:18 pm


hello wow i thought you were talking about this one person i knew who seems like shes that guurl wo

Starrzy93

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