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 Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 5:55 am
so here it is, im divulging my first lyrics publicaly hope you like them rate them please!!
My Vengence Will be Tenfold
The blame was put on me again
No longer you’r a truthful friend
I’ll never trust (you) the same way
I can only hope you’ve suffered pain
Now what you don’t realize
(as you’r spreading your lies)
I shall make you pay
(cover you in a plague of rage)
Your reign will never hold
(my vengence will be tenfold)
It’s to late for you to try to make amends
This is your final hour, this is the end
You should have taken back that s**t you said about me
Maybe then I wouldn’t have been your enemy
I know I won’t go to heaven this way
But sending you to hell might make it okay
It’s time to pay for all the sins you’ve done
I’m leaving here my hands covered in your blood
In the years to come my concious might weigh me down
But you’ll be the one six feet underground
Now what you didn’t realize
(as you where spreading your lies)
I have made youp pay
(no longer will I be afraid)
Your reign has been put to an end
(as you have been told)
MY VENGENCE WILL BE TENFOLD!
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 11:01 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:13 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 7:08 am
wow!!!!! daniel....... thats really good!!!!!!! wow!!!!! it speaks to me!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 10:37 pm
Very good. Very powerful. There are a few lines I'd tweak, but that could just be me. The rhythem seems off a in a few places, but I don't know what kind of rhythem or beat you intend for it, so it could just be me. But it's really great. Good job.
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:08 pm
haha i read it again- just for fun. And i still like it a lot. its amazing. good work. smile
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