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She
She fled from the world
Her heart, and her life.
Hurled away from everything
Is it right to part with the earth?

Today she is gone
Somewhere far away.
One day she was on her lawn
The next we are aware that she is not.

Maybe she just died
Easy as that some would say
That must be it
Everyday they would think this

I think something different
The truth you could say
So don’t just smirk and blink your eyes
At my eyes of youth

For I am she, didn’t you know?
Who else would understand?
Why the snow never melts
So there is no spring.

I'm just a beginer but I hope to learn more by reading other peoples poems, and working hard on my poems. That was one of the poem that got me in

Darkness
As I sit here in this shadow
Of all that I've become
I wonder what has happened
To everything around
War has started in my head
Even outside these walls
I'm never safe from the bombs
Being dropped inside
No ones safe
Not anymore.

That was the second one. please tell me the good and bad parts of my poem!!!