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 Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:49 am
(sing)
I remember when I'de flinch
at words as sharp as swords,
That just seem to come from you
to hide yourself from me.
So when I choose to let you go
and stop the flow of thoughts,
Put a bullet through my head,
Because I know you want to,
You don't know you want to.
(scream)
I'll! Stay! Right! Here! Untill you realize!
I'll! Stay! Right! Here! Untill you realize!
(sing)
You always know just what to say,
Good or bad,
You don't care,
Because you always pose as a friend,
But even you think you are.
So when I choose to let you go
and stop the flow of thoughts,
Put a bullet through my head,
Because I know you want to,
You don't know you want to.
I'll ask you once again but
you know you wan't answer me,
If you do, it'll just be lies,
Lies that you think truth.
(scream)
Please! Stay! Right! Here! Untill I realize!
I'll! Stay! Right! Here! Untill you realize!
Please! Stay! Right! Here! Untill I realize!
(sing)
So when I choose to let you go
and stop the flow of thoughts,
Put a bullet through my head,
Because I know you want to,
You don't know you want to.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:20 pm
This is pretty good, the only thing is it's really really repetitive, and doesn't really do any poetic rephrasing of the subject matter. The mechanics are all right, the words themselves just don't really do anything for me. You'd need a kick-a** riff and really amazing music in general to make this a hit-material song.
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 8:06 am
Ive got the whole song done for my bands 3 guitar parts, the bass part, the vocal notes, and im finishin up the drum part
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:22 pm
what kind of music are you into?
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:33 pm
Daniel Boudreau what kind of music are you into? Emo, Metal, HXC...
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