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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 10:27 am


Contents...

1. Introduction
2. History, World
3. Talent
4. Personality, Likes, Dislikes, Etc.
5. Appearance
6. Extra

This thread is still under construction, but it's okay to post critiques heart
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 11:01 am


History...

Date of birth:
December 2, 1975

Nationality:
American, heritage is mixed

Background:
Jessica Vitale was born and raised into a middle-class family in a small town in upstate New York. Her father owned a general store; her mother worked in an office as a secretary. As an only child, she was expected to one day take over the family business. Their house was small, in the center of a quiet neighborhood, the sort where no one ever locks their doors. Inside, furniture was arranged neatly and simply; Mrs. Vitale seemed to always be cleaning or tidying something. Jessica's room was the messiest in the house, mostly due to the clutter and collections of various junk. Many things became lost soon after entering her room.

Jessica was curious and restless as a child, always wanting to go on "adventures", climb on top of things, and play in strange places. On her 13th birthday, Jessica slipped from the branch of a tree and fell to the ground. Her special ability was triggered in that moment, allowing her to float down, unharmed. After this discovery, she devoted as much time as possible to practicing her gift.

During high school, Jess gave serious thought to a career choice. She had already abandoned any plans of ever having a conventional job. The thought of sitting in an office or standing at a cash register for the rest of her life was enough to make her cringe. Unfortunately untalented at most things, Jess found herself at a loss for any jobs that would make her happy. The choice to go off to college was made to buy her some time until she had to "become an adult". Her family was disappointed, but understanding. They provided her with enough money to leave her small hometown, and she went off to seek out a life of excitement. In New York City she attended college for one year and lived off the money sent by her parents in a tiny apartment. That was where she first heard of Cirque du Coeur Torve and made her choice. She routinely sends postcards home.


World:
Type B; Similar to the X-Men universe. The world is exactly like ours, except that it is not unheard of for people to be born with.. special talents.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 11:16 am


Talent:
Levitation.

Background:
Jessica was born with this ability, though it only manifested after puberty. Before she discovered her talent she was always climbing things, which she is still pretty good at.

How it's done:
Her levitation is accomplished using intense concentration, which has not been completely mastered yet. As a result, distractions tend to throw her off and cause her to sink or even drop out of the air, depending on how quickly she can get back in the zone of concentration. It is similar to meditation in a way, but she can keep her eyes open and hold basic conversation while levitating.

What she can levitate with her:
At this point in time, it is difficult for her to carry anything more than her own weight. She can do it, but the object must be lighter than 20 lbs.

Where she can go:
She can levitate from the ground up, or she can step from a ledge and hang in the air, drifting up or down. Moving in other directions besides just up and down is possible but requires more concentration and presence of mind. For now, she can only drift in other directions if the wind is moving her, though it causes her to worry about landing on something dangerous.

Other positions:
Jess cannot levitate in any position other than standing upright. Eventually, she may be able to do it when lying face up. Maybe.

How high she can go:
She is unsure, because levitating too high where the wind is blowing at high speeds would distract her, and that might make her fall.

In later stages:
With practice her concentration will grow and enable her to:
- Converse more intensely during levitation
- Carry heavier objects, eventually maybe other people
- Maybe levitate while laying face up
- Maybe move in other directions besides up and down

She cannot:
- Levitate or move objects by themselves
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 12:50 pm


Name:
Jessica Vitale

Nicknames:
Jessie, Jess, etc.

Personality Traits:
- Friendly and usually able to get along with most people.
- Not often in a serious or pensive mood, even to the point of waving off hostility toward her and laughing at it.
- Playful and outgoing, unless something made her uncomfortable or the situation calls for a more somber mood, in which case she tries to get over whatever is bothering her.
- Wears her emotions out on her sleeves. When she's happy, she acts happy. When she's depressed, she acts depressed. Doesn't usually hide her feelings unless it's not safe to show them.
- Has a tendency to be mischievous, but is trustworthy enough to not cause serious trouble. She wouldn't hurt anyone with a prank.
- Her assertive nature tends to make her somewhat stubborn. She is also impatient and sometimes impulsive.
- As mentioned before, she loses things often. If an object isn't in plain sight or tied to a part of her body, she can easily forget where she put it.
- Hates being bored or sitting around when she could be doing something. For instance, reading quietly is okay for a few hours if it's interesting material, but she hates idling or waiting around with nothing to do.
- Work can be considered fun, as it's something to do and can be viewed as a game. She has average strength, so does not do extremely well with hard labor, but she is willing to try any task.
- When confronted with something sad or disturbing, Jessica becomes quiet and straight-faced. If it's someone else's problem, she would offer to help. She usually deals with her own problems by shrugging them off in favor of thinking about something happier, though she doesn't know the hurt she may be inflicting on herself by doing so.
- When angry, Jessica can become violent and may be provoked to fight, but usually resorts to yelling. She prefers to settle disputes with an argument, and realizes that sometimes they can be quite funny. She does not really hold grudges, but won't forget if someone wronged her for no reason.

Other:
- Jessica is slightly superstitious. She travels with some items that are lucky to her, and abstains from actions that she believes to be bad luck. Because her talent can become dangerous at the mere loss of concentration, she believes that luck has a big part in her life.
- A social smoker and drinker. Both of her parents smoked and drank as well. She doesn't have a preferred brand of cigarettes, but likes sweeter liquor as opposed to hard alcohol.

Language:
English. Knows the bits and pieces of other common languages, like everyone picks up eventually, but that's it.

Likes:
- Trying new things
- Cloudy days, rain and snow
- Music and dancing to it
- Sleep, as she tends to tire herself out by constantly doing things
- The occasional smoke and drink
- Parties
- Animals

Dislikes:
- Bugs (especially bees/hornets/etc., and spiders)
- Lightning and thunderstorms
- Extreme rudeness, arrogance, and greed
- Closed-mindedness
- Human suffering, such as torture or slavery

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:37 pm


Appearance...

Gender:
Female

Age:
19

Height:
5'4"

Weight:
135 lbs

Hair:
Black, shoulder-length, with streaks of green dye. Not really straight, but has a small wave to it.

Eyes:
Pale blue

Other:
- Her skin has an olive tone, otherwise light
- Kind of a pointed face, with a wide mouth and dimples when she smiles
- One piercing in the left ear cartilage. The earring is a small circle.

Clothing:
Torn grey jeans, a t-shirt, black boots, fingerless gloves (that she believes are lucky), and a leather belt. She wears dark sunglasses when it's sunny and a long jacket with a high collar when it's cold.

Costume:
Haven't decided. If possible, she'd wear her street clothes.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 2:19 pm


Extra...

In case I need space for something later.

You can post now~

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:01 pm


The fact that I haven't got anything much to say is mostly because it seems pretty thorough. (I lied. I thought this would be shorter than it is.)

Her vices and personality traits seem very real, which is good, and you've taken her family into consideration. She seems a lot like a normal person, which is fair enough, because we can't all be born into OMG!Fantastic lives. I like that her back story, aside from her power, is a bit boring and all-american. However, I'd really love to see it fleshed out a bit more. It's boring in a good way, but it's also boring in a bad way - there's nothing to her! How did she wind up at the cirque after she heard about it? What was her state of mind? How did she enjoy college? What were her plans, her hopes, her dreams? Did she envision something glamorous at the cirque?

Street clothes for a costume feels like a cop-out. Here you have this fantastic character with amazing powers someone else would kill for, and you want her to perform in STREET CLOTHES? Maybe she has a theme she incorporates into her act, or maybe she has a favorite color, or maybe she just looks really ridiculously good in spandex. Whatever, just come up with a costume idea, because right now it just doesn't seem like that works.

It feels like you've done a lot of planning for before she reaches the cirque, but there's not much here for after she reaches it. What sort of work does she do as a carnie? How do you see her reacting to the stranger members of the cast? And what exactly *does* her act consist of? I mean, it's great that she has this really super cool power and all, but WHAT DOES SHE DOOOOOO? You say levitation, but for all I know that means she gets an audience member to come play light-as-a-feather-stiff-as-a-board with her, or that she jumps off the high wire, pretends to fall, and then stops in midair? There's so much zany stuff to be explored here, so please put some thought into her actual act and what she does in it to give her some special flair.

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