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PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 7:26 pm


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Username: Chinchillie
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Character's name: Julia Stryker
Creature: Firebird
Category: Birds
Elemental type: Fire, Mind, Chaos
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:57 pm


Full Name: Julia Stryker
Age: 30
Birthday: July 2nd, 1977
Race: Scandanavian
Marital Status: Single
Family: Warren Stryker (brother), Janet Stryker (sister)
Birthplace: Lund, Sweden
Residence:
Occupation: Unemployed
Vehicle: Toyota Prius {img} (rarely drives)
Favorite Color: Lilac
Favorite Gemstone: Pearl
Favorite Beverage: Ginger ale
Known Likes: Snow, privacy, cities from a distance, food experiences
Known Dislikes: Being disrespected, noise, children and babies, high heat
Pets: A huge hairy mutt named Mandy

Physical Description:
The two sisters Janet and Julia look much alike - both tall and pale. Julia's looks are softer and odder than expected, like a little blobby nose, a tall forehead, wide blue eyes and a bit of a tummy from her love for pastries. Her hair is frosty blond, medium length, either let loose or braided. Her clothes are fashionable and lean towards gentle colors like periwinkle blue or pearl. If her disposition was sweeter she'd be pretty cute, but her usual frown and serious stare make that comparison difficult.

Her build is average in body and bust, with the combination of short arms/legs and weight making her look shorter than she really is.

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Personality:
Julia is highly aloof. She has a snobbish air from her background and is never really comfortable around other people; the only company she likes is her own, so she's very independent as well. The one person to control her easily is Janet. In her own environment she is a fierce, solid warrior, but of anything else she is woefully ignorant. For instance: she's never REALLY had a job. She's done some jobs for fun, since they have plenty of money. They have never lived anywhere else and there's no need for the siblings to take care of themselves. Basically, she's spoiled like crazy but wouldn't believe it if you told her.

Julia is not prone to high emotion. Anger might be the exception. She is always on guard and thus very easy to rile - when angry, she is completely illogical and singleminded. On the street one would probably take pains to avoid the two sisters whenever they come walking. They both give off a cool and disdainful air and are quick to snap. But Julia is defined by the fact she has hidden qualities her sister doesn't. For instance, one wouldn't expect she loves dogs and is a fanatic about pastries, but there you go. She is. Things like animals, sports (and tolerating Warren) attract her, but she hides these activities from Janet, who would not approve one bit. She resents not being able to do these things often but if given a choice between being "free" and being wealthy, she'd choose wealthy.

Background:
Briefly, her living conditions right now:
She lives in a huge house with her older sister and younger brother. Their income comes from their well-to-do mother and work Janet and Warren do on the side. Well. Warren's an underpaid barista, actually. It does give him pocket money. Their mother lives in a nursing home that's fancier than her old house and is quite happy there, only poking into their lives to jerk a few chains here and there.
It's a darned good life as far as lives go. The three siblings constantly fight as they are all very different in personality. Still, they don't have to work...Julia spends most of her time inside and hardly goes out at all. And that's fine.

Relationships:
Warren: It's complicated. Julia is scornful of how childish he is, but at the same time is protective of him. In front of Janet she's appropriately spiteful towards him. When her sister is not around, sometimes she does go and spend time with him, brushing Mandy, watching him fix a car, or simply hanging out. He still gets on her nerves.
Janet: As a child she worshipped her sister like a goddess - older now, she thinks she's grown out of that and is more independent, but Janet's word is still law. Julia admires her cold confidence, the ability to get whatever she wants, and will do anything to stay on her sister's good side.
Mother: No love lost here. Dear Mother's never had any illusions about being a good, gentle caring mum. Julia is wary of her. She's stuck with the obligation of being family to this person she really doesn't like all that much - plus it would be a bad idea to rile her, since she's their source of money.
Dad: Oooh. If you thought Warren was complicated..! @.@


Mr. Stryker met their mother in Sweden, where he, an American, was spending several years. She was going to a fancy dinner with friends - out of character, she snuck out with one of the young helpers. It's a bit classic that way. Their marriage was rife with difficulties from Day One, but it was only after Warren was born that their dad started getting restless again. He made no secret about it. He tried to talk it out with his wife, told her the date, and left on that exact day. From there on he disappeared.

Chinchillie


Chinchillie

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:58 pm


The myth

The Firebird is the phoenix of Russian myth. It is described as a swan sized bird with marvelous red, orange and gold plumage that glows like a fire, even when the feather is not attached to the bird any longer - its glow is enough to light up a dark room. A later appearance is a small bird with the same crest and tailfeathers of a peacock.

Seeing the Firebird is both a blessing and curse. It brings terrible luck once seen. There are many tales about it, but one of the most famous is part of the tale of Ivan Tsarevich and the Grey Wolf.

Some say the Firebird flies around a king's castle and once night falls swoops down and eats all the king's golden apples. Others say it is simply a bringer of hope, and others still say pearls fall from the bird's beak to give something of value to the peasants. For the first, a common tale is that the king (tsar) commands his three sons to capture the creature that strips the apple trees every night. The golden apples give youth and strength to all who eat them. The sons do not catch the bird, but they catch one of its glowing feathers.

Several things apply from the book by Mercedes Lackey. The Firebird of the book cannot help eating the golden apples - they are her sustenance. Anything not magical or extremely rare in origin will be tasteless to Julia as a result. The bird also casts a spell of sleep to faciliate her thieving.

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References
Wikipedia
Firebird by Mercedes Lackey


Magic

Fire balances between cold and heat. Mostly she operates on the cold side of the spectrum. But when her anger is riled, fire strikes! Have you ever heard of a 'beserker'? That's a bit like her in a rage.

Mind is an element given to people with the ability to think fast. This does not really describe Julia - but her perception is canny and she knows her own thoughts and what she wants. Her strength is willpower.

Chaos describes the unpredictable factor in her personality. This is more pronounced in Warren, who is about as chaotic a person as you can get, but there are times when her thoughts are unfathomable and her actions go against the expected many times.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 7:04 pm


Why firebird?


Pukka
A silver bell that rests comfortably in the palm of one's hand. The looks of it are vaguely foreign, though it's hard to pinpoint what's different.

Chinchillie


Chinchillie

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 7:05 pm


Original Quest: Emily Lee Nichols

Age: 48
Birthday: September 15th, 1958
Race: English and German (some French)
Marital Status: Married
Family: William Nichols (husband), Aaron Nichols (son), Robert Vogler (younger brother), Mark Vogler (older brother), Charlotte Vogler (mother), Lewis Vogler (father)
Birthplace: Fairfield, Pennsylvania
Residence: Arlington, Virginia
Occupation: Unemployed
Vehicle: A beat-up Subaru Outback
Favorite Color: Blue
Favorite Gemstone: Opal
Favorite Beverage: Hot apple cider
Known Likes: Plants, shopping, exotic food, meeting new people, napping, antiques
Known Dislikes: Asps (yee-ouch), smarmy business people, spiders, most technology, hospitals
Pets: A goldfish or two (allergic to fur and mouse-a-phobic)

Physical Description: Medium height and very sturdy. Though she eats reasonably well and moves around quite a bit, Emily is a heavy woman. If she undertook a serious dieting program she'd lose that poundage, but only then, because she's that way naturally. Her tan hair is streaked with gray and is cut below the shoulder. Emily sometimes has her hair pulled up in barrettes (especially when working in the garden) but often has it hanging loose. Her arms and legs are muscled from yardwork and the bottoms of her palms rough.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.More round and personable than pretty, she has a very interesting face nonetheless - deep lines around her wide mouth and hazel eyes, expressive eyebrows, and a crooked nose, possibly from spills taken as a kid. She wears clear contacts but also has a pair of bright red reading glasses from her son, whose taste in accessories leaves much to be desired.

In clothing her taste is expensive - not overdone or top fashion, but the finest, most comfortable material, tasteful style and always a good brand. Most skirts and shorts drive her crazy. You'll usually see her in a solid colored shirt, jeans or capris and sneakers. It's the basic outfit. Add on the jewelry. Usually a necklace, earrings and several rings on each hand, probably opal, her favorite gemstone.

If you're talking distinguishing marks, there aren't many. Her skin doesn't scar easily, so there's a few on her arms and legs but none very unique. Her left ear has two piercings almost side by side from a botched piercing job, and since she was a teenager at the time who didn't care what people thought, she kept 'em both. Nowadays it's hardly something worth mentioning...except the placing is very awkward. In bad weather her right leg also carries a limp, years wearing the old injury down.

Personality: One thing matters most to her: family. Emily was on her own for most of her life and now is sinking into the warmth and safety of having a family. This life is new to her, so she's testing the waters, staying at home most of the day and working in the garden while always keeping an eye out for Aaron. On the outside she's easily forgotten - kind, hardworking, patient. Just looking, you wouldn't even guess she has a wicked streak buried in there. It's something that surprises even her from time to time. Say that Bill's invited someone she doesn't like over for dinner. They might 'accidently' end up with soup in their lap, or the worst seat at the table, the one that collapses when you sit on it. Maybe these little slips help her be good the rest of the time.

With Emily it's an all-or-nothing deal when it comes to people. Generally, she's open to meetings and friendly conversation. She doesn't actively seek out company but is perfectly happy in the midst of it. But for the rare case that strikes her enmity...watch out. It may only be the small things that show, like the soup in the lap, but when Emily figures someone to be an enemy, there isn't an if or but about it - they are an enemy. When it comes to her family she's less subtle. She can be downright hostile to anyone who threatens either her husband or son. Bill's good at pacifying her, and they do love each other dearly...but she's overprotective nonetheless. The thought of losing them is terrifying. Without Bill, a sweet and gentle man who is her better half, or Aaron, a welcoming tornado of energy, life wouldn't be worth living any more.

Regarding herself...mostly she's come to terms with her physical self and thinks of it rarely, but as an adolescent she was incredibly insecure about her weight. That insecurity pops up at times. She feels safest in her comfort zones but wanders willingly into the greater world without a second thought.

Emily is pretty OCD, but only on specific things (like safety). She's NOTHING compared to how bad Bill is. There's a big contrast between the Emily of today and of her past. She used to be very impulsive and met with a horrible accident because of it; going down to mess in a quarry was a very impulsive idea and she would never dream of it nowadays. It's mostly the accident's fault, but having a miserable time in college dampened it as well. She put her adventurous nature aside to concentrate on getting ahead in life.

The friends she has are solid and good. They meet up for parties every so often to catch up. But the rest of the time her social interaction is reduced to family and the guy at the grocery store. Emily doesn't realize she's become something of a hermit lately.

Background: For the first 14 years of her life, Emily didn't go anywhere. Her town was one of those small country towns way back when, a tiny oasis of civilization in the midst of farms and mountains. Their house had the prestigous spot of being in the middle of town which is also where her father worked as a mechanic. He was handy with it. Their house was filled with spare auto parts that constantly drove her mother to distraction, but her brothers loved to mess with. It was no wonder that the two started to help their father once they got older. Emily was left out as they drifted away to more teenagerly duties. Not having her two brothers who'd always been there was a strange, lonely feeling. For a while she hung around the mechanics shop trying to be interested in wrenches and chains and cables, and while she picked up some tricks of the trade while there, found she wasn't very interested at all. When she wasn't in school, the pudgy little girl was tumbling around the countryside by herself. As she also got older she drifted away from nature and hung out with kids from school more, and spent the rest of the time helping Mom work at home. Her mother was always in support of "what a woman should be like" - mild and agreeable - but times where she got to teach Emily this were few and far between, with Emily's school and her friends, so the lessons didn't really stick. Her dad could care less. He worked most of the day so they barely crossed paths.

One of the town's main features was a quarry. With all the heavy equipment rolling around and the dangerous, steep drops, they were strictly forbidden to go there. Of course, this didn't stop anyone. Emily, Mark and Rob were clambering around on the rocks one day chucking weeds at each other and goofing off in a rare moment of sibling friendship...when one of her sneakers found a pile of leaves, slipped, and sent the girl tumbling down into the quarry.

Her leg was shattered. At 15 this was disastarous - no more running, no more sports, no more anything. It meant her adventuring days were at an end, in both the physical and mental sense - imagining another fall like that was unbearable, and since then she's only been comfortable on sure ground. The local doctors weren't capable of healing such a serious injury and she knew if it healed wrong, that would be it. Emily fell into a dark depression. For the first time she skipped school as a regular habit. All she felt capable of doing was sitting and waiting for it to heal wrong. Out of desperation, she begged her parents to let her go and find a better doctor. She PROMISED to pay them back.

The only reason they let her was because her aunt, uncle and cousin lived out where she wanted to go. They sent a letter ahead to the school district of both counties for enrollment advice, and when a reply came back they sent her off. She enrolled in the local school while she was recovering and lived in her relatives' apartment as a tenant, in return for helping to keep house. It got easier once her leg got better. Her parents were not willing to leave her in the city from there on out, so she was shuttled home many times. Rob and Mark were getting old enough to be on their own so their perceptions of how much she needed to be looked over changed - the visits got shorter and fewer. Being out there without anything from home was lonely, but exciting as well.

At 20 she moved down the street and started working several jobs. Full time at a pharmacy counter, weekends between a salon and bookstore. Life went on. Nothing of momentem happened for years, except things that she remembers - like the week her brothers called and said they'd be going for a road trip, and would she like to come along? After that her dreams were deep with the Grand Canyon and the sights she saw along the way.

At 28 it was time for college. Odd jobs were okay, but a career would feel so fulfilling. A college in Shippensburg had the things she liked and after closing off loose ends and ties she moved, alone for the first time. College was a wakeup call. Being shuttled between home and her city school, she didn't have an exemplary education, and found college to be very difficult. It made her feel pretty stupid, honestly. It took time, but her energetic nature slowly filtered out under a desire to learn. It further sloughed away when she submitted an application to a city school and found it to be a pretty nasty place. The job had good points and bad points, but the idea of shifting around again was even less desirable. So she stuck with the school despite how much it darkened her spirits.

Her future husband, William, worked in Alexandria as an accountant. The two met when he was taking a vacation to visit his Pennsylvanian sister, and was waiting for to come back from errands in a local cafe. The woman showed up long after she was supposed to and by then the two had become acquainted. It took a while before they got together even then...busy lives and everything. The distance, once he went back home, didn't help, but they kept in touch. Two years later they got married.

At age 39, after 7 years of teaching, they moved for the last time into Arlington, Virginia, on a street shaded by trees. Two more years she made the commute into Alexandria as a teacher, and then her career became second to a new love: her newborn son. Aaron. And so things continue to this day. Aaron is growing up. Her days are kept busy with house upkeep, especially her vegetable and flower gardens out front. She still meets her parents sometimes and is regularily visited by Rob and Mark, Rob still living in Fairfield, Mark a talented mechanic up in New York. Life is practically perfect. Of course, it is not meant to last...

Relationships:
Mother: Emily and her don't usually agree, but they get along. Mom was always a quiet soul but she does have very strong opinions, and only voices them when a challenge is on the horizon. Still, despite their differences, the two are at even terms with one another.

Father: Actually pretty good. Her father recently had a heart attack. Since then she's gotten to know him a lot better than she ever had, by her resolve to visit more often. Their friendship is strengthened by Emily taking his side in the recent family drama - Mom wants him to stay in the hospital and rest, because she's worried he won't be safe enough at home (sound familiar, Emily?). Pap wants to be at home with his family, which she is fighting for as well.

Mark: Not a close one. Mark has always been the most distant from her. He likes to get the most out of life and doesn't understand why she's always settled for less, and...really doesn't understand her in general. Nonetheless, he's happy enough in New York, married, with a couple tots that Emily enjoys visiting.

Robert: Her younger brother and a good one. Rob's the giver in the family - he's sticking by his parents now that their other children have flown the coop and is working towards becoming a main figure in his community, working with the township to organize fairs, fundraisers and all sorts of other things. The two are very close.

Other relatives: The aunt, uncle and cousin she lived with as a teen don't keep in touch any more. Her cousin is away in college and her aunt and uncle keep to themselves.

Her grandmother on her mom's side, Carol Marie, is the French part of the family and died when Emily was a baby. Grandma Vogler lives in California with her husband and terrorizes the family that lives there - one half lives on the east coast, the other the west. They've only had one big family reunion that Emily remembers vividly, smack in the middle of the country, and they haven't had one since. Hmm. I wonder why.

Aaron and Bill

Aaron's two favorite things in the world are as follows: super heroes and sea creatures. Thus, Spiderman vs. the Giant Squid is not out of the question - usually this 7 year old, brown haired and blue eyed energy tornado is out in the garden splashing in the bird bath and shrieking, or running inside the house (and shrieking) or pestering Emily/Bill (while shrieking).

Basically, he's a little boy. He comes with the typical arguing and stupid jokes, but on the rare times that he's tired, can actually be a very attentive learner. He's pretty good with helping out in the garden. You couldn't tell this by his school record, which is pretty bad, but he learns when he feels like and does it well. Computers bore him like crazy, but music...there's another story. He has his own guitar now.

At only 7 he's becoming a social giant among his peers. The house is plagued by boys on the weekends. Never girls. Ever. Already he's got the makings of one of the 'popular' crowd in school, but hopefully his sense will make him into a reasonable young man.


Bill is very calm and quiet. Of the two of them, he likes order the most - his office, closet and part of the bedroom is tidy as can be, whereas Emily's is on the slightly messy side. He's lean, taller than Emily, with short dirty blonde hair, blue eyes and wears glasses with thin frames. The simplest things tend to nag at him, like a tie missing, the wrong cereal on the breakfast shelf, the slightly blurry picture. He's also slightly shy but can always be counted on as a friend.

The one time Emily has ever seen him blow up is when she announced her pregnancy. He didn't say anything, but he got more and more distressed as the week went on, and when she finally asked him what was wrong, exploded that they couldn't afford it, especially if she left her job. Later on he apologized, looking like a wounded puppy. All those little worries that plague him normally just added up and went out of control.

So that was his one moment of anger. The rest of the time he's peaceful and very thoughtful; he tends to be a workaholic (he's addicted to workahol) and is often out of sorts in the mornings, sighing and drooping. After some coffee he's perfectly fine. Bill is a city boy at heart and the fact his work is in Alexandria does him good. He's lived in the area all his life.

The myth

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Gryphons (or griffins) are a well known symbol of heraldy. The typical gryphon is half eagle, half lion, and is a symbol of divine power. As the eagle is considered king of the birds and the lion king of the beasts, it's no wonder the gryphon was considered to be an incredible creature.

They are said to be as much of a hoarder as dragons - if the Scythian gold stories are anything to go by. If strangers approached wanting the precious stones and gold to be found in the Scythian steppes, the gryphons living there would tear the intruders to pieces. It was also said to be a guard of gold mines and hidden treasures.

The places where these creatures live vary account to account. Nonetheless, in all of these descriptions we find two similarities: Gryphons are located in the eastern and northern areas of Asia; and they are always found in the mountains.

Horses and gryphons are said to be mortal enemies. The extremely rare offspring of the two is known as a hippogriff, and is used as a symbol of the everlasting power of love. Gryphons are a popular symbol in heraldry and there may be a good reason for putting them on shields: the sight of the gryphon symbol would instill fear in the horses of the enemy. Lesser known enemies of the gryphon are the Arimaspians, one eyed men who were neighbors of the gold-loving gryphs in Scythia, and who started the hatred of horses because they attacked the gryphons on horseback. Gryphons and the Amazons also warred.

One writer, Stephen Scotus, said gryphons were strictly monogamous. They mated for life and if one of the pair died, the other would never find another mate and live the rest of its life alone. Unlike other hybrids of the natural world, like mules, they are able to reproduce. Either a gryphon lays its eggs in a cave or make a nest of its own like an eagle - the accounts differ. If cave-laying, the mother would find a cave with a narrow entrance but plenty of room inside, safe from the elements, where she would then lay 3 eggs and guard them. The eggs were also claimed to be sapphires or agates. Warm sand is the best medium for hatching them; the baby gryphon is ravenous, much like any other baby animal, and eats its own weight every 4 hours. If they're destined to be a talking gryphon, they start talking very quickly, within weeks. All gryphons are smart, but whether it's human-smart or animal-smart depends. Some have abilities to rival humans or surpass them in speech, intelligence and magic.

According to Stephen Friar, a gryphon's claw was believed to have medicinal properties and one of its feathers could restore sight to the blind. In the world of Tortall the fletched feathers of a gryphon will cause an arrow to always fly true and have the lie-detecting effects of the live gryphon on a smaller scale. It is said that a poisoned liquid will change colors if served in a cup fashioned from a gryphon's claw. The only way one could acquire a gryphon's claw though, in legend, is by a holy man who cured a gryphon of some illness and received the claw as payment for his kindness. Gryphons have immunity to the poison of dragons. Whether this passes on to be useful in their feathers or claws is unknown.

What does a gryphon LOOK like? The most widespread look is that the front half of the creature, the wings and the talons and head, are entirely birdlike. The bird's head often has pointed ears which can be long and horselike as well. The back half, the hindquarters and tail, are feline - usually lion. Sometimes the tail is descripted as being a serpent. Still, people have found a thousand different ways to describe it. The Gryphon Pages describes it best:

Our general portrayal of the Gryphon however, is one of a lion with an eagle's head, forefeet and wings, and straight horse-like ears. A Gryphon with a serpent's tail, by Helen RichEarlier though, it was hard for the Gryphon to keep a concrete shape when no one had actually "seen" the beast. Thus, the Gryphon has been attributed with the head of a falcon, hawk and eagle, the forefeet of a lion and eagle, and the hind-parts of a panther, dog, and lion. It has had the regular tail of a lion, a lion's tail with feathers at the end, and a serpent's tail. It has had sharp horse-like ears and floppy spainel-like ears. It is shown sometimes with a tuft of beard under it's beak, a lion's mane covering it's neck, and sometimes it did not even have wings. The beak has been sharp and soft, often with teeth or tusks. From it's forehead have risen two horns and a decorative knob. It was also written at various times that Gryphons had red crests, dark blue necks, black bodies, white wings and firey eyes.

Some strange differences occur in descriptions of the gryphon - like the "male gryphon". What exactly is this about? It's hard to tell >> Apparently this gryphon lacks wings and has rays/spikes of gold protruding from its body, and may also have long horns. "Alce" and "keythong" are words that have been used to describe it.

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At the moment, her final form would be a gryphon with an osprey front and white lion hindquarters. Small black ears, eyes very brown for a bird of prey, feathered lion's tail and lacking in thumbs, though her lion hind legs would have a dewclaw more like an osprey's. It's also possible she'd have a mane like the Spiderwick gryphon.

Why osprey? Well...they're cool. And I'm just plain fond of a sea-dwelling gryph. Nothing would come from the animal except for the love of water, looks and diet. She would be entirely gryphon in nature.



References

The Gryphon Pages
Wikipedia
Tamora Pierce's books
Alice in Wonderland (just 'cuz it's fun)
Arthur Spiderwick's Field Guide to the Fantastical World Around You (gryphon cover)
The Pinhoe Egg, The Dark Lord of Derkholm and Year of the Gryphon by Diana Wynne Jones


Magic

Magnetism deals with the force that binds things together. In Emily's case, this is people; she has a strong understanding of the ways we are connected and is a central part of her own little web, her family.

Earth is a big part of her personality. The core of her is very unpredictable, but outside she is a good, patient and kind person. Her love of plants also helps this but it's not as important.

Why gryphon?

The choice of gryphon would be confusing to her, but it would indeed feel right. Not only for Emily's basic nature but for her fierce protectiveness, like a mother lion guarding her cubs or a falcon her nest. They keep a close eye on their valuables and take great lengths to keep them safe, which is true not only for her personal possessions but for her family, the most precious thing she has. The gryphon's devotion to its mate is like her own as well. If Bill ever left, she's not sure she would be able to find another man to be happy with. He is The One.

Pukka

A golden wedding ring found buried in the garden at the end of a long day. Inscribed simply: Carol Marie. The name of her grandmother...it feels like too much of a coincidence. But why would it be here? At this house, where she had never been?

She talks it over with Bill but he's convinced it doesn't mean anything. The next morning she goes downstairs to inspect it once again in the sunlight, to see if there's anything she missed, giving the pukka the moment of isolation it needs to work.

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Chibi Emily by Iee smile Check out the Snack Shack for more great art!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:53 pm


o.O *fluffs poofy hair* A haircut might be nice, if you get around to it...

Mule! <3 Also, critiques are open. The thread's not complete but some direction would be most helpful ^^

Julia Stryker


Storm Nobleheart

PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:43 pm


A fae creature for the hidden wicked streak she has, or perhaps a bear or feline (lion) for their protectiveness of family. Gryphon also seems possible. The personality and history are pretty good.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 7:23 pm


Gryphon is good for that reason =3 And it would seem birds are protective too, if wrens are anything to go by - fierce lil buggers.

Thank you, Storm! ^^

Chinchillie


Storm Nobleheart

PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 7:52 pm


No problem. Hopefully I can figure things out for mine as well.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 12:11 pm


You're making good progress so far 3nodding

Hmmm...what to do, what to do...*studies thread*

Chinchillie


Ieeko

PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 8:30 pm


Once again: Thank you for the critique. :]

I have to start out by saying that you picked one of my favorite names in the world for your character. I always thought the name Emily sounded incredibly fluid and neat, so high-bound props for that on the random note!

Emily sounds like a strong character. Very thoroughly analyzed in the personality section. I liked the idea of her being overprotective and seemingly clingy, as it fits well with your chosen creature of myth. Gryphons were, and are, known for hoarding things and having difficulty parting with them. To my knowledge, they're also known for their extensive action taken to protect their valuables - in Emily's case, family.

Honestly, it's a bit hard fishing for things to add here. You've covered things with remarkable description. Very handy. Very nice. Although I was left with a couple of things out of general curiosity. The first one being her long term reaction to shattering her leg. Did that instill a paranoia of heights and injuries? Would her overprotectiveness include overbearing safety precautions taken for herself and directed at others? Her father having been an active mechanic, did she ever pick up little bits and pieces of knowledge on the situation? How did she handle the idea of being left out exclusively - no trying to measure up to her brothers for a time?

How did she handle the move after shattering her leg? She just relocated from friends and family and ended up elsewhere, I'm curious as to what her life may have seemed like. :]

All and all, I believe Emily is a fascinating character that will be very interesting in terms of interaction if she happens to latch on to characters or label them as an enemy, so forth and so on. She sounds like she'd be a catalyst for maybe divisions or sparkling intense feelings in people.

Good job is what I have to say! whee
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 6:40 pm


Lookie lookie!

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*squee*

Iee, you rock 4laugh

Emily's a great name, isn't it? I only knew one person named that, which is weird because it is pretty nice as far as names go.

Not a paranoia of all heights. Probably she'd only be comfortable with heights if the ground she's on is completely solid. The fall made her a LOT less interested in taking risks like she used to, like climbing really high trees or what-have-you.

She probably would go to extreme lengths to make sure things are safe. Aaron freaks her out most of the time - he loves doing things that involve high danger xp I wouldn't say overbearing for herself, but the kid's going to have a lot of trouble convincing her to do things on his own.

Hmmm. Never really thought about that surprised Interesting question! She wouldn't know a whole lot about the inner workings of a car, but she'd probably have picked up some tips on how to get one working. And she'd make a handy mechanic if someone thought to teach her, by combining all those bits and pieces. I'm gonna think on the brothers thing a bit before answering biggrin There's lots o' possibilities.

Moving all that distance, she'd be lonely. No wonder, rite? XD But...it'd be exciting too, going to a whole new place. She was already down in the dumps by then, so...at first, it would just be something else to add on to the list of depressing things. Then once she started feeling better, all of it started to go away as a whole. Going back home every so often would be hard. Seeing all those people who were your friends, and you've been away from them for months...it would've been awkward all over until she got to stay somewhat permanently and make new connections. If she had old, good friends they'd keep in touch ;') All the other "somewhat friends" or casual relations would drift away with time.

Moving away from family, now, for some reason doesn't seem like it'd be a big deal. It'd be strange and she'd be homesick for a while, but it wouldn't be like leaving your good friends - her parents were just sort of...parenty. Not really friends. She was at the point where it was so great to be on your own. And she did get to see them plenty. Leaving Robert (the nice brother xD) would be harder.

Thank you so much ^__^ You brought up lots of good points...I hadn't thought of any of them, and am going to try to work them in the thread shortly. Especially the comment about gryphons you made. It's true - she's attached to her material possessions, like jewelry, but guards the thing most valuable in her eyes, family, with her life. And she'd hate to hear this, but the guarding of jewelry and guarding of family is almost the same to her. Aaron and Bill are protected from harm and kept in a safe little box. Safe as possible, anyway. But at least she doesn't follow it exactly XD Aaron's still allowed to be a wild little boy. Not a creepy well-mannered child-soul o:

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:06 am


Iee has made an ADORABLE CHIBI, and I'm hoping Photobucket's working now so I can put it up here >> <<*shuffles off to check*
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