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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 3:50 pm

I would totally appreciate it if you guys pointed out what I could change BEFORE I start colouring it. Otherwise, here's a lineart. Still have to add the creases which I seem to be having difficulty with, and the face looks slightly skewed, which I'll try and sort out (fat chance), and remember - critique please!

Oh, and what is she exactly? I mean, where shall I dump her, backgrounds and stuff. Ignore the title, it's just meant to be eye-catching!

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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:46 pm

Well, I took you picture into Photoshop and made some measurements.
Wow.

You're proportions are actually very very good, but why is it that the body seems off?
The head. Her face is too low. The eyes are about one third, rather than the usual half, from the base of her chin. I also think that her lanky limbs and thin body make her appear to be inhumanly tall...
But she isn't a human, anyway.
The only other thing that could be contributing to the height illusion that I can think of would be that the knees seem very low on her legs. This makes it seem as though the half-way point of her legs is lower and therefore she is taller/ has longer legs.

Eep, sorry for the harshness.

This is a fantastic piece, I'm just being nit-picky.

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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:13 am

Lol, no, I'm glad you're pointing things out! Helps me improve, and that's exactly what I want to do >.<

I made a few changes here and there. I haven't done the legs though, but I did some stuff to the face, plus I realised her head was too big, so it's sorted a little.
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