Wow. Short and sweet, like everyone say, and I like it. But I have found that all poems need a slightly deeper value than what they seem... I'd lyk to post one of my own.
My Pot
I have a pot.
And in my pot,
I put everything.
And I heat it up, hopeing
to make some yummy soup
but the stuff I put in my pot
isn't very yummy
so when I take the lid off
it smells bad
and looks ugly
so I put the lid back on
and make sure
no one ever
opens it
again.
My poem (this is to those who don't understand it) is about someone pushing everything in thier lives deep down. Into the "Pot" and it get yucky, so they should throw it out, or talk about it, but they just push it down and put the lid on it. ^_^
PM me if u lyk it!