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 Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:27 pm
I wrote a short story called "A Missing Sneaker" and I'd like some feedback on it. Critique is appreciated ^^
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 5:29 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:20 pm
eek OMFG... THAT WAS THE AWESOMEST CINDERELLA STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!! *faints from complete and utter awesomeness* I love it. Other than a couple typos, it was purrfect. I repeat- Purrrrrrrrrfect... heart
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:46 pm
Haha, thanks ^^ I'm thinking about possibly expanding on it so I can change it into a novel =D
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:41 pm
biggrin No way!!! If ya ever do, tell me! I wanna buy it! heart
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:28 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:54 pm
OMG that was the greatest short story that I've EVER read!!! You're extremely talented and I would LOVE to see that turned into a novel!
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 8:28 pm
It was okay, although I have read so many cinderella stories that I am getting sick of them, i wish people would be more creative,,and not use the same story base over and over again, but yours was the best so far...
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:42 am
great story...will you be working on another?
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 1:32 pm
I thought that was the best Cinderella fanfic i have ever read! ^^ I hope you write more! I would love to read any of your other stories! Your writing style is awesome! whee
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:11 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 9:45 am
Your story is very good. I Love it. Its a really good idea for a modernized Cinderella story. (sorry if I'm not going OMG but thats not how I do things)
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