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  well i wouldnt call it poetry, but here goes
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CabrionDeluviant
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 8:56 pm


yeah so i guess this thread will be really lonely without all your pretty poetry to keep it shining
even if your poems are dark

it doesnt matter

nobody here criticize eachother, ok? unless they ask for it, of course.
this is a place of freedom where you can express yourself without the consequences.
k?


also, favorite poems can be put here too, as well as favorite songs,
just make sure that you say who wrote it

because without that, my dear fellow-guild people, it is called 'plaguerism' ((the really butchered word)) and it is frowned upon in most societies
PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 8:57 pm


summer with it's memories of long ago
when i was a child not all alone
when i could see everyone i knew
when i could be somewhere with you

Fall with it's solemn change
held us together but still so strange
held us through in it's yearning spirit
held us through with beauty in it

winter with it's howling warning to all
made us realize that we were small
made us know that we were here
made us know and made us near

spring with it's joyful song
let us smile though not for long
let us dance in a meadow of love
let us dance in a good-hearted grudge

we never said that we were evergreen
we never thought that we were unchanging
we never focused on anything for long
we never had to.
but times changed
and so did we
there is no happy ending
but i'd like to think there will be
one day.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 12:44 pm


nicely done cab i might write some stuff later
PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 4:19 pm


thankies =)

yes, this thread could use some more posts

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 6:55 pm


That was great!! I had this thing where I made a poem for each season and now I'm starting on the months of the year.

Ah, September
The time when autumn is revived
Report cards come out
And I’m glad I survived

September, September,
How to quote thee?
Not as hot as August
Not as cool as October
All we need now is a cup of tea

The leaves are starting to brown
The wind is starting to blow,
There a festival in a neighboring town
It’s all about a certain commodity you know

How I want it to be December…
Or lovely October…
I think I can skip November…
But, alas, we are still in September.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 3:47 am


there was a love once lost that nobody could believe
there was a man who deep inside he died for he found no relief
there was a woman who didnt know why she didnt cry but so it goes
and you're the only one who knows

there was a boat lost at sea where the anchors of security snapped
there was a daze throught the gaze of the lost, their strength was sapped
there was a hope that died in stride for wallowing in greif
and so i stare at you in disbelief

this is the sea of heartbreak, and you sent me out to sea
the storms rage everyday and everyway that i can perceive
but i will give this heart to you and it is yours to take
i will give my heart to you, this heart is yours to break

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CabrionDeluviant
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 9:56 am


what is this?
this bliss that i'm feeling?
i've never felt anything like this before
am i dreaming?
this serenity i feel in my veins..
i see the trees and i feel the clouds, i hear the ocean
it's all so inviting, all so calm and cool
where is this place?
i dont want to leave
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:01 pm


I have not died,
I live and thrive in this body
This shell, this costume, this masque, this hide
I live on, and the proof is this letter.
I was asleep
A deep, deep slumber
What awoke me, that secret I keep
But I yawn and stretch my numb arms
A sip of life is what I need
Life contained in my words
I wish to drink them up, I wish to feed
Asleep, I dreamt of thought
Little fairies and imps played together in my dream,
I watched them, I was amazed, I was delighted, I was caught
Falling into a black abyss
I thought I would never return to my dream
Only to be awakened softly by a kiss
The kiss of inspiration

The poet is awake, at last.

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CabrionDeluviant
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:35 pm


MeakoLadyMist
I have not died,
I live and thrive in this body
This shell, this costume, this masque, this hide
I live on, and the proof is this letter.
I was asleep
A deep, deep slumber
What awoke me, that secret I keep
But I yawn and stretch my numb arms
A sip of life is what I need
Life contained in my words
I wish to drink them up, I wish to feed
Asleep, I dreamt of thought
Little fairies and imps played together in my dream,
I watched them, I was amazed, I was delighted, I was caught
Falling into a black abyss
I thought I would never return to my dream
Only to be awakened softly by a kiss
The kiss of inspiration

The poet is awake, at last.


nice, i like this one
PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:36 pm


while playing in my bloody dreams, i forgot to find out how to leave.

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AstralMagick

PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:30 am


alright, I know my poems aren't great, but I haven't tried much. I know they don't flow... I'm all for criticism, so if you guys have anything to say, go for it!

The vernal time of year,
when pristine Winter snow gives way
to the encouraging warmth of day.
It collects in dips in the ground
as dropplets of nourishment wet and round.
Wildlife gather to quench their thirst
with the burly bear going first.
Next a flock of spirited swallows,
soon after a dear follows.
That one must be the mom,
for frolicking behind is a fawn.
All this I see at dawn,
the vernal time of year.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 7:51 pm


AstralMagick
alright, I know my poems aren't great, but I haven't tried much. I know they don't flow... I'm all for criticism, so if you guys have anything to say, go for it!

The vernal time of year,
when pristine Winter snow gives way
to the encouraging warmth of day.
It collects in dips in the ground
as dropplets of nourishment wet and round.
Wildlife gather to quench their thirst
with the burly bear going first.
Next a flock of spirited swallows,
soon after a dear follows.
That one must be the mom,
for frolicking behind is a fawn.
All this I see at dawn,
the vernal time of year.

I like that one. I don't know how to give critisism though...sorry.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 7:56 pm


I kiss the cheek of a dragonfly
I twirl in the arms of a desert
I glide to the hand of peaks
I fall to the feet of a leaf
Only in my dreams
You dive for the fingers of smoke
You hug the body of mist
You walk toward the lips of the wind
You shield the eyes of a sandstorm
Only in your dreams
Pluck the song of lava
Watch the dance of sparks
Hold the hiss of haze
Spin the smile of fire
All in a dream

Once upon a dream
PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 8:52 pm


MeakoLadyMist
I like that one. I don't know how to give critisism though...sorry.

well, most people are quick to give their opinions. It doesn't have to be technical or anything. If there's a certain word you think doesn't fit, a line you think should be changed, or just on a hunch something doesn't seem right. Be as picky or abstract as you want.

and You're poems are good too biggrin

AstralMagick


CabrionDeluviant
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 3:57 am


AstralMagick
alright, I know my poems aren't great, but I haven't tried much. I know they don't flow... I'm all for criticism, so if you guys have anything to say, go for it!

The vernal time of year,
when pristine Winter snow gives way
to the encouraging warmth of day.
It collects in dips in the ground
as dropplets of nourishment wet and round.
Wildlife gather to quench their thirst
with the burly bear going first.
Next a flock of spirited swallows,
soon after a dear follows.
That one must be the mom,
for frolicking behind is a fawn.
All this I see at dawn,
the vernal time of year.


very nice
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