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The Dedication Song (Better Quality than most of my audios)

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Durrtyboi

PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:29 pm


The-Dedication-Song

I need feedback other than "I need to get a mic!" and "My adlibs were way off" xd

[Verse 1]
Yo I aint going to type a text cuz my thumbs get numb
yet I dont want to call her when I talk it hurts my lungs
I dont get recognition I'm a hero thats unsung
watching TV on the sung as lyrics roll off my toungue
but I call this the dedication song for a reason
I dedicate this song to those who helped me
and gave me reason stayed true no treason
but you know the police is looking for a reason
to lock us up give me jail time no no
I dont get high I just like the smoke
Enough of the jokes thanks to those who inspired me
inspired me to write my wrongs and write this song
yall gone be singing this all night long
it bangs though uncanny like william hung
but on the real though I would like to thank my mom
but you heard it all before so just sing along

I dedicate this song to my girl Cassie aka Envii
My homies Cannon Kris MT Terrence DJ Mike Gucci
The frikitonaz the frikitonoz was good
lyteyear productions! check me out


[verse 2]
now the breakdown is the best part I think
but every verse is my favorite xo big wink
but im your favorite rappers favorite rapper
now dont blink this is for all them actors
they think they hard sitting in the lac truck
but it got a boot on it cuz they act up
so dont act tough I'll eat your for lunch
your dad jacked into a paper bag and said he was packing your lunch
ha! enjoy eat up a whole bunch of brunch
in between breakfast and lunch but before dinner
Game said summers but ima be here for more winters
I got game I bag more chickens than mrs.winners
I'm the man and I know yall dont think I'm finished
I dedicate this song to the haters that think I'm finished
I dont care what they say they buy my CD anyway
this could be the only song I would sell more than them anyday...word


I dedicate this song to the haters out there buying my CDs but still talking slick uh huh
I dedicate this to my idols that inspired me to write hot lyrics
this one is for yall verse 3!

[verse 3]
this verse is for all that helped me to achieve
my dreams and goals that I strived for
you made 1 abulm ima make 1 more
muggy forecast dont you see the storm
im the greatest and yall just hating i got support
even hurricane katrina couldn't knock me down
as long as I got homies to hold me down
the silent killer take you down without a sound
just my ipod blasting my favorites from underground
im the underdog i might just stay underground
and let my fire burn under the town
the next albulm should be called silent hill
and I'll collab with big names Khaled and cypher sounds
yall aint ready dont take em out til they gold and brown
golden brown hateers going down like yung joc
ima geoligist and the mic is my rock holla!
PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:27 pm


Pretty good actually.

Next time you make an audio give me the pella and I'll "studioize" it so we can understand you though. The adlibs were alright as far as I could hear.


Overall: 5/10
Lyrics: 9/10



Remember, lyrics arent the only thingthat makes a good track.

OG the Don


Durrtyboi

PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:55 pm


OG-takes-his-pills
Pretty good actually.

Next time you make an audio give me the pella and I'll "studioize" it so we can understand you though. The adlibs were alright as far as I could hear.


Overall: 5/10
Lyrics: 9/10



Remember, lyrics arent the only thingthat makes a good track.
I know but I'm getting my mic soon and this was one of my favorites so I plan on redoing it
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