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Lucky Lucifer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 10:37 am


1 round
No min No max
No feeding recycling or biting
Whoever accepts gets to choose who goes first.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:28 pm


I accept.
You go first.

Overlord Makairo


Lucky Lucifer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 12:11 pm


Lucky Lucifer against the most incredible mak man
I'd like to come out swinging but he deserves a back hand
Another persona? Another mask to hide behind
the evidently most pathetic existence you call your life

When you, inevtably, lose once again
wether it's to lucifer or someone of another name
please refrain from creating countless excuses
Is it that you wern't trying or are you just simply useless?

Though now I stop to think its clever in its utter
simplicity, it's literally the weirdest thing I've ever seen
Your like batman, no powers, nothing without his butler
Your Mak Man, no flow, nothing without the team
of dickriders, beating you off just the way you like it*
and vote for your whenever you happen to drop a rhyme
and the ghostwriter who makes what I can only call as 's**t'
for lack of a better word, but at least these words are mine

Heart in your mouth? I'll remove your vocal chords
use them to play the tune to which I'll win this war
Run away, flee. I won't think badly of you, I'm just
Wondering how you manage to work your legs when your clearly spineless

You follow Nas, follow Mos, now you wanna follow lucifer**
My dickriders are talented I'm afraid I have no use for ya
Though you have the support, a group of followers fearing ya
It makes no sense when I'm clearly so superior
And though you act like the shepherd, leading the lost, man you oughta
Square up to me like a man and face up to the slaughter

*I don;t have the quote but somewhere D.O.C said Tell me how you like it refering to mixing a beat or something and then Mak started talking about how he liked a girl giving him a handjob. This would have looked so much better if I had found the quote.

**
Makairo The God
Damn...Allah no more.

Call me Satan!
PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 1:01 pm


I just realized there is no max..that's what I do, baby. xd You should've went hard, Lucky. You're not dealing with a scrub. I'll respond before the day's end.

Overlord Makairo


Lucky Lucifer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 2:45 am


I wanted to try something a little different. 3nodding

Why did you accept this battle so soon after you just beat me? At first I thought you just wanted another battle but you have like 6 going on in the Callout:RH thing.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 10:47 am


Er..writer's block...sorry. scream I will complete this in due time!

Overlord Makairo


Lucky Lucifer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 10:04 am


Don't forget about this Mak.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 11:52 am


I won't, I swear.

Overlord Makairo


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:09 pm


After this many losses to a boss you'd think he'd be history,
How many times does your name appear on my list of victories?

Don't push your luck, Lucifer, I come with Kombat strategies,
A satan you're not, Mortal! I'll remove your spine like a Sub-Zero fatality.

This suburban disturbance can't possibly attempt to spit a verse,
without having to slur his words back into mommy and daddy's proper terms.

You'd think after losing to the same dude so much he'd rebound soon. (Not!)
You could be a failure and I couldn't give an F about you.

For a win, you're starving - untouchable like a ghost.
Every month you return to battle me and lose - a wack keystyle's usually your final post.

I'm the Gym Leader of Rap City - it'd be a tale if you took me,
But you couldn't get my badge if you were sellin' Girl Scout Cookies.

You stay gettin' ******** up the a** without an entrance fee,
a win for you is unexpected like teen pregnancies.

They just gotta see it's me in the topic title to have made the decision 'fo they voted,
And they lie to keep you from suicide when they say they read what you posted.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 3:52 pm


UM Lucky Lucifer um it seem u was holding back a little bit. It was goiod but didnt flow right. likealot of ur endings didnt ryme. it seem like u was just trying to diss him and for got bout that ur post to have it flowing. Mak was good. no dickriding, he just murder u wit his vere.

You could be a failure and I couldn't give an F about you

Don't push your luck, Lucifer, I come with Kombat strategies,
A satan you're not, Mortal! I'll remove your spine like a Sub-Zero fatality




my vote goes to MAK

Spadez Loc


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 4:05 pm


Um..vote!

1-0
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 6:19 pm


Lucky,some of ya stuff didn't even rhyme.And there really was nothing to scream about in your verse.

The line that did it for me:
You stay gettin' ******** up the a** without an entrance fee,
a win for you is unexpected like teen pregnancies.


vote:Mak

Shenco


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 6:48 pm


2-0

4laugh
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:51 am


Vote!

Overlord Makairo


Lucky Lucifer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 8:29 am


Nice verse Mak, you came harder than me and deserve to win smile I still stand firm in my belief that I will beat you, just might take a lil longer than I thought it would.
I'm not liking how you get away with referncing pokemon and I don't though.
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