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 Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 11:05 am
rating:T
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Fate is now on my side
Neji and Tenten just finished they're training.As Tenten picked her weapons she studied Neji looking at the sky.
Tenten:thinking about fate?
Neji:..........
Tenten surprised k Mr. Silence lets play the quiet game!
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Minutes later in Tenten's house.
Tenten:mom i'm home!
Mom:come in the kitchen,theres a guest here!
Tenten:ne? (is it lee or something?)
Tenten walked in,to find a young man, probaly older then her,sitting at the dinner table.She sat down across from him and stared at her mother.
Mom:so what do you think?Cute ne?
Tenten:I guess,but-
Mom:see Himnoku,i told you she'll like you!
Tenten:umm thats nice but why are you here?
Mom:he has agreed to
Himnoku:to marry you
Tenten sad great another 'get married and be happy' scem.I'll just make an excuse)
Tenten:don't you think i'm too young to get married?
Mom:don't be silly 16 is never too young!
Himnoru:the weddings this weekend.
Tenten suddenly stands up and pound on the table till it broke.
Tenten:AGH!!!!!
She ran to her room and escaped out the window.
Mom:she took that rather well,i thought she'be throwing weapons at us by now.
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The next day at training
Tenten throws a dozen kunais at Neji, he easily dodges them.He hits her shoulder and her stomach.Tenten harshly fell to the ground.
Neji:are you alright?
Tenten suddenly begins to cry and whispers: my life is ruined....
Neji:tenten get up.
Tenten:i bet you don't even care Neji!
Neji:what are you talking about?
She suddenly stares at him like she woke up from a bad dream.She wipes her tears.
Tenten:sorry, i just have alot on my mind.
Neji:go home.
Tenten:alright.....(i wonder if he can save me from my problem,and anyway I do love him not Himnoru)
Tenten:Neji i..i-i......
Neji:...................(what is trying to say?)
Tenten: never mind....
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um......well sorry it sucked,i'll continue it if you want.
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 4:08 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 2:29 pm
continue continue get up to chap 15. and give us the link it was preety good
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:21 pm
XNarutoxNerdX continue continue get up to chap 15. and give us the link it was preety good it doesn't have a link i made it up right there on the spot
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 9:03 pm
Fate is now on my side
chapter 2
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The next day at training every thing seemed normal.Lee and Gai were doing good guy poses and Neji starering at the birds,all except for Tenten,she was beating up some tree she used for target pratice.
Gai:ah my little femine youth flower,you seem very youthful today!
Lee:yes Gai-sensei,just look how youthful Tenten-chan is training!
Gai:LEE!!
Lee:GAI-SENSEI!!
Gai:LEE!!
Lee:GAI-SENSEI!!
They were just about to do their famous sunset-hug when....
Tenten:SHUT-UP ALREADY!!!!!
Neji:...............(moody much lately)
Inner Neji:go find out whats wrong
Neji sad shut it!)
Inner Neji:seems like your the one moody
Lee:Wahhhhh!!!!Tenten you don't have to be so mean!
Tenten:sorry Lee,i didn't mean to.Its just............
Gai:is something wrong my beautiful lotus student?
Tenten sad maybe if i run away i can-wait thats too dramatic)
Lee:Tenten-chan?
Tenten:huh?oh i'm fine
Neji:you shouldn't lie to your teamates.....
Tenten:I'm not-
Neji:and keep secrets
Tenten:me keeping secrets?I'm not the one whose always silent and never say more than a sentance!
Neji:don't change the subject Tenten!
Tenten:why are you ordering me around all of a sudden?!
Neji:i'm no-
Tenten:your the one changing the sub-
Neji:don't interupt m-
Tenten:Hey don't cut me o-
Neji:i didn't wasn't done talking!
Inner Neji:be nice,stop yelling at the poor girl just because you can't admind that u love h-
Neji:SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!
Tenten:................
Neji:Tenten i didn't mean that....
Tenten:I HATE YOU!
Inner Neji:way the go neji
Neji sad would you give a rest!)
Tenten:i'm going home!
The last thing they saw was Tenten crying and running through the woods.
Gai:Neji my youthful student,you have made our femine flower cry,so must make her smile so she can bloom once again!
Neji:hpm.............
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Tenten hates Neji
Neji is having issues with his inner and has to fix a mess he made
tell me if you want it to continue
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 8:28 am
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:22 pm
Fate is now on my side
chapter 3
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Tenten ran in her house,ran upstairs,and slamed the door.
Himnoku and Tenten's mom were discusing about the wedding.They
stopped when they saw Tenten crying and heard a slammed door up stairs.
Mom:i wonder whats wrong....
Himnoku stond up and walked up the stairs.He could hear Tenten crying.He softly knocked on the door.
Tenten:go away!!
Himnoku:plz Tenten,let me come in
Tenten:Himnoku?
He slowly opened the door,a worried look on his face.She sat up and wiped her tears away.Himnoku sat on the bed next to her and held hand hands in his.
Tenten:what are you doing?
Himnoku:trying to comfort you.Tell me what's wrong,Tenten
Tenten:its just that......
Tears started to fall from her eyes.
Himnoku:its alright
He pulls her into a tight embrace,he cups her face with his hand and lifts her head.
Tenten:why are you doing this?
Himnoku:because i love you and i can't stand see you cry
Tenten: i don't love you back and you know it,but your still...
Himnoku:here beside you.Yes i know,but snice i love you i will always be there for you.
Tenten sad sounds like my situation)
Himnoku:since you don't love me i've been trying to convince your mom to cancel the wedding
Tenten:THANK YOU,YOUR THE BEST!!!!
Himnoku:but she said you have to find a boyfriend in 2 days or we'll continue with the wedding
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sorry its short,but tell me if u want more domokun
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:59 pm
awesome fanfiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:14 am
Hinake Uchiha awesome fanfiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!! ur finally joined!! yay!!!
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:16 am
i will only continue if some1 asks me too
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 5:50 pm
tenten-(san) i will only continue if some1 asks me too ok.....plz continue!!!! lol
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 11:21 am
This is really good! whee Please continue I love Neji and Tenten pairings!!!! heart heart
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:08 am
PLZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 8:15 pm
XNarutoxNerdX PLZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she is sorta busy now...
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 6:53 am
Fate is now on my side
chapter 4
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It was 2 in the morning and Tenten couldn't sleep.
Tenten:ugh i'm going for a walk...
She carefully snuck out the back door.Walking on path Tenten began to think of ways to get a boyfriend,but not end up in a serious relationship.
Tenten:hmmm......AH HA!I got it,what if i ask Lee to pretend to be my boyfriend and then have a fake break-up.Sure that could work!Lee's a desent guy,he's sweet,caring and protective.Mom would love him!
Tenten started walking home satisfied with her plan.But a mysteriuos figure bumped into her and she fell straight on her butt.
Tenten:watch where your going!!
???:your the clumsy one,Tenten
Tenten sad wait I know that voice!!)
???:why so quiet all of a sudden?
Tenten:Neji?
-flash back-
Neji couldn't sleep;instead he'd been glaring at his ceiling.
Inner Neji:You know,if you keep doing that your gonna have a leak.
Neji sad why do you keep showing up in my life.)
Inner Neji:cause you keep messing up your life.
Neji sad well its your fault Tenten's mad at me)
Inner Neji:JUST APOLOGIZE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Neji sad what do i say or do?)
Inner Neji:first you look into her eyes and apologize,then you tell her you love her and passionly kiss her!
Neji made one of those faces of shock(O.O) and his mind went blank.
Neji:never mind i'm just going for a walk.
He quickly got dressed and went outside.
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As he was walking on the forest path he heard a voice.
???:ask Lee to be my boyfriend
Neji sad wait I know that voice!!Tenten?)
Tenten:Lee's desent,sweet,caring,and protective!
Inner Neji:see if you were like that,she'd be talking about you
Neji sad put a sock in it)
Tenten:...love him!
Inner Neji surprised uch,thats got to hurt you!
Neji tried to hear more of what Tenten was saying,but when he leaned over he tripped and bumped into Tenten.
-End of flashback-
Tenten:Neji?
Neji:hm?
Tenten:what are you doing out here?
Neji:whats it to you?
Tenten:nothing...(jerk,he still probably mad at me)
Neji:Tenten why are you wearing that?
Tenten looked down at herself to find that she was wearing her night gown.Neji
on the other hand noticed this for quite some time now and thankful that the dark
hid the light pink on his face.
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sorry i haven't updated for weeeks,but my computer broke down sweatdrop
here's more, i hope u enjoyed it
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