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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:06 pm

Chap. oNe

She was never going to go back there. Claudia thought as she ran from her house. She was under cared for, her little brother got all of the attention. What she got was all of the hate, just because of the way that she looked and the way she acted. Jamie's house was where she was going to go. But that was across town. Well, better get walking she thought. When she got there Claudia found Jamie running around the house trying to clean it.
"Hey, Claudia! Will you take out the trash?" Claudia looked at Jamie with the who the hell are you look.
"I am having a band spend the night, and I need to get the place clean."
"Why? They are a band they are have probably slept in worse."
"That is a good point but I want it to be clean."
"Soo. Who is it going to be ?"
"Some band from ..... ah the one place that you are from???"
"Ahh how can you forget were I am from. That hurts. It hurts right here." she said pointing to her heart.
"Jersey.. right...AM I RIGHT?"
"Ya, but it took you long enough!" Jamie tossed a pillow at Claudia.
"Hey, hey who was it that was preaching to me about being clean?" she said giving Jamie an odd look. Just then the doorbell rang. Claudia ran to get it before Jamie could even think of it.

Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:20 pm

Yay a new story to read! Please continue it sounds very interesting!

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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:43 pm

Hmm, I wonder which band it is? That is a toughie. hahahaha.

Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 2:52 pm

Chap. tWo (Claudia's P.O.V)

Standing there were five boys all of them looking tired. Jamie came running, pushing me out of the way she greated them. After they ate and freshed up we sat down to get to know each other a little better.
"Well.." Jamie stated looking at the five boys and one girl her bestfriend. "Who wants to start off with the talking?"
"Oh...OH pick me....PICK ME!!!" a boy with black hair with lip and nose pirsed. He was jumping like an mad man. He fell on me and hit the glasses off of an young man with mousie brown hair. There was a long point with no talking.
"Sorry Mikey." Mikey just picked up the glasses. "Sooo I am Frankie........and now someone else can go." He said it was clear that he did not like everyone staring at him.
A boy with black hair also was the next to talk. "Well I am Gerard Way. I am the lead singer."
"My turn I am Bob Bryer, the drummer.'
"Mikey Way, and"
"Hey" I yelled cutting him off "Are you and Gerard brothers?"
"Ya.'
"Oh just wondering. Sorry." my big mouth getting the best of me.
The last boy to speak had a big puff ball for hair. "Ray, and I am one of the girtist."
"Well I am Jamie. This is my house you break it you pay for it! Also the blonde is Claudia and she wil have to be leaving soon."
I looked at Jamie with my dark green eyes. "About that can I talk to you."
We walked into the hall. "Can I please stay they kicked me out agan."
"That is the third time this week. What are you doing"
"Nothing, Jarmey just broke CD player. So I told him to ******** off."
"Fine, but you are going to have to go get your stuff" A loud crash came from the kicten we went running as Jamie yell "I told you if you break it you ******** have to pay for it."
Frankie and Gerard were in the kicten sitting on the floor trying on vain to put bace together the coffee pot. Jamie looked at them.
"Okay if you do not want to pay, you will take Claudia to go get her stuff."
"Yes ma'm!" they both said at the same time jumping up.
"Now this is dangerios and one or both of you my not come back alive."
"Ha ha that is funny." Gerard said breaking down into laughter.
"No she is not kidding" I stated "my parents are messed up, so.."
"Do you want to do it or pay?" They both looked at one another. "Can we have some time to talk about it?"
"No, now or never." I looked at her I was scared to see he rlike this. She looked at me and winked, what was this some plan for her, some way to get back at them for the hell that they had put me throw my parents that is.
"Okay we will do it, but we are taking Mikey to."
"What, why me."
Frankie walked over to him and put his arm around him "You and I will be going into the house with our Claudia." So that was the plan break into my house and get my things with people that I did not know, but felt like I had for forever. We were going to get into trouble.

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Comment for more and to find out what happends!!!

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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 6:29 pm

As official first chapter helper I demand an update.

Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:51 pm

Oooh! Me likey!

(Heehee, Le Mikey. xd )

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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 2:29 pm

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As official first chapter helper I demand an update.

I am working on it. I had to go some were this weekend.

Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:33 pm

Chap. ThRee (Frankie P.O.V)

On the drive to Claudia's we were thinking of ways to get into the house. But that was easyer said than done.
"Well we could knock of the door?" Mikey said trying to lift how hopless this seemed.
"Or.......you know what" Claudia said looking around "my bedroom windows lach is broken. We could get in that way." When we got to her house I looked around it was nicer than her friends house.
"So were is that window?" I asked in a hushed voice. We walked around to the back of hte house.
"This is the one." She said pointing. Gerard walked over and pushed it open.
"So who wnats to go in first." Gerard helped Claudia in. Mikey had no problem getting in but me on the other hand, well I needed help.
"Get you s**t and lets get out...." I stated. She thold us the thing to get in her room wale she went to go get some more stuff.
"Frankie look..." Mikey said pointing to a burned cd. It had a bunch of names from bands but one stuck out more than the rest.
"Does that say what I think it says?" Mikey asked.
"Just put it in the bag, we will ask her about it later."

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Sorry so short but I will try to get more up.

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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:51 pm

Yay! Tis an update! Hooray!

Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:20 pm

MORE!

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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:11 pm

UPDATE!!!!
Wow I'm late on commenting on this.

Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 9:54 pm

Working on it.
Will have somethin gup in the next day or so.

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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 11:19 pm

Chap. FoUr (Claudia's P.O.V)

Sticking my head out the door to see if anyone was coming, I slowly creped out into the hall way. This was to easy, I just need to get some money and I would be home free. Jamie's house that is. Walking fast I got to the kiction door, this was to easy. I took about 100 bucks.Then daster struck I turned around to fast and sent a glass to it's doom. Jarmey came running.
"What are you doing here?" He asked with a smug look on his face.
"Why do you care." I said trying to get around him. But he was blocking my way. Just then as I was about to punch him in the e face, he started yelling.
"MUM DAD WERE BEING ROBED!" I took that as my chance I punched him as hard as I could in the face and when he went down I took off running just as an alarm went off. I just got in to my room as my parents came out or theres. Grabbing a bag I chucked it at Gerards face.
"We have to go now." I shouted over the blaring of the alarm. Frankie almost broke his neck trying to get out of the window because of his hight.
"What happed?" Mikey asked looking at me funny.
'I'll tell you when we get home." I stated slumping into my seat. The ride home was a quite one. And I was happy to get into Jamie's house. She was at the door waiting for us. Like a little welcoming party. A party of one seeing as the other boys had gone to bed.
"Did something happen?" Was the first thing out of her mouth.
"What no how was your time? No thanks Gerard, Frank, and Mikey for helping Claudia'?" Gerard asked.
"No she just looks funny. Did you get caught.?" She looked worried, I did not like seeing her like this.
"Yep," I said trying to keep my voice from breaking with anger. "but I don't think that they saw us. Now if you don't mind me I'm going to go to bed. Thank for the help guys, and sorry." With that I ran down the hall so that I did not have to hear the 'It's okay' or 'Don't be' I looked around the dark room wanting sleep to come I could tell that it was going to be a log night. Just as long as no one tryed to mess with me that night I was okay. I would tell them what happed in the morning.

(Greard's P.O.V.)

I wached as the girl that seem to act like 'the world was against her' as she walked down the hall.
"Sorry about..." Jamie stared but was cut off by Mikey.
"It's okay, it seems that something bad happened. It's not her falt. We understand." He seemed to be talking to his feet and not her.
"So...what did happen."
"Don't know" I said "all that I know is an alarm went off and she came running." The rest of the boys nodded. I guess that we were going ot have to wait un till the moring to whole hear the story. Just then Frank started yelling.
"Look what I found." He yelled producing a CD from one of Claudia's bags.
"Hey I found it." Mikey strated complaning but was cut off by me.
"So." I said looking it then something caught my eye, it seemed to be a CD of bands from Jersey. And there in black was our band name.
"Yep, thats on of her CDs." Jamie said looking at us as if we were mad.
"Ya, but do you know what bands are on it?" I quesioned her.
"Ya, bands from Jersey, so she is from there. And want is so great about that CD anyways."

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There you go.
Sorry that it took me so long.
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 9:45 am

YES!!!!!!!!! TIS AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!

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