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 Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 7:14 pm
I'm going to post a dragon poem I wrote a while back while I was bored in English class. Feel free to post feedback and/or your own poems!
(P.S - I was only 14 when I wrote this! =P)
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 7:38 pm
Dragon Bloodlust
I spread out my large, leathery wings
My tail thrashing wildly as I turn my head to the darkened sky.
I ponder the wonders nightfall brings
As I lay listening, waiting for the wolves cry.
I dive off the mountain top and take flight.
My scales shining with radience and power
Against the rays of a full moon's light.
At the sight of me, all the creatures cower.
I fly over the city,
Such a beautiful sight.
But I think, "What a pity,
I shall be ruining their night!"
As I circled, I took in a deep breath
And I let out a deafening roar.
Letting all below know, their death
Will come without flaw!
I fold my wings and plummet to the ground.
The Elves see me coming and all dash about,
And the sound of their screams make my blood pound!
So I take another breath, deep through my snout.
I shook my head and blew out a flame.
The volcanic heat burnt all in its path
while the souls of the Elves screamed "You, we will blame!".
The words echoing in my ear, with their evil laugh.
As the moon hung low, I spread my wings and took flight.
I looked back to their city, now alight
With the wrath of my angry, burning flame..
And so I turned away and my always building bloodlust was, for now, tame.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 7:49 pm
great poem!! eek i wish i could write poetry... emo
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:22 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 7:21 am
How do I get inspired? Hmmm..
Well, most of the times it just comes to my mind and I work from my pure ideas. Other times I am inspired by certain events or pictures.
This one was inspired by a drawing I had done not long before it.. If I stilll had it, I'de post it for you all to see.. but unfortunatly I gave it to a good friend of mine whom I was visiting as a presant.. and I haven't seen him since *sniffles*
Well, I'm not much of a poet anyway. But I have a natural touch for art and poetry is art ^^
Hehe
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 10:20 pm
i really like writing poems. heres one that i just made up right now.
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The shadowy night creeps closer, closer,
And the serpent watches with glowing eyes
For the time when she can roam free again
Against the star-covered nightly skies.
Fire dances in her fiery being
As she anticipates her nightly freeing
From her cave, where she hides,
Away from human’s prying eyes.
The day falls. The dark has arrived.
The serpent stretches, looks, and sighs.
Suddenly she leaps onto the wind
And her silver wings flap and her mouth grins.
No longer is she a tired prisoner
As she flies along, feeling her
Inner fire leap as her freedom grows
And she lets out the flame in a fiery rose.
The night creeps along as the dragon dances
Across the sky in loops and lances.
Then the night turns pink as dawn comes along
To grace the day in light and birdsong.
The silver dragon flies back home
To the cave, where she makes her lone
Bed of gold, rings and jewels
To sleep upon. She thinks and feels.
As she lowers her head, the dragon hums,
Regretful that the dawn must come.
She falls asleep, just to wait for
The next night, to play as before.
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do u like it? and im only 11! redface
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 1:54 pm
I wrote this while thinking of a song for my Ocardian Chronicles story. I liked it.
"The Last Dragon"
The moon doth shine on scales so bright
As this great beast takes to flight
A roar to shake the mountain peaks
Beautiful treasure is what he seeks
His talons rake the land so fair
His wings beat rents in the air
As many try to put him down
His eyes lament of what he has found
Bleached bones of those he once knew
Impaled and killed by a knightly crew
His angry blast, of smoky flame
We all know who is to blame
It does no good, they still come
As whizzing spears leave a throbbing hum
As they bury themselves so deep
Into a broken heart so sweet
He sighs as he falls to the ground
A cheering chrous goes all around
For man has raised a hearty flagon
To the death of the very last dragon.
It is sad, and yet...
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 9:40 pm
You've all written really good poems! biggrin I wrote this when I was only 11, too! xd
Silver Moon
Dragons, dragons,
Fill up the sky.
Silver dragons
With amber eyes.
Wings like water,
Silent as cats.
You're one with the wind.
You're big silver bats.
The sky is your limit.
I'm mystefied.
Beware the Eye of the Moon.
Teeth so sharp, yet heart so great.
Cry to the sky like a loon.
Hearts of gold
and scales of silver.
Roar so great,
make mountains quiver.
Dragons, dragons,
fill up the ky.
With bright blue flames,
I say goodbye...
Well, what do ya' think? biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 7:17 pm
everybody's pretty good!(of course) i like writing poems, as i said before, so here's a couple more whee (hey it rhymes!)
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(well, actually my friend wrote this one with my help sweatdrop )
Swift and silent
as a dragon
through the air
we fly,
forever we shall
roam the sky
until the day
we die.
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(this one i wrote blaugh )
A feral roar rips through the dark
And echoes within the halls.
Followed by a grisly bark
And a rattle of chains and bars.
Two blood red eyes peer at the locked door
Hoping for release.
A fiery breath spurts out for
The dragon aches for a feast
Made of the humans that have trapped it
And chained it without remorse.
It snarls with teeth that would rip
That door open with force.
A rusty chain suddenly snaps
As the dragon thrashes with hunger.
Its eyes widen, and the beast taps
The bars. Its grin becomes longer.
The cage rips apart! The beast is freed!
No longer trapped within,
The beast bounds out, rips the door without heed,
And sets out with a big grin
To ensure “liberty”
And “fairness”
To the doomed humans within.
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During a dragon's day
Or a dragon's night,
Let us be within dragon's sight
Whether it is day
Or it is night,
Let us always reunite.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:52 pm
All great poems! I myself am partial to Haikus, short, sweet, and to the point 3nodding
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Now if I could only find some.....I mean I gotta write about tree a week yet I can never find where I put them! Ugh, sweatdrop I'll get back to y'all sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:07 pm
HEY! this one's NOT MINE! But I love it!
Dragons
Beneath soft looks
the evil burns,
And slowly round the
old wheel turns.
The same mistakes
the same old pride,
The priceless armor
cast aside
The secret enemy is
here.
It hides in darkness
fools beware!
For day by day its
power grows
And when at last its
face it shows,
Then past and
present tales will meet
The evil circle is
complete
its...kinda...about dragons, I guess. The title says it is!
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:22 pm
Here's a Hiaku I made for this post. Came up with it in about 2 minutes. Tell me what you think:
Flying through the mist.
On wings made of silky gold.
Here be the dragons.
Short and a little sucky but I think it works for this. I'm not good at poems anyway.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:18 pm
I write many poems but none of them are about dragons, yet. Most of them are about flying
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 2:24 pm
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