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 Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:56 pm
I drew and coloured this, but the character itself is copyright to Taisia Vare. <.< She's a succubus-angel-hunter thinger, so that's why her shirt it so thin. -__- Anyways, tell me what you think! <3
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:09 pm
I like it, it's nice. The feet and shading could be better though.
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:19 pm
What [Elven King] said.
And you get points for:
1. not making the wings look like circles with points coming of as mock feathers.
2. Showing both hands and not taking the half assed route by hiding them behind her.
3.Highlighting her hair
4.Giving her knees!
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:57 pm
It's really good! Nice body and coloring. I like the eyes, and the wings are cool ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:20 am
[Elven_King] I like it, it's nice. The feet and shading could be better though. OH yeah. >< The boots looked a heckofa lot nicer when they were on paper. They were supposed to be shiny and leatherish, but they turned out looking like felt. I do need to work on my shading, it's not that great. Thank you for your comments!
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:21 am
Child of Carnage What [Elven King] said. And you get points for: 1. not making the wings look like circles with points coming of as mock feathers. 2. Showing both hands and not taking the half assed route by hiding them behind her. 3.Highlighting her hair 4.Giving her knees! xD Thank you kindly. @__@ I'm not that good at hands, so they turned out a little twiggy. D: People don't give their art knees?Thank you for your comments! mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:23 am
GrimGirl It's really good! Nice body and coloring. I like the eyes, and the wings are cool ^_^ Thanks! mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:21 pm
xD I'm actually happy some people like my art. It was originally in pencil, so it took me a long time. >_<
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 8:16 am
Hm...it's not the best, but it certainly shows promise.
Kudos on using photoshop without a tablet, BTW.
Luv ya.
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 3:00 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 2:49 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 6:15 pm
Good coloring, good shading, and good drawing.
So far, 10/10.
But, there are a few spots where the lines aren't really outlining it very well.. but mostly it is outlined.
9.5/10.
Though, since you didn't use a tablet, I'm bumping it back up to 100% good.
Since, when I draw on paper and scan it, I can never figure out how to shade as good as you. D:
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:47 pm
Rainbow Cotton Candy Kid Good coloring, good shading, and good drawing. So far, 10/10. But, there are a few spots where the lines aren't really outlining it very well.. but mostly it is outlined. 9.5/10. Though, since you didn't use a tablet, I'm bumping it back up to 100% good. Since, when I draw on paper and scan it, I can never figure out how to shade as good as you. D: @_@ Gosh yes...that outlining is awfule. It was originally a pencil sketch, so I had to spend a lot of time darkening it and smoothing it, but it still ended up chalky. xD xD I bet you can. It just takes a lot of time. D: This took me maybe...four or five hours to colour? And I still didn't get the boots right. >_x
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 4:54 pm
Bah, it can be difficult.
But what do I know, I use markers.
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 5:26 pm
Much potential. :'D
The linework is okay. Somewhat sketchy in some parts, but this is easily helped with practice and experience. C:
Wings are good that they actually look like wings! But remember that there are many other feathers other than those at the bottom. Try to look at other artist's wings and see how they layer them and such. It takes some time to get the hang of.
YES! A light source, omigoodness. <3 Shading should include more shadows and knowledge of lighting. You can help that by observing how light falls on people everyday. Or you can look pictures and see how light source placement and everything affects the shadows. :'D
Overall, I find this is a good piece with a lot of potential. Keep drawing~ <3333
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