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Fukitsu-na

PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 4:28 pm


Okay, I hope you all don't mind me making a topic for this! I don't know if this should just be a topic for everyine to post their fics or not, but do please give me your opnion on what I wrote here. (Please excuse my fangirlshness in it as well...)

Scene: A lounging room at Budehuc. Albert is currently skinning a live rabbit, while Yuber is nibbling away at his nails.

Albert: Well, if this plan works, I'm moving on to baby seals.
Yuber: Hehe. Look at the little thing squirm, and try to get away from you. I love to see it in pain. Maybe you oughta try this on Sasari some time.
Albert: Hahahaha... Yeah yeah. Wait a minute
Yuber: What?
Albert: Who's going to take care of this thing?I don't want too.
Yuber: Think of someone you know who loves animals.
Albert: ...
Yuber: ...
Albert: I can only think of two who might do it. Yun and Sasari. Who do you think is more likely to do it, Yun, or Sasari?
Yuber: Hmm... I think Sasari.

> Albert and Yuber get up, and walk around, looking for Sasari. They bump into Dios<

Albert&Dios: Have you seen Sasari?
Yuber: Huh? You don't know?
Dios: No. I've looked all over for him, but I can't find him! Say, since we're both looking for him, why don't we go looking together?
Yuber: No way, no how.

> Yuber tosses Dios into a the wall of the Trade shop. Albert gives Yuber a high-five.<

Scene: Yaza Plains. Sasari and Mike are out doing some serious training.

Albert: There you are Sasari!
Sasari: Uh, yeah. Were you looking for me?

> Yuber grabs the rabbit and tosses it at Sasari.<

Yuber: Take care of it. Or else. *Evil Grin*
Sasari: You can't make me.
Yuber: Wanna bet?
Sasari: LUC! HELP! YUBER'S BEING MEAN AGAIN!

>As Luc and Sarah teleport in, Albert thinks to himself, "Oh no. Not again..."

Luc: What's going on here? Yuber, you know I hate it when this kid starts whining.
Sasari: I am NOT a kid!
Yuber: Hehe. Sure. Anyway, all I did was ask this little steam engine to take care of this rabbit.
Sasari: That's not true! He threatened to hurt me if I didn't!
Luc: Is this true, Albert? Mike?
Mike: Ye-

> Mike starts to say yes, but stops suddenly once he notices the Yuber glaring at him.<

Mike: No.

> Luc looks behind him to see if Yuber was making some sort of sign, but he looks natuaral.<

Albert: Well, it's hard for me to say. If asking without saying please is a threat, then yes. If that is a threat, then yes, Yuber threatened Sasari.
Luc: Hmm...
Sasari: You guys are so mean!
Sarah: Luc, lets go already. Please?
Luc: You're right. K, Albert, Yuber, don't be so mean to my brat of a little sister, er, um... brother.

> Luc and Sarah " mysteriously" leave.<

Sasari: Ohhhhhhh...
Yuber: As I was saying, take care of it. Or else.
Sasari: And as I was-
Mike: Um, Sasari? I suggest not picking fights with him.
Albert: Well, I must be going now. I promised Yun I'd try to make peace with her sisters.
Yuber: And I've got to go help Jeane.
Sasari: What I am supposed to do about this rabbit?
Albert: Care for it! What else?
Yuber: Yeah. Besides, I thought all little girls liked caring for things.

> Albert and Yuber do a high-five as they leave, leaving Sasari in a spiteful mood.<

Fin!
PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 4:43 pm


'Woah, I liked it haha, made me laugh a few times. Even if I havent played the third suikoden, it was enjoyable on its own. Though now it kinda makes me wanna know who all these people are... sweatdrop

Kethean


Fukitsu-na

PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 7:15 pm


Really? Thanx! For a moment there, I thought somepeople would... Disagree with my attitude towards All the characters. Thanx! That makes me feel good.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 8:32 pm


I like it, but I'm not a fan of one-shot fics. It always make me crave for more (ask Eternallylost)

Keollyn

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