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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 4:28 pm
Okay, I hope you all don't mind me making a topic for this! I don't know if this should just be a topic for everyine to post their fics or not, but do please give me your opnion on what I wrote here. (Please excuse my fangirlshness in it as well...)
Scene: A lounging room at Budehuc. Albert is currently skinning a live rabbit, while Yuber is nibbling away at his nails.
Albert: Well, if this plan works, I'm moving on to baby seals. Yuber: Hehe. Look at the little thing squirm, and try to get away from you. I love to see it in pain. Maybe you oughta try this on Sasari some time. Albert: Hahahaha... Yeah yeah. Wait a minute Yuber: What? Albert: Who's going to take care of this thing?I don't want too. Yuber: Think of someone you know who loves animals. Albert: ... Yuber: ... Albert: I can only think of two who might do it. Yun and Sasari. Who do you think is more likely to do it, Yun, or Sasari? Yuber: Hmm... I think Sasari.
> Albert and Yuber get up, and walk around, looking for Sasari. They bump into Dios<
Albert&Dios: Have you seen Sasari? Yuber: Huh? You don't know? Dios: No. I've looked all over for him, but I can't find him! Say, since we're both looking for him, why don't we go looking together? Yuber: No way, no how.
> Yuber tosses Dios into a the wall of the Trade shop. Albert gives Yuber a high-five.<
Scene: Yaza Plains. Sasari and Mike are out doing some serious training.
Albert: There you are Sasari! Sasari: Uh, yeah. Were you looking for me?
> Yuber grabs the rabbit and tosses it at Sasari.<
Yuber: Take care of it. Or else. *Evil Grin* Sasari: You can't make me. Yuber: Wanna bet? Sasari: LUC! HELP! YUBER'S BEING MEAN AGAIN!
>As Luc and Sarah teleport in, Albert thinks to himself, "Oh no. Not again..."
Luc: What's going on here? Yuber, you know I hate it when this kid starts whining. Sasari: I am NOT a kid! Yuber: Hehe. Sure. Anyway, all I did was ask this little steam engine to take care of this rabbit. Sasari: That's not true! He threatened to hurt me if I didn't! Luc: Is this true, Albert? Mike? Mike: Ye-
> Mike starts to say yes, but stops suddenly once he notices the Yuber glaring at him.<
Mike: No.
> Luc looks behind him to see if Yuber was making some sort of sign, but he looks natuaral.<
Albert: Well, it's hard for me to say. If asking without saying please is a threat, then yes. If that is a threat, then yes, Yuber threatened Sasari. Luc: Hmm... Sasari: You guys are so mean! Sarah: Luc, lets go already. Please? Luc: You're right. K, Albert, Yuber, don't be so mean to my brat of a little sister, er, um... brother.
> Luc and Sarah " mysteriously" leave.<
Sasari: Ohhhhhhh... Yuber: As I was saying, take care of it. Or else. Sasari: And as I was- Mike: Um, Sasari? I suggest not picking fights with him. Albert: Well, I must be going now. I promised Yun I'd try to make peace with her sisters. Yuber: And I've got to go help Jeane. Sasari: What I am supposed to do about this rabbit? Albert: Care for it! What else? Yuber: Yeah. Besides, I thought all little girls liked caring for things.
> Albert and Yuber do a high-five as they leave, leaving Sasari in a spiteful mood.<
Fin!
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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 4:43 pm
'Woah, I liked it haha, made me laugh a few times. Even if I havent played the third suikoden, it was enjoyable on its own. Though now it kinda makes me wanna know who all these people are... sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 7:15 pm
Really? Thanx! For a moment there, I thought somepeople would... Disagree with my attitude towards All the characters. Thanx! That makes me feel good.
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 8:32 pm
I like it, but I'm not a fan of one-shot fics. It always make me crave for more (ask Eternallylost)
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