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 Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 2:30 pm
 i haven't been here in a long time. but here we go. well, this is the first actual full ink pic i drew. a little constructive criticism would be loved deeply and in muchness. ^_^ but i have a deep sensitivity for my pics, so please don't be too harsh.i had to resize it, so if it looks a little blocky, sorry.
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 1:23 pm
oh, wow, that is really cool!
i can't see anything wrong with this at all ... nice work on the ink shading, and a very nice job overall ...
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 3:35 am
Watch the neck and shoulders. The neck should go into the shoulder, and the shoulders should be teh same height without changing the neck. How to explain that more clearly...The neck should go into the shoulder, and the shoulder should come out above where the neck ends.
The neck is placed wrong. It sould be more towards the chin, and thicker to make him look tougher(I'm taking him as a fighter?).
Also, it looks unevenly shaded. When you shade in one spot, you have to od the entire thing, or else it looks 2.5D and unfinished. Yes, 2.5D. One problem also is that, you should not do the 'you can see my eyebrow and eye perfectly under my hair" thing, especially if it's shaded. It makes it even more confusing to the looker's eye, and a lot less impressive. On the right eye(from where you are sitting reading this. The smaller one) it looks like the eye was peeled off the face and onto the hair because you used this style.
I like the eyes in general, you did them very well at that viewpoint. The features on the face are also well done.
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 4:24 am
boo_moo Watch the neck and shoulders. The neck should go into the shoulder, and the shoulders should be teh same height without changing the neck. How to explain that more clearly...The neck should go into the shoulder, and the shoulder should come out above where the neck ends. The neck is placed wrong. It sould be more towards the chin, and thicker to make him look tougher(I'm taking him as a fighter?). Also, it looks unevenly shaded. When you shade in one spot, you have to od the entire thing, or else it looks 2.5D and unfinished. Yes, 2.5D. One problem also is that, you should not do the 'you can see my eyebrow and eye perfectly under my hair" thing, especially if it's shaded. It makes it even more confusing to the looker's eye, and a lot less impressive. On the right eye(from where you are sitting reading this. The smaller one) it looks like the eye was peeled off the face and onto the hair because you used this style. I like the eyes in general, you did them very well at that viewpoint. The features on the face are also well done. thanks. but like i said, this was my first ink dawing, so i knew i had some flaws. thanks for pointing some of them out.
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