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Des_512

Lonely Gekko

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 8:30 am


Here's the opening to a story I'm trying to write 'Nothing, Nothing at all' is the title. Aneast knows why I picked that title mrgreen Well here it is, it's short and vague very vague. Also please note I have very bad spelling and grammer, so please point out any mistakes biggrin

He floated in the endless darkness for hours with nothing to do but listen to his own endless thoughts. When all his hope was gone when nothing meant anything a heavenly voice called out to him as a warm light filled his entire body. “You are one who lives his life surrounded by darkness and loneliness. You're one who has never given in to the nothing no matter how hard that it tries.” These kind words filled him with light as the loneliness encasing his heart began to lift. “You’re the only one who can save us.”

He tried to reach out and grab the light. He wanted to say I want to save you, but the words never made it to his mouth. The light began too fade away back into the darkness. He scrambled to grab the light, but he just remained floating in the darkness in the same place he always did never moving no matter how hard he tried. “You…. must…save….us….” The voice said calmly as the light faded. He gave one last try he put all his heart into one last grab. He felt the darkness break as he reached out and grabbed the light. He thought to himself. I finally did it.

As he looked down into the light it morphed green and had digital numbers inside it. This puzzled him for a moment until he realized he had woken up and was now holding his alarm clock.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 8:39 am


That was really cool but funny to! rofl

WereCat636


Des_512

Lonely Gekko

PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 12:33 pm


lol thanks, it was gonna be that start of entire story but.....I just haven't felt like it xp
PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:38 am


Lazy a**....but that is a good start for a story.


kappi papi


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Des_512

Lonely Gekko

PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:02 pm


eek how dare you call me Lazy!.....I'm not....ok I am so am ******** lazy
PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 2:56 pm


Lol, it's ok, we all have our lazy moments.


kappi papi


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Zero Firatarshar

PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:20 pm


Somtimes I think that life is my lazy moment. Great beginning though.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 2:29 pm


I'm very excited to read the rest.

ajalele

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