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I...I kinda have a poem...

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BiOhAzArDpSyCo
Crew

PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 2:15 pm


It's not that good but its a poem....

This is a story(In this case a poem/story...thing...O.o) of something good gone bad, over being taken for ranted and not respected as the person she was. An Angel...

An angel's Fury

Her wings used to be white as snow,
Her head hung low.
The wings once white are now black as coal,
Killing was her goal.
The thing she once loved,
She pushed aside and shoved.
Her halo now won't shine,
The only sound she heard was an annoying whine.
The angel embracing her dark magci within her,
Goodness now a blur.
The humans down below shall fear,
An angel scorn can pay you dear.
Disrepected and pushed around,
Taken for granted and confound.
She takes their lives now,
the good is gone, the dark shall plow.
Killing their universe in her hand,
Their bones crushed to dust like sand.
Once was good is no more,
Left on earth is all just gore.

Yeah...and thats it...for now....Heh heh heh... sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:09 pm


;_;
But...but my duck lives on Earth...(j/k)
I like it, and when it's a 'dark' poem, it makes it more interesting.

[.Squirrely.]


BiOhAzArDpSyCo
Crew

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:18 pm


Yeah I had to make it for english for this huge giant portfolio project that was kinda due today but I never finished sweatdrop Heh heh heh...But yeah we had to pick a topic and find poems on it, then analyze the poems, write our own origional writings (Short story, poems, journal entries etc...) analyze them, find newspaper atricals, analyze them, make a table of content, a conclusion, a cover, and a intro.....Yeah my topic is/was the elements like fire water and earth and air...etc. This is about how an element can change from light to dark...w/ the elements light and dark ^^
PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:21 pm


I sorta had to do that a couple months ago,
but it was just making up poems, not looking for them in newspapers.
XD
But I think you did a great job.

[.Squirrely.]


BiOhAzArDpSyCo
Crew

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 4:29 pm


Thanxs ^^
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